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MAYUR PARADISE...
BE WITH ME ALWAYS...
hello every1 i m parul ...today i m going to post my 1st os here on mayur b'coz omy frnd anila she is the 1 who encouraged me to do so ...
plsss do criticise or comment so that i will know where i stand
os begins...
it was an ordinary evening of november,clock showing 9 n a girl in her early 20ies roaming here n there in her room in anger n blabbering- "samajhta kya hai apne aap ko meri toh koi kadar hi nahi hai ,wo pati hai toh jo uska mann hoga wahi karega , kam se kam 1 phone toh kar hi sakta hai na wo"
n then he sits on her bed giving last look to her cell phone n then looking sumwhere suddennly her cell rings ,without even giving a look on the screen she recieved the call
girl: kya mayu kaise ho tm? ek phone bhi nahi kiya ? u know na mujhe tmhari chinta kar rhi thi lekin tm ho ki ? achha dinner kiya ya nhi pata tha mjhe tm apne health ka khayal hi nhi rakhte ab kuch bologe bhi ya mon vrat hai tmhara?
other side(girl): tu chup karegi tb hi na koi kuch bolega ..waise nupur main gunjan bol rahi huin mayank jiju nahi
nupur: ohh tu ..(dissapointing) bol koi kaam hai?
gunjan : kyun main aise hi tjhse baat nhi kar sakti ? waise kya hua tu itna low kyun sound kar rhi hai?
nupur: kuch nhi aise hi
gunjan : ab bata bhi de tu mjhse kuch nhi chupa sakti mjhe pata hai u know na ab bol jiju se jhagra hua hai kya?
nupur: jhagra huhhh wo toh tb hoga na jab baat hogi ..par ab iski tension mat le kyunki i m not gonna talk to him ever
gunjan : achha aur wo kis khushi mein?
nupur: tujhe pata hai na ...hamari shaadi ko 1 month bhi nhi hua ki wo trip pe chala gya, aur wo bhi akele ..n by god abhi tak toh hmara honeymoon bhi nahi hua hai ufff
gunjan : ohh ab main samjhi toh meri dost isliye gussa hai kyunki unke pati unhe honeymoon pe nhi le gye kyun?😆
nupur*blushing* ji nhi aisa nhi hai wo toh main bus...n gunjan ki bachhi tu baari barri baatein kar rhi hai tb kya hua tha jb samrat akele gya tha
gunjan: ohhh toh miss abhi se bachhe bhi , kam se akm honeymoon tk toh wait karo ...lagta hai jiju ko batana parega 😆...
nupur😳: chup ..ab byeee gunjan
n with this she cut the call n kept it on the other side n took mayank's picc in her hand n start watching it n said' mayu u na how much i miss u dekho gunjan ko bhi pata hai bt u lagta hai ab tmhe sadu ke sath sath buddhu bhi bolna hoga ...*sobs* mayu kl mera b'day hai pata nhi u remember or not maine *sobs* kitna kuch soocha tha ki shadi ke baad my 1st b'day u n me bt tm toh trip par busy ho*sobs* koi nhi bt i still loves u n miss u plss come back soon... <3
n after sumtime she went to dreamland...
when the clock struck 11:50 her cell buzzed which distrubed her dream n then she woke up n said
" kisi ko chain nahi hai ...sab meri neend ke dushman hai ...wo sadu bhi hmesha subah subah mjhe jaga deta hai mrs sharma bol kar " n then she again got upset bt then she took her phone n become happy seeing the name flashing on the screen
it was of mayank her 1 n only 1 hubby
it was a msg 4 him
she opened it in exceitment n read-
hello jaan,
just wanna tell u ki kaam zyada hai so i''ll be coming after 2 days so keep missing me byeee
urs mayank
n she again got upset n started crying
mayu😭 u don't remember my b'day na ? u hvn't wished me
i think diya was ri8 shadi ke baad sab kuch badal jata hai insaan bhi aur pyarr bhi
after few min she went towards the window n saw it was raining althogh she was sad bt sumthing made her to go in the rain n enjoy it she thought may she cn hide her tears in the rain 4m herself too so with her heavy heart she went to the terrace
when she opened the door she found lighting n a table n roses ,candles with no flame n moreover a guy who seems known
she got afraid n thought to hit him with a stick bt her thought vanished when she saw it was none other then her hubby...
