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Posted: 13 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

itni choti update...but its nice...

loved it!!!

thank u 4 ur comments😉
n sryy 4 small update *kan pakkar kar*
next time a big 1
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
thank u may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: aysha1989

Oh dadi 😔
the pre-cap was confusing 😕
Thank you so much for the pm... update the next part soon 😳


thank u
u will get to knw everything in the nxt part
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: SamiraARTiMAYUR

EID Mubarak to u too dear Brilliant part Mayu n dadi confo was touching

sad that dadi is no more
precap seems something alse
cont soon
thnx for the pm

ur welcome...
thanks 4 ur comment
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

Rid Mubarak dear

I am really feeling so bad for Nupur
thanks for pm
cont soon

thank u
4 the cmts
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: -Faria-

Eid Mubarak Dear
its a beautiful Update..
accha so dadi ne shaadi karya mayur ki
loved dadi and mayu convo
i hope ki dadi ki last wish puri ho jaye
wanna see my mayur happy-shappy

hayeee 1st of all iss baar aapko pm chala hi gya thank god...
thank u
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: shafyyy

very very nice update...

thank u
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
hello my frnds...
thank u all 4 ur comments ..love u
plss iss baar mere liye pray karna mere exams shuru honge ...plsss
1 month passed in the same pace...where mayank tried to make nupur feel happy always bt was not satisfied n nupur perform all her duties truly bt her smile vanished 4m her face...
one day...on dinning table
mf: hmmm shilpa mjhe tmhe kuch btana hai
( shilpa n nupur looked at himself questionly where mayank was afraid wat will happen when he told her that)
mm: ji boliye
mf: wo ..actually..hmari mumbai ki branch jo hai usmein koi problem aa gyi hai...
n koi hai bhi nhi jo usse thik se dekh paye
so maine decide kiya hai ki mayank wahan jayega
mm: toh yeh toh achhi baat hai na
mf: hmm..wo mayank kam se kam 1 saal ke liye wahan jayega...
(this was enough to add ghee in fire)
nupur looked questioned while mayank was hving no idea wat will happen
mm: dekhiye mjhe kuch nhi pta mayank kahin nhi jayega..arre abhi uski shaadi hui hai nupur yahan akeli kaise rahegi?
mf: arre nupur jayegi na uske saath
mm: phir bhi main uske bina kaise rahuingi 😭😭😭
mf: deekho agar mayank akele kaam karega toh wo apna career bana sakta hai..it will be better 4 him na aur sirf 1 saal ki toh baat hai...
mm: par...thik hai if agar yeh uske carrer ki baat hai toh i m ok with it
mf: gud...meri begam...
mm: kya aap bhi
every1 started smiling...bt mayank saw nupur lost somewhere..actually he wanna knw her decision
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------n: mummy kya main aapne ghar aj thori der ke liye ja sakti huin?
mm: kyun nhi beta jao..main mayank ko bol duingi ki wo tmhe shaam ko pick kr le
n: ji..(smiling)
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at nupur's house
radha: arre nupur beti aap yahan?
nupur touched her feet
n: ji
wo main aise hi aayi thi
r: aap apne kamre mein jao main aapke liye kuch lati huin
n: nhi main thik huin
nupur in her room ...
papa mumma..seeing their photo
i miss u both...aapne dadi ko bhi bula liya aur dekho main akeli reh gyi...
kisi se kuch bol bhi nhi sakti...
i just miss u alll
n:janne se pehle ek baar chachi ji se mil leti huin
radha chachi ji kahan hai?
r: apne kamre mein
nupur enter in a big room
n: nameste chachi ji (touching her feet)
k: aapna natak ab toh band kr do...
n(shocked)..par maine kya kiya hai?
