MayUr Gallery~World of Wishes~(~MN SS~Part7-Pg:59)

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Anila

@-Anila-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Thank u sooo much my SISters n APIs...
for wonderful comments...
m glad dat u all liked it...
m here on my learning process of writing though i know m nt dat good...
bt thank u sooo much for all d appreciation...
replied to u all...
love u ALL...🤗🤗🤗

😳 Anila(ANI)

Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago

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Anila

@-Anila-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Hi ppl...here is my another MAYUR OS...i wrote it for FIZU API...as she ordered me to write an OS...
So...FIZU API... dis is dedicated to U...love u lodsss...🤗

** A NIGHT OUT WITH MY STUBBORN WIFE **

Mayank was sleeping...wen he felt someone shaking him...n said something to him...wen he was recovering from his slumber...he recongnized d voice as it was none other dan his Adorable wife...who has become quite Stubborn nowadays...

Nupur: "Mayank utho!!! plzzz utho na"...she said still shaking him a bit...holding his hand..

Mayank:" off-hoo kya hain Nupur plzzz soney do.....kal raat ko bhi tumne soney nhi diya"...he answered wid annoying face eyes closed...(**meri pyari behno pehle parhlo.phir blush karna**)

Nupur: "kya!!! ek toh main tumhari wajah se sirf... tumhari wajah se... yeh sab seh rahi hoon... n tum mujhe hi dant rahe hoon"...she said dis eyes filled wid tears...

now Mayank knew dat she wont stop... if he didnt make her stop crying den it wont b good for both Nupur n der Baby...yes...Baby!!! Nupur was again pregnant..after der twin Pranav n Rahul...n now she is in her 8th month...so der was full on mood swing session going on...dat too on daily bases...evn last ni8 she didn't let him sleep as she wanted to watch "DDLJ"( **kaha tha na pehle parlo...as yeh FIZU api ke order par likha hain maine so no over dose of romance).....dat too on 2a.m at ni8...so Mayank like a good hubby has to get up...leaving his sweet sleep...for his Lovely wife...n seeing her face he realised it wont b dat easy toni8...coz her face showing *high alerts* for...a long list of mood-swing sessions...Mayank sat beside Nupur...who turned her face away seeing him...still crying..so Mayank hugged her from back...n rested his chin on her shoulder...

Mayank: "Sorry...m sooo sryyy Princess...dil se sry...duniya mein jitne sry hain sab sry...plz maaf kardo...i know meri... *sirf meri* wajah se hi toh tm itna kuch jhel rahi hoon...bt i was tired na... so galti ho gayi...n maine woh danta thori na tha...baas bola tha...bt sorry jo bhi bola uske liye...ab plzz maaf kardo...accha bolo kya hua hain...ab kya chahiye tumhe"...he said sweetly whc was irresistable for any one...

Nupur: "woh... mujhe Beach jana hain...abhi...she said melting wid his irresistable sweet voice"... as still she melt wenevr he said sorry like dat to her...

Mayank:" Beach!!! woh bhi iss waqt...Nupur time dekha hain raat ke 12 baj rahe hain...plzzz hum kal chalenge na... waise bhi abhi tumhare rest karne ka time hain...so plzz soo jao"...he said in hope she will agree...

Nupur:" off-hoo Mayank...kya rest rest lagake rakha hain...maine kaha na abhi jana hain mujhe...abhi matlab abhi...n ab tum itna bhi nhi kar sakte mere liye..."she pouted like a baby wid her full nautanki andaaz"...

n Mayank knew now...der was no escape..as he will hv to take her...to d beach..or else she will started to go by herself...so dey left der home silently as both Pranav n Rahul were sleeping wid der DADI...Shilpa aunty toni8... in her room...n after a while... here dey were standing in d Beach...Mayank wearing a T-shirt n pajama...n Nupur in her long knee length T-shirt wid leggings...Mayank wrapped a shawl around her as it was quite cold at ni8...d Beach was looking heavenly as it was moonlit ni8...n d sea was looking beautiful wid its own moon whc was a reflection of d real Moon...bt whc was now looking like another moon risen on d sea...Mayank helped Nupur to sat down on d soft sand...den he too sat down beside her placing his hand around her n wrapping her in his arms...Nupur too snuggled more...in her Husband's warm arms...as dis was d only place whc gv her a feeling dat she only belongs here...in his husband's protective arms...

