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hey rida

Hey rida fantastic updates loved each and every emotions u portrayed of AR:) totally loved AR's intense chemistry... thanx & pls do pm me..continue superb writing... Love Kiara:)

AR version... Okay, willl read it asap... At least there will be a little of SR in the beginning...😉

Well uh probably you all will kill me after it, mark my words kill me. Z youre my saviour here dudeh Devil incarnate anyhow, im planning to end BTLOO, yes ended it actually LOL. my mind has changed, boy of it ever remained the same wayh. the thing is when my mind changes it is impossible to work over the same track, so eventually i change all the tracks aswellh :P

Well i quite have been concentrating over my writing, lol well uh yeah sometimes, and i hope you do find that change lolh. well there are a few things ive been pondering about. well as in like many novelists, im trying to concentrate on one specific type of writing, and lol as youd say, youd liked Armaan here in BTLOO, so hopefully i actually can guarantee you youre gonna like the change in my stories now.

i want to concentrate on romance/Angst/hurt right now, lol yes, plus i want to go really different now. there are many ffs over this section, and lol though i love my bad characterization initiation i am going to go deeper and see till where do i reach lol funny aint it? No no, ive been jus trying to get good at this one kind of scenario display, and untill im not good at it, im not moving on from this genre, plus im more comfortable wd it.

UHH so the bad news was no pm part coming. ehehe, im not quite ready to write it because, i really want to get perfect over this intimacy scene. i dont want to write for the sake of writing and jus keep on writing up, i want it not to be jus an update of no word but kiss and consummation rather i want to bring that beauty and gorgeousness, that would make it a masterpiece. yes, i dont want to write on it. you all are the best readers everh, more than best, and ive always told you that i dont write for the sake of writing, and posting and jus getting into intimacies for sake. not anymore, though. i want to write that intimacy when im capable enough to write what i want to write, and when im comfortable enough aswell. LOL yeaah a shocker, im reallyh sorryh, but i promise to give it as the best gift everh.

LOL im trying to get that perfect element to fit wd it to make it a steamy yet, totally beautiful, and im going to write that scene when i reach there lol, i promise! And you all wont want something disappointing from my side right??

NEXT! please give me one line from your side that you will want in the epilouge of BTLOO. Yes its all your ff, and my readers will write its end, so yeah :D do give me a line to come in the epilouge! JUS keep in mind it not has to have Riddhima pregnant, neither her ehh you know what? JUS THE MARRIAGE THING :D mayhbeeh!!!

im going to post the excerpt for the sequal maybe, but the sequal will be shocking, and unlikely for many, but as it is, even for a novelist every being doesnt likes his work, coz they dont prefer that genre, so if it doesnt suits you, then politely stay awayh :D

and the sequal might be dark so im not sure bout it :P

HERE! sheesh fingers crossed! i jus am goin to change few courses of themes, here being different, lol and i actually hope you all are in for a change, away from the lovey dovey types of endings? :PP ehehe

Trust me? :D

lol so it will be a suspense thriller type, and lol i love you Z and poorni <3

EXCERPT <3

"Well well well, now is that a way to address your to be husband Mrs. Malik, uh wait a sec, Ms to be mine?'' His features were hard, flooding with mockery and male triumph. Those dark grey orbs, that gleamed with devious intentions concealed in them, making them more dangerous, dark. The moment was tense; a beautiful, yet disturbing serenity had conquered the place. His features were filled with a fraudulent calmness. For she had not discovered his real being today, she had been trapped in his manipulative weaved game. In the fairy tale. he had told her, "I would probably be the villain."

It was true.

And she was about to marry him. Had he not told her, that he loved playing the villain? How could she not understand? Surely, karan Malik, never lied.

"You are a manipulative, evil bas***d." Every inch of her existence shook with formidable ferocity of hysteria. She was deeply appalled and taken aback, but as it simulated, she knew him well too much - too much to rest in peace, or let her commotions rebel to bring regret later. His every move was perfectly calculated, and she needed not to ponder over this thought again. Her eyes held accusation as they battled with his, yet the satisfaction in them made her flinch. The mere act of apathy and heedlessness crumbled into fragments.

