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Posted: 19 years ago
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heyy tht was rocking yaar!!..i love this fanfic!!...uhhh abut a-k uniting during or aaliya's and shabbir's help...uhh i want them to unite during the case!!...but its upto u!!..soo plzz continue!!..im anxious to read more!!....
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Kya part tha yaar!!! it was rocking!! this is such an interesting fanfic...kaash yeh sab show main ho....lol....keep continuing!!
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plzzzzzzzzzz continue!!!!!!!..i want to read the next part!!!..plzz comntinue1!!!
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PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ COntinue!!! its been quite a long time!!! i cant wait!!! please please please continue~~~
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Posted: 19 years ago
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pls write the next part soon 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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It was no1 other than shabir. But he had a determined look on his face he knew what he was saying and also that he was right. But angad & kripa failed to understand what he was saying.
S: yes u heard me right u will go back to Prithvi's house right now.
A: Shabir do u know what u r saying? It can be dangerous for her. U know that he has gone crazy to get her. He can harm her.
S: he will never harm her Angad. He has done all this for her. He will take every means to protect her. To keep her away from this case.
K: but y do u want me to be away from this case. I want to help Angad out of this. I want to punish Prithvi 4 what he has done to all of us. Because of his selfish reasons v all have suffered a lot.
S: I know that. That is y I am telling u to go to Prithvi's place to collect evidence against him. So that v can put him behind bars permanently.
A: but aren't the evidence v already have enough against him.
S: not they r not. Any good lawyer like Manek can easily frame them as false. Even it can be said that Simone is lying to get back at Prithvi because at some pt of time she was engaged to him. V need to have his confession.
K: but how will v be able to do it.
S: Angad has already helped us to achieve this goal.
Hearing this both Angad & kripa were confused. They failed to understand what had Shabir said. They looked puzzled at Shabir.
S: I will tell u how? Kripa u will go to prithvi & tell him that u hired a guy to kill Josh because he defamed u & Angad.
K: but I never did anything like this.
S: v all know that. Just tell him that he killed Josh & till this time he has been blackmailing u for it. When Angad came to know about this he took the blame on himself to save u. but the blackmailer is still pestering u.
A: but what will happen with this?
S: v all know Prithvi cant see kripa crying. Maybe in order to comfort her he will confess his crime & v may be able to record it. Then v will have some concrete evidence against him.
K: but what if he doesn't do it?
S: then I will frame u in court.
Both angad & kripa were shocked at this. They never expected this from Shabir.
A: Shabir do u know what u r saying? Y the hell do u want to frame her. She is helping us & v repay her by sending her to jail. Gr8.
S: will u guys let me complete what I am saying. Plz let me complete my plan then u guys talk ok.
A&K: ok. talk
S: In the court I will make a guy stand & make him tell that he killed josh 4 Kripa. It can be easily proved Angad is taking this blame to protect u as u r his wife. Then kripa will confess to this crime. Prithvi cant stand kripa in trouble. He will definitely speak the truth.
A: If this doesn't happen then what? Kripa will land in jail 4 no fault of her's.
S: I will not let that happen. If Prithvi doesn't confess then v can tell the man to put the blame on prithvi directly. So now r both of u fine with all of this.
A&K: ok v will do it.
K: but what will v tell every1 in the family. I mean that they will all hate me 4 this.
A: I think she is right. Especially dadi, she loves both of us very much. How will v explain all this to them? V have to include some1 from the family in this matter.
S: ok v will include Alliya in this. Kripa u will never contact me directly now. I will tell all this to Alliya. U call her up in case of any probs & she will tell it to me. V shouldn't been seen together. Ok. Kripa now u go back to Prithvi's home he will be waiting 4 u & proceed with the plan. ok
K: ok. Bye Angad take care both of u.
A: u too & be careful plz.
Then after kripa leaves Shabir asks Angad: y did u lie to her?
A: what did I lie to her? I talked what was true.