nupur: tm? yahan ? tm yahan kya kar rahe ho?
mayank: nupur ..nupur ruko break 1st of all HAPPY B'DAY JAAN"
she cn't imagine him here n when he wished it seems she must be dreaming ...
mayank : kya hua no thank u ? ohhh achha tm shocked ho ki main yahn kaise
she noded her head
mayank : aj mrs sharma ka b'day hai toh mr sharma na ho aisa ho sakta hai kya😊 toh mjhe toh aana hi tha
nupur: bt wo msg *still shocked*
mayank: wo it was my plan
maine soocha tha ki tmh surprise duin ..b'coz i know my wifey is too filmy😉
toh maine trip pe jane se pehle duplicate keys apne sath hi rakh li then aj yahan upar aane ke baad sari preparations ki bt luck was not on my side dekho barish aagyi aur sab kuch kharab ho gya...soocha tha neeche jakr tmhe surprise dunga bt... :-(
nupur :awww mayu i love u tmne itna kuch kiya mere liye yahi bht hai i love u loads...
mayank : ok ji bt i think hme cake katna chahiye bt yahan toh kuch ho nhi sakta hawa itni tez hai toh hm neeche chale ?
nupur: ok as u wish mr pati
they went downstairs in their room
mayank lit up the candles n nupur blew them n cut the cake n fed the piece into mayu's mouth n then mayank did the same
nupur: chalo ab mera gift do ..kahan hai mera gift?
mayank *hugging her* main huin na
nupur: achhi movie thi ..i loved it specially srk my raj bt usse choro abhi tm pehle mjhe mera gift do chalo n koi kanjoosi nhi chalegi
mayank: thik hai aj tmhara din hai toh ye bhi sahi bt 1st tell me wat i will get as my return gift?😉
nupur: mayank?
mayank: wo main huin i know bt tell me about my return gift?
nupur : pehle mjhe mera do uske baad tmhara
mayank want to argue more bt 4 him her happiness is matter a lott n 4 that he thought 1st give her the gift
mayank : ye lo
mayank handed her an envelop earlier nupur was excieted bt then after getting her gift she sounded low...
nupur: mr pati yeh kya ...tmhari purani aadat abhi bhi nhi gyi college mein books gift karte the aur ab envelop?
mayank : haan jb main phir trip pe jaunga na toh mjhe letter likhna ..tm na khol ke toh dekho
nupur opened it n found 2 tickets 2 venice n jumped in exceitment
nupur: mayu yeh waooo 😃 ilove u love u ...my dream place waooo
mayank *back hugging *said in husky voice - hmm ur dream place n our honeymoon place n kisssed her on shoulder
nupur: mayu...*blushing😳*
maynk : nupur tm itna sharmati kyun karti ho?
nupur: mrs sharma jo huin😉
mayank : oyye hoyyeee toh mrs sharma wat about my return gift?
nupur; kon sa gifft i don't remember...
mayank : ahhh achhai ka toh zaman hi nhi hai..yeh kya baat hui?
nupur: wo toh hai...
mayank: achha ji then toh mjhe bhi zamane jaisa hona chahiye n smiled naughtingly
n nupur started running here n there n mayank chasing her finally fall on the bed
nupur: mayank u know this is my bestest b'day i ever had ...
mayank: n u know i can make it even more besttt...nupur smiled n just few seconds later
mayank kissed nupur ...the light kiss soon turnred passionate n then lead to a blissful world aheah n he proved that he cn made her b'day even more best n he made that tooo
n the moon witnesed the unification of two suls into 1👏
the end...
thanks a lott 4 bearing me
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Kumkum Bhagya
Anupamaa
