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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sanyogitaprc

superb update dear 😊...

PriNi scenes r awesome...& nandini jealous šŸ˜†...nice...enjoyed it...

but that esha 😔...i just hate her...i hope all her plans will backfire & bring PriNi closer šŸ˜‰...

& prithvi keeps his emotions deeply buried...only when he his with nandini, he doesn't hide himself behind some mask & appear without any reservations...they r truly the soulmates 😊...

but feeling bad for prithvi...he loves her too much...hope nandini will remember everything soon...

plz update soon...waiting...

thanks for your lovely comments dear...will surely update soon...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 37


Rajveer "ok if you want to stay some more days here...its alright...i have an important meeting in Delhi and I have planned to meet Prithvi"

Renuka "how many days will you stay in Delhi??"

Rajveer "well just one day as I have my important business deal here on Monday...and after that we both can leave together for Delhi"

Renuka "ok...i thought I will stay with my sister just few more days"

Rajveer "that's alright"



Next Day...

Prithvi's phone was ringing " hello Dad"

Rajveer "hello Prithvi, can I meet you today"

Prithvi "you don't have to ask Dad, please come"

Rajveer "i won't have much time, can I see you at Taj, I have a business meeting and I would like you to attend as well...after that we can have lunch together"

Prithvi "alright I will come"


Prithvi went upstairs to change and saw Nandini sleeping...he smiled and caressed her forehead...

he informed Kamla to take care of Nandini as he will be back within few hours.

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After some time...

Nandini "hi Kamla, where is Prithvi?"
Kamla "Prithvi sir had to go for an important meeting, he will be back by evening"
Nandini "alright, thanks"

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Rajveer "coffee??"

Prithvi "no thanks Dad...i am full"

Rajveer "well i came here to talk something important Prithvi, i know you like a girl and suddenly you said you are married, well can i please hear the complete story from your side"

Prithvi "Dad what ever i said it was almost true"

Rajveer looked into Prithvi's eyes and smiled "Prithvi i am your Father and i know there are lots of things hidden inside you, i won't force you but i will be happy if you tell me everything"

Prtihvi thought for a while. Rajveer looked at him while sipping his coffee...

Prithvi "Dad its a long story...about three years ago when i was in college it was my third year...i still remember it was new session in February...that was the first day when i saw her...for a second i closed my eyes to come out of the dream...she instantly made place in my heart, i thought of going away from her...but every time she came more closer to me...i started liking her...she was the first girl whom i loved...one day i lost control and did what i shouldn't have done...she went missing...i...i searched all over the place..."

Rajveer was carefully listening to his Son...Prithvi continued while looking outside the window and not facing his Dad...

"and when i found her, she was lying in a pool of blood...she was saved somehow...but she lost her memory...i didn't had any choice...i had to tell Mom and everyone that she's my wife..."

Rajveer got up from his seat and looked at Prithvi...he understood his Son's situation...he saw Prithvi's moist eyes for the first time in his life and he could imagine how much he must have been in love with her.

"Prithvi...what's her name?" Rajveer asked

Prithvi "Nandini"

Rajveer "i feel so sorry for Nandini, she has really suffered a lot...and i am proud of you Prithvi...you kept all your promises...don't worry she will soon remember everything"

Prithvi "thanks Dad"

Rajveer "did you consult a doctor...i mean about her memory"

Prithvi "yes she's having her medicines regularly..."

Rajveer "Prithvi you must always support her and one more thing don't tell your Mother that you did not marry Nandini..."

Prithvi "hmmm..."

Rajveer "if you want you can marry her now"

Prithvi "no Dad, i will wait until she remember's everything...i don't know how will she react, she must have felt bad...i have to wait"

Rajveer "alright Prithvi...always remember i am with you... "

Prithvi "Thanks Dad"

Rajveer left after saying goodbye to Prithvi...

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Nandini "i am so bored...now give me that rolling pin...i will make chapatis"

Kamla " no Nandini madam, please don't do this, if Prithvi Sir finds you in the kitchen he will fire me"

Nandini "don't worry...just tell me how you make them round"

Kamla was scared while she told Nandini...

Suddenly the door bell rang...
Kamla "please madam it must be Prithvi Sir..."

Nandini "ok wait...i will open the door"

Nandini went to open the door...

Prithvi "why did you opened the door, where are the servants gone??"

Prithvi saw flour on her forehead "what's that??"

Nandini "nothing, i was making chapatis for you"

Prithvi shocked "what??? chapatis...for me???...who told you to work...where is Kamla?"

Nandini "please don't be so loud...i was feeling bored...there's nothing bad in making food"

Prithvi went upstairs without saying anything...

Nandini washed her hands and went in his room. "are you annoyed at me?"

Prithvi while working on his laptop "no i am fine"

Nandini "i was feeling so bored...i want to do something"

Prithvi looked up at her... and started working again...