S: I was hearing ur whole conversation. U lied to her that u don't love her.
A: she never asked me that question. Then how can I lie to her. I never lied.
S: don't u dare to play the game of words with a lawyer. She knows that u love her. She just wanted to hear it from u. u r the only 1 she loves and she wanted u to tell her the same. But u didn't !!!! can u tell me y?????
A: 1st thing she doesn't love me. She has now hated Prithvi as he killed our best friend & our child. That doesn't mean that she still loves me.
S: angad a woman tells through her eyes whom she loves & I can see only u in her eyes.
A: u r wrong Shabir. After what has happened between us v can never fall in love with each other. V have seen the worst of each other.
S: & also the best sides of each other. If that is the case then y do u still love her & r so worried about her safety??
A: I do love her but after what I have done to her she will never forgive me. DAMIT I tried to rape her because my male ego was hurt because of what she said about me.
S: then too she came here to help u out & to save u.
A: leave it Shabir. I don't want to talk about it. U just go & talk to alliya about it. Ok.
S: I will do it but u just think about what I said. Ok. Bye see u.
Then Shabir leaves from there & Angad thinks weather what shabir said was true.
As kripa entered Prithvi's house she was shocked to see the whole house decorated with candles. Then suddenly some1 caught her hand from behind. She was shocked to see the person's face & began crying. It was no1 other than Prithvi.
P: I was waiting 4 u at the party. But u didn't turn up. Where were u? every1 was asking about u. the press wanted to interview u. (then he saw Kripa crying). Kripa what happened? Y r u crying? Plz tell me what is the problem. Come on Kripa u know I cant see u like this plz tell me what is it?
K: Prithvi… Prithvi…. I killed josh. I have killed josh.
Prithvi was shocked at hearing this as he knew what he was the truth. He failed to understand what Kripa was saying. Then too he asked her.
P: what r u saying? U never killed him. It was Angad. He did it. He has even confessed it now. He is in jail.
K: He has confessed it only to get me punished. He knows that he was killed because of me. After what I tell u will hate me but I cant lie any more. After what Josh did to me I just hated him to no end. I hired a guy to kill him. He killed josh. Then Angad reached there. By the time Angad was there Josh was dead.
P: maybe Angad killed him & ur guy didn't.
K: no that guy has been blackmailing me for a long time. Once Angad saw me giving money to him & he paid the guy double to tell the truth. Now he also knows the truth. He told me. He will get me sentenced. To speed up the process he has confessed to the crime.
P: he is lying. If that was the case y did u not save him the 1st time.
K: I was going to but then I came to know about his affair with Simone. I wanted to punish him 4 it so I let him suffer. But now he is going to give it back to me. He will definitely get back at me. I know him. He will get me dead… He will get me dead…
P: he cant do anything to u. I am here to protect u. I will get u out.
K: Prithvi r u understanding the seriousness of the matter. I killed some1... I have killed josh. I murdered some1.
Prithvi could no longer see Kripa like this.
P: Kripa u never killed any1. Angad is lying.
K: how can u say like that Prithvi. I know what I have done that guy told me he killed Josh. He did it & I am responsible 4 it.
P: that guy lied to u as I KILLED JOSH. I SLASHED HIM.
Kripa was shocked at hearing this. She never expected Prithvi to confess so soon.
K: but how… y did u do it?
P: (but Prithvi lied to this question) I couldn't see what he did to u so I wanted to teach him this lesson. So I killed him.
K: but that guy. He told me that… that he killed Josh.
P: he lied to u 4 money. When I left josh at that time he was dead. I killed him.
K: but Angad… what will v do about him? He will tell about me to every1. then what.
P: no1 will believe him. I will sort out every thing. U just relax. I am here. I will not let any thing happen to u. I love u Kripa. I love u a lot.
K: plz Prithvi… plz Prithvi plz help me out.
Then Kripa hugged Prithvi & a faint smile appeared on her face as she looked outside at Sheetal who was the with her camera & had recorded everything what had just happened in the room.