Nupur: "Mayank...thank u...aj kal main bht tang karti hoon na tumhe"...she said still resting her head...on her husband's braod chest...

n Mayank who was enjoying d aura of calmness n having his life in his arms...looked at his life who was his wife...

Mayank:" han!!! so toh hain...bhttt tang karti hoon tum...he said playing wid his wife who hv turned extra emotional for her mood swings...bt suddenly he again saw d tears whc he hate d most...dweeling in his wife's dove shaped eyes...so he immediately said...arey Princess...kya hua...main toh majak kar raha tha...tum kabhi mujhe tang kar sakti hoon bhala...n waise bhi agar karr bhi diya toh kya...yeh toh har patni ka janamsidh adhikar hota hain apne pati ko tang karna...n mujhe toh meri Princess ka tang karna bhttt accha lagta hain...samjhi...so plzzz no crying plzzz...u know na hw much i hate wen u cry"...saying dis he kissed her tears...n den gv a light peck on her lips...

Nupur: "accha!!! asa hain kya..den good...toh jao aur mere liye panipuri leke aao"...she smiled n threw another demand...

Mayank: "kya!!! panipuri woh bhi iss waqt...n waise bhi its nt good for u n baby...aur Nupur tum hi dekho yeha abhi itne raat ko kaha se milega panipuri...kal hum phir yeha ayenge n tumhe jitna marji tum panipuri khana thik hain bt abhi nhi"...he said hoping dat his next day's offer will make her agree for it...bt Nupur toh Nupur hain!!!

Nupur: "nhi!!! mujhe abhi khani hain...kal hum phir ayenge baccho ke sath...bt abhi...mujhe panipuri khani hain...n u know mujhe panipuri kitna pasand hain...so kahin se bhi lao...bt i want it abhi...woh dekho waha band stalls hain na...waha jao unhe uthao kuch bhi karo...bt mujhe abhi khani hain...matlab abhi"...

as der was no other way left for Mayank to make his wife agree...so he started looking for any chat-wala...after looking many chat stalls he found a chat wala who was sleeping beside his chat stall...so he went to him n make him agree for making panipuri at dis time of ni8...n fir dis he evn paid Rs.100 extra...so here he was watching his wife who was enjoying her plate of panipuri wid delight...n she was looking sooo cute dat he cant help bt stare at his cute wife...after finshing two plates of panipuri...Nupur was enjoying d atmosphere resting her head on Mayank's chest...

Nupur: "Mayank...pata hain maine na Baby ka name decide kiya hain"...she said still being at d same position looking at d never ending sea...

Mayank:" accha...toh kya decide kiya hain tumne"...he said moving a bit...so now he can see his wife's cute face...

Nupur:" Ahana...accha hain na...mujhe toh bhttt pasand"...she said showing excitement like a baby who hv jst find a cute name for her doll..n in a way it was der doll ri8...

Mayank : "bhttt accha hain...bt tumhe kese pata ke ladki hi hogi"...he asked n saw her expression from a dreamy look to chcnged into a frown...

Nupur : "bass...pata hain...n waise bhi mere ghar mein 3...3 bete kafi hain...she said as a matter of fact"...still holding dat frown on her face...

Mayank: "3..3 bete!!! he asked as he cudn't get who was d 3rd one"...

Nupur :" hmm...3 bete...do mere...aur ek meri SAS ke...yani tum...ase toh bada mature bane phirte hoon mere samne...bt ghar mein jab Pranav n Rahul ke sath hote hoon toh bilkul ek aur bacche ban jate ho...By God!!! kabhi kabhi toh mujhe yeh lagta hain ke tumhara sara sadu-pann...bass mere liye hain"...she pouted like a baby...

Mayank : "accha!!! aur tum jo unke samne sadu mom ban jati ho uska kya"...he also answered back as cant digest d accusation of being a baby wid der babies...

Nupur : "dekho main koi sadu-wadu nhi hoon samjhe!!! usse maturity kehte hain..."she answered back...

Mayank :" accha thik hain meri mature mom...n han hum baby ki baat rahe the rmmbr...agr ladka hua toh"...

Nupur : "nhi! maine kaha na mujhe iss bar bass beti chahiye yani beti...agr nhi hua na toh dekhlena main tumhara kya haal karti hoon"...she said wid i-will-see-u-den look...

Mayank : "Nupur dis is nt fair...ab ismein bhi meri galti"...he said as seeing trouble for him after his own Baby's birth...

