Shifting Sands Thrd 2- epilogue/pg 71

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disha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#231

awesome update
loved it... 😊

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keenu_kk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#232

so beautiful part dear

really loved it

so yash calls maan with his name

great

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febinyusuff

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Posted: 13 years ago

#233

After so many days my heart is also at peace. Now I am sure that Geet will be able to win Dadima's love..Maan's mom is sooo sweeet Mwaaah

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Bye_Bye_if

@Bye_Bye_if

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Posted: 13 years ago

#234

its now like a routine to add this line before my comment at your ff

Awesome Update..!!

i loved todays update alot

that was so natural...like guy takes his girl to meet his family...

persuading family to agree for thier marriage n all...

truely, i also suspected that Geet's child is out of marriage...

i liked that you added that line to show awkwardness maan felt as a sudden change of relation... that always happen...

and then loss of all inhibiton...hmmm that part was so sweetly romantic... btw what he have forgotten, that she was reminding him...the kiss..?😳

bond between yash and maan gets stronger, dint maan tell him already that he is going to be his papa.. and he should call him so...

seems like there must be a scene like that...

i loved the update alot...

continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#235

chapter 26

to make dadi agree will not be a cake walk fom maneet but guess yash will play a great role in it 👍🏼

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#236

awesome, brilliant part
loved it
maan' s mother is so nice and sweet and understand maaneet well
dadi ma is still in stubborn
let's see how maan will manao her
here geet understand maan well and know without his family maan can't leave in peace
loved their gurdwara conversation
yash so cute and loved maan yash bonding
continue soon

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Tamalika Basu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#237

Ji...😉..

most 1stly...me 4 PM.😛..

u done a

...⭐️👏...

4 this ...👍🏼...

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so much ..dear..😛..

4 this update..👏👏.

tons of 4 u dear..🤗...

again said .....😊.

really ..dear...😛...

lov,❤️

Tama

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