k: dikhta nhi tmhe?...ab toh u r satisfied na after getting married to mayank
nupur kept quiet as she knw this part will surely gonna come..bt sumwhere she felt may be she accept her...
k: kyun bhul gyi... 2 months pehle tmhari shaddi hui mayank se ...jo meri beti ka hone wala pati tha
tmhe sharam nhi aati ...ab bhi mjhse milte hue?
tmhari mom bhi aisi hi thi ..hmesha mera share china n nw u ...
just get out
...
nupur comes out crying...n left her house ..when she came back see saw mayank already standing out of his house...
he sensed sumthing went wrong as nupur's eyes were puffed bt he thought may be its her personal matter
m: chale nupur?
n: hmmm
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at home
mm: arre aa gye tm dono ,chalo dinner kar lo
n: mummy mjhe bhuk nhi hai
n she went into her room
mm: isse kya hua
m: arre kuch nhi mummy...wo raste mein maine n nupur ne chaat kha li thi toh usse bhuk nhi hai aap janti ho na uska peit chuhe jaisa chota hai
mm: ok...
tu karega ki nhi?
m: nhi ma mjhe bhi bhuk nhi hai..i m toh full
mm: thik hai gud ni8 beta
m: gud ni8 ma
in their room---
nupur was standing in the balcony ...
crying ..bt wiped off her tears when she felt his foot steps
n: aare tm aa gye ..dinner kr bhi liya?
m: kya baat hai nupur ..(he straightly come 2 the point)
n: kuch nhi
m: achha nupur tm mjhse kuch chupa nhi sakti i knw u
n: aisa kuch nhi...
m: tmhe meri kasam ab bolo
nupur's eyes got teary..n not the started coming out
nupur sat on the floor n mayank hugged her tightly n she was crying
n: y mayank y ..yeh mere saath hi kyun hua?
pehle mumma papa n nw dadi...n shee...
jisse bhi i love ...they leave me alone...is i m worthless?
m: ssshhh nupur
n: u knw mayank i always want a sweet n happy family par god wants sumthin else..he took my family n left me alone
no 1 love me
m: kisne kaha that u r alone?? mummy hai, papa hai n main hoon na apni best frnd ke liye toh?
n u knw god loves u soo much..he just want u to be strong that's y he did this...
n every 1 loves u ..mumma papa n me...(pause)
n ur mom n dad n dadi sab soocho they must must feel bad if they see u crying so plsss don't cry hmmm
n: hmmm
thank u 4 being with me mayank n thats true aunty ,uncle r too gud n u too (pause)
m: i think its late nw u must go to sleep
n: hmmm
they both freed each other 4m their hands as they were holding each other 4m quite long...
they both stod up n nupur was about to go in the wash room when mayank called her
m: nupur
n: hmmm
m: wo main tmse kuch puchna chahta tha
n: haan bolo
m: wo ...wo kya tm mere saath delhi chalogi ..wo u knw
n: kab jana hai?
m: kya?
hmm wo kl shaam ko
n: thik hai i'll pack my bags ..n tmhara bhi kr dungi
m: (smiling) thank u
n: thanks to u too
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next day .they reached mumbai...
at airport (mumbai)
n: mayank hm kaha rahenge
m: wo mera ghar hai wahan
n: ok
mayank was searching 4 sum1 n suddenly he heard a voice
samrat: mayank
mayank: hii samrat
hi gi=unjan
samrat: hi mayank
g: hi mayank
samrat n gunjan saw a lady with nupur n samrat said
s: hey ..tm ..mayank yeh sheena hai na
hii sheena nic to meet u
nupur get shovcked on hearing this
m: samrat ( holding nupur 4m his 1 hand)
yeh nupur hai ..meri wife
n sajan got shocked
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
ALL D VERY BEST SWEETHEART...👍🏼
i know u r gonna do WELL...actually d BEST...inshALLAH...ameen

awesome update...
loved it lodsss...
Mayank's parents r sooo sweet...
i hate Nupur's chachi...
awww...
poor Nupur...
bt thank goddd!!!!!!
Mayank is wid her...
loved it lodsss...
waiting eagerly for d next part...
love U lodsss...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res😛
will unres tomorrow😳

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