Shifting Sands Thrd 2- epilogue/pg 71 - Page 30

Originally posted by: udeshi91

omg 😲 such a shocking update 😲 it took several mintutes for me to regain myself after reading the update 🤢 have no idea about what kind of a pain , horror and misery she have gone through due to that inhuman act remember about neil saying she came india for her marriage , hope it has some connection to this glad she has maan with her now who will help her to forget her horrible demons of past through his unconditional love according to me rape is the most horrible inhuman crime in the world 🤢 hate such b****** to the core

poor geet 😭

waiting to know more past of geet believe me, my fingers are still shaking when i type this

this is the reason i admire your reality based fictions 👏 you bring out the harsh reality very well through your characters although it's really hard to digest the facts sometimes

a writer must have vast knowledge about the plot for that

hats off to you dear for how you build up the story with a great combination of each episode👏

thanks for the pm please continue soon

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome update dear
geet was raped by 4-5 men 😭
i would have cut their pe***s for doing this
i this in next part dev would come who is the main person who has ***** geet i would kick so tight between his legs that he would think twice to do this or better i would cut his manh**d
bloody bas****
sorry cant helf to keep my tongue quite it's only spitting abusive words
make maan give those men a punishment that no one can imagine in his worst nightmare

Originally posted by: goldenball

Control...yaar...for next part when Dev enters...without him...how the story will end...?