After Prithvi left the room Kripa went outside to meet Sheetal to discuss their future plan.
Sh: I never thought Prithvi could do anything like this.
K: neither did I. but have u recorded everything?
Sh: yes I have. Now what to do with the tape?
K: give it to Shabir or Alliya. They will do the rest.
Sh: ok I will keep a copy with me is case of emergency. U come with me. It is not safe 4 u here.
K: no I will be fine here. If he doesn't find me here he will sense something wrong. Ok. U take care. Bye.
Sh: ok. Bye see u. take care.
As they left they were unaware of the fact that Prithvi's mom had seen them & heard everything. She wanted to save her son & also knew what he had done was wrong & if she said anything against Kripa she will loose her son again. She decided to send her goons after Sheetal to get the tape.

Sheetal had already prepared a copy of the tape & was on her way to give it to Shabir but she suddenly noticed a car following her. She was afraid what to do. She decided to call up Kripa but her network was not there. She was helpless. The goons were able to overtake her car forcing her to hault. They were three people. They dragged her out but she was able to give them a slip. She ran 4 her life with goons behind her. Suddenly she dashed into a car & a guy came out.
GUY: r u ok Sheetal? What r u doing here at the middle of the night?
Sheetal was glad to see Kartik there at least he could help her out.
Sh: Kartik plz lets get out of here. Plz hurry up. (then she got into his car.)
KK: ok. But where r v going & what is happening here?
As Sheetal told him the whole story he was more & more shocked. His shock had now turned into his anger.
when they reached Shabir's house he & alliya were shocked to see both of them
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Shabir never expected to see Kartik. He always found Kartik to be against Angad & was surprised to see him there to help Angad.
S: Sheetal how come u r here with Kartik in this condition?
AA: bhai what happened?
KK: some goons attacked her 4 the tape. Where is Kripa?
S: she is at Prithvi's place.
KK: get her out of there. If some1 knows about the tape then they also know about Kripa's involvement with it. She is in gr8 danger. V have to get her out.
S: I will call her up right now. (he calls up Kripa.) Hello Kripa. Listen u r in gr8 danger. Get out of Prithvi's house right now.
K: I know that Shabir. I am on my way to ur place. Has Sheetal reached there? Is Sheetal safe?
S: but how do u know what happened here?
K: it was Mrs. Damini Bose. She had herd us talk & she sent her goons behind Sheetal to get her & the tape.
S: u don't worry. She is safe. U come over quickly. Till that time v will think of what to do with Mrs. Bose.
K: ok.
Then Shabir hangs up the phone & turns around to tell all what had Kripa just told him.
KK: v should keep her away from Prithvi. She will tell him the whole story.
S: yes but what to do? Any ideas.
AA: what if v get her admitted to Sheetal's hospital???? Temporarily I mean!!!!!
SH: but under what conditions?
AA: she can break her leg while climbing the stairs.
Aaliya calls up a servant in the bose house & tells him to make Damini fall from stairs & also that he will be paid nicely for it.
When Kripa reached up to Shabir's place she received a call from Prithvi for it but she told him that dadi also was not well so she couldn't come there with him.
Next day in the court everything went according to the plan. Prithvi was held guilty but his lawyers were able to prove that his mental condition was also not stable hence he was admitted to a mental asylum. Angad was sent free & was surrounded by his family. But his eyes were searching 4 Kripa. He had not seen her after the hearing. When he reached home he had expected Kripa to be there but he was mistaken. He thought she will be at Dadi's place so he went there to see her. He was right as it was Kripa who opened the door for him. Both were happy to see each other but no1 knew how to express their feelings. There was a strange silence between them. It was broken by Kripa.
K: congrats u r free now. U & ur family will be really happy now.
A: yes every1 is happy. But r u happy?
K: yes I am. But y did u ask this Question?
A: because u were not there at home to wish me.
K: I cant enter the house which had become sad because of me. I destroyed its happiness.
