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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

That ws so sweet part...
Loved it a lot..
Cont...

thanks 4 such asweet comment
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Hayeee...such a sweet part that's why I love to read this FF...itne sweet Mayur moments hote hai isme😳 cont soon sweety😍

itne sweet bhi nhi hote
inhe aap padh ke n comment kr ke sweet banate ho...
😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

just read the whole update n loved it
nice story .
thx for the pm

u liked it..
thank a tonn😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
THANKS 4 COMMENTING...
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks a lott eshi...
keep commenting😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
will try to update soon..
sryy 4 the wait as i met with an accident... so will be able to update after 2-3 days
sorry 4 the wait.
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update.Plz send me pm when u next update.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
plz take care of your self..


and congratulations...

for your result
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Posted: 13 years ago

Here is the new update...

Mayank went to his office n got busy in his work..bt instead of it keep thinking about his last night's behaviour with nupur n was feeling regret...

Whereas nupur was determined that she won't talk to him at any cost...

She decided to go to mall to shop 4 her home as she was feeling lonely at her house n moreover Gunjan to visited her mom that day...

Nupur thought ek kaam karti huin mayank ko call kr ke bata deti huin warna bekaar mein wo tensed ho jayega.. she took mobile in her hand n was about to call when she thought no i wont call him ..kya pata use phir bura laga toh...eemmm ek msg kar deti huin..hmm yeh thik hai...

To mr Sharma...

As i m feeling bored at home so going to paradise mall to buy some things 4 home.. i m going by auto as the car is with u...so kindly don't get tensed for me... i will be back soon ( hopefully before u come to home n will not wait for u ...)

Nupur...

Mayank was busy with 1 of his call when suddenly his cell buzzed out of sudden..he after finishing his work received the msg .n it was from nupur ..he read the entire msg n closed his eyes... sorry nupur ..i m really very sorry..meri wajah se u r still so upset..i didn't mean to hurt u...pata nhi mujhe kya ho gya tha..i knw my feelings r chancing towards u n thus i don't want u feel weird..n leave me i can't afford this...

Sorry...

Sighhh...

But pakka today i will repent my mistake...n i'll tell u , how special u r to me..n u hv all right on me...n today i will give u the bestest suprise of our life n after that we will go out 4 dinner n then ur favourait long drive...i still remember how much u love all this..

Nupur went to the paradise mall...she bought a lot of things 4 her new house...but was missing mayank a lot..she remembered the days when they both go out for shopping n mayank always make faces n complaints...but then too she everytime convince him to shop with her...

But now everything is changed, now mayank don't have time for her..n something pierced hard inside her heart... n she started shopping...

Mayank called her secretary inside

Jenny please do me a favour , just cancel all my meetings 4 today. Sir anything important today?

Emm yeah sort of..today i m going to suprise my wife with a nic dinner n long drive as she was upset from me as being busy in work these days...

Ohh gud sir have fun...do enjoy u n mam..

Yes we will.. he said n took a leave 4m there..

Nupur was engrossed in buying things n was going through many shops when she came across a men's wear shop..

They were having a huge collection of men's shirt. Nupur thought buying one 4 mayank..bt then she thought agar wo bura manega toh? Agar use pasand na aaya toh? But then she kept aside all second thought in her mind n decided to buy a shirt for him...

Mayank on the other side was driving back to his house when in the journey he saw a flower shop n decided to buy some flowers for nupur..

Excuse me.. i want to buy a boquet cn u please make one 4 me of my said flowers?

Sure sir..tell us what flowers u want in the boquet?

Hmm let me see...

He gave a look to all the flowers there n then said

Hmm put some purple orchids in it,2 white lilies,

Few carnations of pink n yellow in colour n lastly 7 red roses in it...

Ok sir as u say..

The flowerist started making the bouquet n mayank kept thinking the smile which will come to nupur's face when he will give him the bouquet.. he was busy in thinking when the flowerist interrupted is imagination

Sir here is the tag /card..would u like to write something in it?

Hmm yeah give me

mayank entered inside his home n found it vacant.

Seems nupur is still busy in shopping..i wonder how these girls spent hours n hours in so boring thing..

N smiled to himself..

After freshen up he came in the lounge area n switch on the television n started flipping channels..

Hmm nothing interesting comes on television..

Suddenly he got a call from his client n kept the remote on the table ...

He was busy talking to his client when he heard the news reporter saying..

Breaking news:

Few minutes ago there happens to be a bomb blast in the paradise mall,near M.G road.. mayank on listening the news was hell shocked..he kept staring on the tv..according to the sources it is said that the blast occur just outside the orbit restaurant .. the rescue team has reached the spot..

Till now there are more than 8 people who have lost their life n more than 50 people who are critical..

Nupur... this was the word came out from mayank's mouth.. his eyes got glued to the television..he was feeling like someone has took out his brain n all his power to think was not there...

Without even thinking for once mayank took out his car n went towards the mall.. praying each n every second..

Mayank reached the mall ..there was a deadly environment everywhere this made mayank more horrified . he was continuously praying..

He decided to go inside the mall bt the police outside there stopped him from going further

Sir please let me go inside ...meri wife hai ander please..

U can't go inside. The rescue work is going on..

Sir please let me go ..please...

No u can't go ..

Mayank shouted on him please sir .please let me go inside .. my wife is there please..

Please don't cry ..go there .there is a enquiry dept. Go n check if they knw about ur wife..

Mayank without a second wasting there went to the dept. To check about his nupur...

Sir please tell me is there any girl named nupur?

Arre aap btayiye aapko kiski talash hai? The sir said there.. mayank again asked sir my wife nupur..

Arre aap boliye

Sir meri.. aap chup rahiye please...

Mayank could not handle this anymore n shouted on him.. sir aap please btayenge meri wife ke bare mein kab se puch raha huin..agar use kuch hua na toh u won't get free.. i warn u ...

Dekhiye pehle aap tamiz se baat kariye.. achha boliye aap kisse dundh rahe hain?

Meri wife .. naam batayiye, mrs nupur mayank Sharma...

Yahan toh nahi hai..ek kaam kariye aap pass ke city hospital mein jayiye wahan kuch logon ko admit kiya gay hai ..so jayiye n wahan dekhiye..

Mayank within no time reached city hospital..

Mayank asked the doctor about the patients..the doctor told him go straight n took a right 4m there the patients r admitted there..

Mayank with everystep was praying ..praying n praying...

He went inside the room n he saw nupur sitting on the sofa with a bandage on her left hand n a cotton strip around her forhead..

Mayank looked her at awww n went towards her n hugged her tightly with the intension not to leave her never ever...

N nupur only remained shock...

Sorry nupur ..i m really very sorry... mayank was crying badly , hugging her, thanking the ALMIGHTY 4 saving his nupur... his nupur...

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Edited by parul_bansal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update Sweetheart...
loved it lodsss
loved it to d coreee
hmm...so akhir waqt mil hi gaya apko...kyun..
bt yeh kya Nupur ko bomb blast mein fasa diya agar usse kuch ho jata toh...
bt i know meri Sweetheart ke rehte Nupur ka koi kuch nhi bigar sakta...😉
Awww...i sooo love Mayank here...
he was sooo Adorable...
loved d Hug...
wating for d next part...
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss Sweetheart...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago

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