Nandini thought something "ouch...my back"

Prithvi "what happened??"

Nandini "nothing my back is itching and my hand cant reach to scratch"

Prithvi gazed at her...

Nandini "stop staring..please scratch my back"

Prithvi got up and walked towards her ...he touched her back lightly...she felt warm...and hugged him tightly...
Prithvi was surprised at her sudden reaction...and hugged her very lightly...
Nandini gazed at him...then came closer and kissed him on the cheek... he looked at her... "Nandini"

Nandini "i felt like kissing you...i...i" and kissed his lips ... Prithvi smiled and pulled back...

Nandini "why are you smiling???"

Prithvi came closer and cupped her face in his hands...and forced her to look into his eyes... he came very close to her lips... "you said it wasn't easy to kiss you" she nervously looked at him and blushed... he came closer and placed his lips on hers...Nandini closed her eyes as if she was melting away...his strong hands gripped her waist and pulled her more closer to his body...he lifted up and saw her blushed cheeks...he bent down and fiercely kissed her lovely lips...Nandini's arms were around his neck...it was painful...she tried to pull back but she couldn't in front of his force...he was desperate to kiss her...

After a very long time...both were out of breath when Prithvi pulled back...

He could see Nandini's dreamy and passionate eyes for him... again he pulled her towards himself and lifted her on the bed...slowly he came towards her...kissed on her forehead...slowly very gently he kissed her pink cheeks... he lay himself on top of her and entwined his hands with her hands...he kissed her lips again...then kissed her neck...he stopped and looked at her...then lay on her side and embraced her tightly...

Nandini "Prithvi...i don't feel strange anymore"

Prithvi kissed her hand while she was lying next to him with her head on his strong arm...

Prithvi "i know..."

Nandini "then why did you stop??"

Prithvi "i want you to recover completely"

Nandini "but I am fine...what's happened with me?"

Prithvi kissed her forehead...and caressed her cheeks... "you are still physically weak...and I don't want to hurt you...i can wait"

Nandini hugged him tightly '...



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Edited by Dhanvi83 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dear
this was awesome
superb
loved rajveer n prithvi scene
rajveer is such a understanding father
prithvi n nandani were sweet
prithvi is so caring
loved the part
waiting 4 da next part
cont soon
thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Simran_14

hey dear

this was awesome
superb
loved rajveer n prithvi scene
rajveer is such a understanding father
prithvi n nandani were sweet
prithvi is so caring
loved the part
waiting 4 da next part
cont soon
thnx 4 da pm

Hi Sim...thanks a lot sweetie...😃 it feels so good when i get to read the review...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update dear 😃 both prithvi nd rajveer r sensible enough...at least prithvi's dad is supporting him...not lyk that renuka aunty 🤢 ..so finally nandini's awkwardness is gone nd she was missing prithvi šŸ˜‰hope she gets fine soon.then pri can marry his wild nandu šŸ˜†nd make luv 10 tyms a day šŸ˜†waiting 4 next ud 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: prahelika

Nice update dear 😃 both prithvi nd rajveer r sensible enough...at least prithvi's dad is supporting him...not lyk that renuka aunty 🤢 ..so finally nandini's awkwardness is gone nd she was missing prithvi šŸ˜‰hope she gets fine soon.then pri can marry his wild nandu šŸ˜†nd make luv 10 tyms a day šŸ˜†waiting 4 next ud 😊

Thanks Dear...😃 yes lets see may she gets alright soon...😊 will update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update dear ..!!!
i liked Prithvi very much in this update ...
he is so caring and understanding towards nandini😳😳..
hope to c happy moments again in their life 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...šŸ‘
hmmm...so prithvi told everything to his father...n rajveer is such a understanding person...lucky prithvi...😊
n nandani...u r saying that kissing u is not so easy...so what happen now...šŸ˜†
n prithvi is so loving n caring...😊
''...Prithvi kissed her forehead...and caressed her cheeks... "you are still physically weak...and I don't want to hurt you...i can wait"...
these lines...i just luv them...i m so happy...šŸ˜›
waiting for next...
update soon...
luv u...šŸ˜›
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Posted: 13 years ago
😊 awesome update dear...

prithvi's dad is so understanding & supporting 😊...& he told prithvi not to tell his mother about his marriage šŸ˜†...

& PriNi...omg...so romantic 😳...loved it...

well looking forward to see what esha & renuka will do & how will PriNi face the situations...

plz plz update soon...


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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for late commenting dear... my college fest is going to start ,so i was a little busy
but both the updates are awesome...
prithvis dad is so understanding...so the prithvi is...
eagerly waiting for the next one
and congrates for the new ff...ā­ļø
i just read it nd i loved it...
u r an awesome writer...
luv u...😊😊

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