A: that was a past. It was a misunderstanding. All is sorted now. Plz come back home. I am here to take u.
Dadi: & she will come with u.
K: but dadi how can I face people there when I cant face myself.
D: it is ok beta. Let it be the past now. Look towards ur future. Now u will go with Angad.
K: if u guys think so I will go.
A: thanks.

There was a strange silence in the car. (song in the background.)
As Kripa was about to enter the house Naina stopped her.
N: u dare not enter my house. Because of u Angad's concert was a flop. He went to jail. He was about to destroy his life. Tell me 1 thing y did u do all this? Y did u try to destroy my son.
Kripa was in ters hearing this. But before she could answer Angad answered 4 her.
A: because I told her to do so. She did everything 4 me.
Every1 in the room was shocked to heard it.
N: angad do u know what r u saying.
A: yes mom. Everything from Kripa helping Prithvi in concert till the court was planned by me & Shabir.
N: but y did u do it? Y did u destroy ur own concert????
A: v never had enough evidence against him. But v knew he was crazy about Kripa & would definitely tell her everything. So v told Kripa to do all this. To go against us. Kripa didn't want to do this but v forced her to do all this & look it worked out. Mom u should be thankful to Kripa. She was able to do all this.
But naina was not convinced. She still had her doubts.
KK: he is right mom. V all were in this together. I support them.
Then even Aaliya & Shabir supported the version to help A-K.
N: Anita bring Pooja's thali. I want ot welcome my son & daughter-in-law.
As they again entered the house Kripa thanked Angad 4 what he had done 4 her through her eyes.
Aaliya, Shabir, Kartik & Sheetal knew that A-K loved each other & had not disclosed there feeling to each other. Hence Aaliya, Shabir, Kartik & Sheetal decided a plan to bring the love birds close to each other.
Next day:
KK: mom can v kids go 4 a tracking tom.
N: y not beta. But all of a sudden???
AA: Masi after all this episode v need a break. So v thought to go.
N: ok. But who all r going?
KK: me, Aaliya, Shabir, Sheetal, Angad & Kripa.
Kripa &angad were surprised at this but thought this was a nice break 4 every1.
An:(Anita) y r v guys not invited?
Aa: u didn't like to go at such places. Then y r u asking?
Manik: but v want to be in the crowd hence v will also come.
Manik was staring at Aaliya which made her understand what he wanted to convey to her.
Then every1 left to pack there bags for the trip.

preview: camping with lovely partners

Edited by kriti_6teen - 19 years ago
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Kripa met Aaliya in her room. Aaliya was pacing the room.
K: what's up Aaliya??? U look tensed.
AA: it's just that I don't trust Manik. He will definitely do something in the trip. I need to teach him a lesson which he will remember. But I don't know what to do?
At this pt Shabir entered the room.
S: to whom r u teaching a lesson Aaliya??
Aaliya now had began to him so she told him all that Manik had done or said. Shabir was looking cool at this but his mind was making a plan to teach Manik a lesson. After Aaliya was done he comforted the girls & said
S: he will not be coming with us that's 4 sure.
AA: but how will v stop him.
K: v cant tell this to any1 as no1 will believe us. V have tried.
S: the way v stopped Damini v will stop Manik.
K: u mean the staircase……
S: yes tom morning Manik will have a minor accident & Anita will have to stay with him too. So ok.
GirlS: ok. Sir.

Next morning as predicted Manik fell off from the stairs as Aaliya had told the servant to make the floor slippery. Poor Anita had to stay with him to help him. All of them were happy at this new development especially Aaliya, Kripa & Shabir.
