Originally posted by: Haniibee
OMG! It was dhamakedaar!
I read all the parts in one go and I must say I am extremely impressed with your work!I love the way you put some action into it but did not make it all fighting and violence.I LOVE THE WAY YOU PORTRAYED SHYAAM!I hate him even more now because of this FF!Thanks a lot for the PM!Update soon!
Thank you so much Hanibee. I'm glad that you like my writing, I truly appreciate your kind comments. Yes, you are right in your observation, there is action there but not too much violence. I did put a lot of thinking about what I wanted to do with Shyam's character and I am gratified that you like the way he has turned out. And I am also glad that I am able to make you hate him more :-) Yes, I will update soon.
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