His steps rose, and slowly he approached her. She made an effort to move back, however he was faster, his towering manliness caught her waist. His fingers, long, gorgeous dexterous fingers, held the back of her jacket, pulling her firm and unwilling, yet closer in his predatory embrace. Those eyes, they were haunting, gorgeously hungry of no lust, but something protected deep in the chambers of concealment. They were beautifully comprehensive, manipulative, with a shriek she reminded herself, and yet they skittered unwanted, unacceptable yet, pleasantry strong emotions inside her. For the first time, maybe she felt a smile enlighten his cold lips. May not it be a smile, rather just a slight lifting of his cheek, letting his lips tilt and part, yet it was a rare view. The autocrat arrogance that he had inherited, or rather had succumbed into, that shrewd, sharp cleverness and evil contentment that his eyes displayed were horrifying, as if he had declared his victory. His enchanting victory over – Her.

The length of his pointing nose, its soothing touch across her skin, was nothing but an epitome of sensuality. His every inch dripped sensuality, yet the moment made her groan with disgust, as she attempted to jackhammer. Boy had she underestimated him – again? His hand around her waist tightened, with a flicker of second, powerfully she was pulled deeper into his murderous embrace.

A devilish shrewd breathe tormented her skin in flickers of hot, molten shakes. The tip of his lips, brushed the feathery surface of her ear. His voice was what it always had been, too gorgeous, tempting yet arrogant. But. Today. They were soothingly dipped with huskiness, making her eyes shut on their own.

"Tsk, Tsk. Now that is how you talk to your fianc? Cherrie? Im flattered.''

"Why? Why did you do this? You planned that all? You did it purposely. You are a heartless jerk." She fought her tears. No. she cannot be vulnerable. Not, in front of this man.

"Do I need to prove? You need not an explanation baby. Or are we back to our innocence game?" he was ruthless. He was no man, not a man who had a heart.

"I did that all Riddhima. I had mixed those sleeping pills in your drink, I had placed you on my bed, I had stripped of your clothes, and I had let the media in. Tsk, Tsk baby, and now there is absolutely nothing you can do to stop this. You. My darling. Are a helpless woman. I had told you. Had I not? You will now belong to me completely." She was now filled with fear, fear she could no more fight. And boy if it did not leave him satisfied, overwhelmed.

She shuddered in his embrace. Was she really helpless? Could not she stop this? Controlling the urge to break down into hysteric tears, she managed to bring her voice back. Yet it was filled with venom, a weak venom. "You can NEVER be HIM. I love Armaan. I only love Armaan, and not you. You can never be Armaan. You only look like him. You've got only his face and nothing else I am only his."

As it was, it provoked even more of a reaction from him than she'd expected. He gripped her jaw, his hand closing in a strong, not-quite-painful vise, his eyes flaring with fury. She stared back at him defiantly, almost willing him to do something awful, to prove that he was as contemptible as she thought him.

But the speed dropped. Rapidly, the fury condensed in his eyes, the veil coming back. His eyes were cold, mocking and madly calm again. The cool predatory gleam returning in them. She did not fear his anger, she felt exhilarated to get that impossible reaction out of him, but she feared this cold predator he turned back into. Ruthless, yet the most dangerous man ever alive. She was now stuck in this impossible paradox, inconclusiveness.

"I am afraid but your so called husband is dead." She flinched with pain at that excruciating memory.

"And I am not him. Poor him, now you will be only my sole property, and nomore his. And now I will make sure you never remember him again. I am going to make sure I remove him from your every memory."

He was angry, but his voice was soothingly cool and determined. The manipulative bas***d he was! He was an obscurity; she dreaded not knowing in and out.

She struggled and pulled out of his hold. Her eyes radiated hot fury. She rebelled, protested, outrageously, " No. im never going to be yours. This marriage will be only in name. you will never be my husband."

"Are you sure? I am marrying you, and take my words. A marriage it will be in every sense." His voice was dangerously full of a wrenching desire. It went low, transmuting into a murmur, a stimulating murmur, as he repeated those words, "A. Marriage. In. every. Sense."

She reacted. Reacted violently. Her heart pounding wildly, uncontrollably in her heart.

She stepped back with fearful eyes, and whispered softly.

It will be a marriage in name only." It was a plead, a request.

"I don't blame you," he said calmly. "However, the marriage isn't complete until I bed you. And, unfortunately, I never leave loopholes."

He was going to insist on his rights, then. Nothing would dissuade him from getting what he wanted. And he wanted her, his wife.

devil incarnate! What is it for? LMAO Z your reserve fever🤣

Originally posted by: -Heart-Hacker-

devil incarnate! What is it for? LMAO Z your reserve fever🤣

NAAH :p🤔🤣🤣 do i care youre first or not,all i care is its youh :P🤗

Originally posted by: -Heart-Hacker-

NAAH :p🤔🤣🤣 do i care youre first or not,all i care is its youh :P🤗