As they left they decided to have partners. So pairs were formed—K-A, Aaliya & Shabir, KK & Sheetal. When they reached their destination the boys began to setup tents while the girls began to set the things in order. They had set up three tents-
1) K-A
2) Aaliya & Sheetal
3) Shabir & Kartik
At first K-A were uncomfortable at this but then they thought that let the others not know what was up with them. They decided to enjoy camp fire 4 the night but found out that there wood was not sufficient. So they set out with their respective partners to get wood 4 the fire. Before leaving Shabir had given a map to every1 to reach the camp back. But purposely had given a wrong map to A-K to let them enjoy each other's company & to give them some privacy.
A-K had collected enough woods 4 the fire but were not able to get back to the camp thanks to Shabir. Kripa was giving directions to Angad but they failed to reach their destination. Angad was getting frustrated at this.
A: do u know to read the map?
K: yes I do. I have attended many camps with my father. But y r u asking this?
A: because u r reading wrong directions & v r visiting the wrong place. By now v should have reached the place.
K: if u r so smart at this y don't u do it.
A: ok. I will give me the map.
K(Angry): all urs.
The same thing happened with Angad.
K: now I believe even u don't know to read the map or v would have reached there.
A: fine. May be the map is wrong.
K: may be..
At that time it suddenly started raining. A-K looked around 4 cover.
After some time Angad was able to find a cottage.
A: come on lets go to that cottage.
K: do u know who's cottage is it? May be it's dangerous.
A: it will be more dangerous if some wild animal spots us here. I am going if u want to come u r most welcome.
Kripa was scared to b alone & she followed Angad.
K: wait 4 me I am also coming.
As they entered the cottage they found it to be in rags. No1 was there in the whole cottage. But thankfully they were able to find some dry clothes. While Kripa changed into a loose fitting night gown Angad had set up a fire to let them feel warm. As Kripa entered the room Angad was dumbstruck seeing her. He didn't even lift his gaze from her. Kripa was aware of this. She was but nervous a this but was also enjoying Angad's attention. After sometime Angad snapped out of his illusion & began looking 4 something around the room. He was bringing the room upside down. This was irritating Kripa.
K: what r u looking 4 Angad.
A: found it (HE held a blanket in his hand.)
K: & y were u looking 4 it?
A: because it is cold & u will need it. (as he wrapped the blanket around Kripa.)
K: I don't need it. I have already changed u take it. She gave it to Angad.
A: no u take it. I don't need it.
K: no u take it.
They again began to fight but suddenly Kripa lost her balance & was about to fall but Angad caught her in time. Their eyes met after a long time. The time had stopped for them. They were remembering the good time they had spent with each other. Suddenly the lightening struck & the magical movement was broken. They separated from each other feeling guilty of what the other might think about it. They decided to share the blanket.
In the morning as it stopped raining they set out to find their camp & were able to do so as the met Shabir & Kartik half the way. Shabir & Kartik were happy to see them but showed no surprise of seeing them so late.
A: were u guys looking 4 us?
KK: then who eles.
K: v got lost & the map was of no help.
S: it couldn't be (he bit his tongue)
A: what do u mean????
KK: by mistake Shabir gave u a wrong map. It happens. Right Shabir.
S: ya it does.
The girls were happy to see all of them back.
As Angad & Kripa went to there tent all the others decided o what to do next.
S: I think so this plan has flopped.
Aa: how can u say that?
Sh: by looking at them. So now v have to think of a new plan.
KK: but what can possibly keep them together?
S: all of us should put our brains 4 it.
KK: I got it.
Aa: what???
KK: v can say its Sheetal's birthday & v r arranging a surprise party 4 her.
Sh: but they can arrange a decorator 4 it.
S: I think it's ok. V will not let them go 4 decorator.
Aa: & knowing Kripa she will likes to do things herself.
KK: so every1 done with the plan.
All: yes!!!!!

In the evening Sheetal purposely remained out of site so that they could proceed with their plan. Every1 was talking about what to do next in the camp. But Angad & Kripa were lost in there different worlds. They were remembering all the moments they had spent together that night.
KK: by the way Kripa what r u gifting Sheetal next week.
K: what??? y should I be gifting her.
Aa; u forgot it!!
K: I forgot what??
