Shifting Sands Thrd 2- epilogue/pg 71 - Page 26

Originally posted by: udeshi91

this is the first time i'm commenting on your ff s. due to my studies i couldn't comment on your previous ff s 😒 but again on this one i was not sure about myself that if i can do justice to your update through my comment, plz forgive me for that 😕 but after today's update i couldn't stop myself from commenting 😳 it was an awesome update, loved it i have read your every FF except the one you wrote which is related to the show ghsp i have read them more than once as i love them

the fact that amazed me the most was the different flavours of yor FF s

even among them the reality based ones attracted me the the most 😳

when i read the character of maan in purple haze i was like 😲 i remember once you asked that no one questioned you about him there like geet in here 😕

but the same thing happened when i read about geet here 😲

in both there and here you brought out the reality sometimes we're running away from due to its bitterness

but at the end of the ff you amazingly turns out that into a longlasting sweetness 😳

hats off to you dear for that 👏 it is the uniqueness of a writer 😳

i really loved the characters of maaneet in breaking point and sand storm 😊

but my most favourite ff of yours is dew and the mist 😳

never get enough of reading it again and again 😃

first i thought geet is a detective 😆 but at the end you really make her one , loved it 😉

really admire you for portraiting maaneet in different avatars in every ff 👏

keep up your awesome work 😳

Originally posted by: shrutheAjay

Awesome update...

So Maa is totally supporting... just need to handle daadi... eagerly waiting for maan to sort things... and eagerly waiting for revelation of Geet past!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: -Nilam-

Fantastic update dear...loved it...
maan's mother is so sweet...so understanding..I really loved her...
hope dadima will be able to come out of her royal bindings and accept her as she is...
loved to see the bonding between maan and yash...
waiting for the next update...

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

its now like a routine to add this line before my comment at your ff

Awesome Update..!!

i loved todays update alot

that was so natural...like guy takes his girl to meet his family...

persuading family to agree for thier marriage n all...

truely, i also suspected that Geet's child is out of marriage...

i liked that you added that line to show awkwardness maan felt as a sudden change of relation... that always happen...

and then loss of all inhibiton...hmmm that part was so sweetly romantic... btw what he have forgotten, that she was reminding him...the kiss..?😳

bond between yash and maan gets stronger, dint maan tell him already that he is going to be his papa.. and he should call him so...

seems like there must be a scene like that...

i loved the update alot...

continue soon...

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Acceptance of your inner feelings is such a beautiful thing. It brings so much peace and contentment within. It gives you courage to face all. In their case...both of them have finally come to terms with what they truly feel. The peace is finally there for both.

Missed you girl🤗 But dad was home on leave and I always avoid everything else when he is around😳

Originally posted by: goldenball

Today i was thinking of knocking you...Now I am feeling good to see your comment.

Yes both are at peace because of confession Maan love is more coz attraction for her...and Geet love is more to trust in him for her future life, believing in his love for her...

Actually story is over now...but I know everyone will kill me if I don't tell Geet's past...so little more to go...😉