KK: it is her birthday on Monday & today is Tuesday.
K: god how could I forget her birthday. But I think her birthday is in may??
S: no I checked her card its on this Monday.
K: now what can I do?
A: lets throw a party for her.
Aa: ya but let it be a surprise party. It will be fun 4 us to do it.
KK: ya I agree with it.
A: ok v will give her a party.
All: yes!!!
As Sheetal entered every1 was quite but Kartik winked at her telling her there plan had worked out.
Next morning they left for there house. They decided not to let Manik & Anita enter there plan as they would not keep the secret but Kripa, Aaliya & Shabir knew the real reason behind it. When they reached home Manik was still bed ridden & Anita was having a bad time keeping up to him.
Aaliya went to Anita's room as she wanted to borrow a necklace from her for a party to which Shabir had invited her but when she went there Anita was not there in her room. Only Maink was there.
Aa: sorry. When Anita comes back just ask her to meet me.
M: y don't u stay here till the time she is back. I am sure she will not mind. (he tried to grab her hand.)
Aa: u have decided not to improve. Even after I got ur leg broken, Kripa has slapped u, made u understand to stay away from me u will not give up.
M: I think u know me. I want to have u & I will get u. just wait & watch. U urself will come to me.
Aa: that day will never come.
And Aaliya left the room. When she reached her room Angad was waiting 4 her.
Aa: bhai what r u doing here? I thought u would be relaxing in ur room.
A: I would have been if I had not known what was bugging my sister!!!
Aa: bhai what do u want to say? Plz tell clearly.
A: y did u not tell me what Manik has been up to?
Aa: bhai… I thought u will not believe me. Even mom & Anita didn't believe me. They said I was getting him wrong. I was afraid.
A: if u would have told me I would have not let that rascal get into this house.. get him married to Anita..
Aa: bhai Kripa told u about it but u didn't even believe her. So I was afraid.
A: I know that was a mistake & I regret it. But in the future if he tries to misbehave tell me I will show him what is to trouble Angad Khanna's sister.
Aa: don't worry bhai Shabir is there.
A: what?
Aa: (Aaliya bit her tongue) ya he will help me.
A: he knows all about it??? Since when???
Aa: on the day v had to leave 4 camp he heard me & Kripa talk so v told him the whole story.
A: & how did Manik broke his leg?
Aa: (she laughed at this) well Shabir gave us this idea & v had put soap water on the floor & he fell 4 it.
A: gr8 I have got a wicked sister.
Aa: & also a very nice wife who will always help her sister-in-law.
A: that's true.
Aa: but bhai how did u know about Manik.
A: I wanted to look in how he was doing but I heard u guys talk & I saw his real face. Now I should go & apologize to Kripa 4 not trusting her in this matter. Take care ok. & keep me informed.
Aa: ok. (in her mind) hope our plan to bring u 2 close works bhai.

As Angad entered his room Kripa was setting their cupboard.
A: I am sorry Kripa.
K: Sorry 4 what???
A: I didn't trust u 4 Manki's matter.
Kripa was shocked at hearing Manik's name.
K: how come u know about it & u trust me on it.
Angad told her the whole story.
A: I think I will have to convey him the message in my style.
K: Angad what r u planning to do? Don't u go on hitting him. He is after all now ur brother-in-law.
A: I know that sweetheart. I will not hit him but just scare him.
Kripa was happy to hear the word "sweetheart" from him after a long time & she also knew that Angad will not do any thing wrong.
On the other hand Angad was happy that Kripa had not raised any objection to his calling her sweetheart. He believed there was still a future 4 their relationship.
Angad called up Shabir &Kartik in study. He told all that Manik had done with Aaliya. Kartik just wanted to hit Manik nicely but Angad & Shabir cooled him down. They then decided how to teach Manik a lesson.

Preview: Manik's scared of the boys
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guys plz comment or i will stop writing
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omg wow i would love to read the next part.........pls cont soon 😛

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