Nupur :" han...bilkul sab tumhari galti hain...so btr ke dua karo ke humey Ahana hi miley warna"...

bt b4 she cud utter another warning for Mayank...her lips were sealed wid his...for a nt so deep bt passionate kiss...as it was d only way for Mayank to stop all dese warning session from his sweet n lovely wife...who has turned into a total stubborn wife...bcoz of her mood swings...bt still as he loves his...dis Stubborn yet Adorable wife...n after dat she jst hugged him...n den dey jst enjoyed d ni8 to whc was ending n a nw sun was rising whc seemed to b jst born from d depth of d sea...n here ends...""A NIGHT OUT WID MY STUBBORN WIFE""...i.e wid Mayank's stubborn yet adorable wife...

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My(not-so)ROMANTIC Legal Advisorpg.23

Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

aww.. that was.. so.. cute and lovely.. update...

hahahahhahahahah😆

nupur and her never ending demands..

mayank is so.. seet..

like a good husband..

he follows all.. the desires.. of her adorable wife to fulfill them...

very very nice...

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Janiii...

EDITED:

Soryyy re eto late kore unres korar jonno...tui to janis amar xm chilo...and i wanted to post a biggg comment so late ho gayi...maafi manzoor kijiye SAHIBE ALAM...(Arti style)😆

Acha now my opinion is u shud and u hav to write more and moreee os from now...Isse req na samajhke order samjhegi toh behtar hoga...😈😆

Coz i just loveee this...😍

The starting ws cute and when mayank said 'sari raat sone nahi diya' i ws like☺️But tu toh fiza api ki hi behen hai..so tujhse bhi romance expect karna nahi chaiye..😆.But that ws cute ha...Bechara mayank...she made him watch the film whole night...

And the way u described the whole atmosphere of beach ws wonderful...I just loved it...😍

Awww beti ka naam ahana...hmm so that means eita tor 2nd baby r naam..wah wah ek Emaan and ek Ahana...Badi achi future planning ki hai tune.😉..Hauu aab beti nahi hogi tab bhi mayank ki hi galti..😲.(Actually chelederi galti...u-know-why)😆

And then the panipuri and last kiss..😍😍.Hayee im dead...they r sooo cute and romantic...Unke toh ladai mein bhi pyaar hai...Thats why i loveee my Mayur...

And i love this OS...So u better write more ok...
Lovee uuu...🤗

Edited by Auroni.92 - 13 years ago

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parul_bansal

@parul_bansal

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

hmm toh ms ANILA...

pehle wat will u prefer dant..ya tarifff... i guess dant se shuru karte hain ok... toh suno...n plss baki sab aap bhi isse khub danton meri baat toh yeh sunti nhi... madam jb main kehti huin aap itna achha likhti ho tb aap hmesha kyun kehti ho ki yeh achha nhi hai... jb i read this os then also u said it is not nic..its ending is not good ab dekha sabko kitna achha laga😛 miss remember u wri8 aesumesttt u r bestesttt samjhi

n aage se bola na ki main achha nhi likhti..toh i'll not talk to u ..n nw i m serious...

achha baba ab dant ka kota pura ab itni achhi writer ki tarifff ho jaye...

toh miss this was awsumesttt

ur bestesttt piece of work is this

i liked it to the core...

waoo meri nupur...or i say jhansi ki rani...

n mera bechaara mayank...

they were so damm romantic...

n nupur n uske tantrums jo ki kbhi khatam nhi honge

aadhi raat ko beach wo toh samjh aaya bt aadhi raat ko chat...baaap re sirf mayank hi sambhal sakta hai usse😆

n ab agar beti nhi hui..toh bechara mayank to gya...

god help him😆

vryy nic

keep writing ji

thanks 4 the pm

may god bless u

ps- agla os jaldi n romantic😳

Edited by parul_bansal - 13 years ago

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

res...thnks dear..will read and coment at nite EDITED

ANUUU

THIS WAS SO AWESUM N CUTE LOVED IT TO CORE

acha tu mein romance k khilaf hoon han han kahlo beta ..nhi do gi ab tu WWU ki update...

it was so sweet jani

nupur ang her tantrums..loved it..bechar mayank...woh tu pehass gaya..

per sahi bhi hai us ki hi galti hai😉

it was perfect anu the way i wanted sweet romantic..and waooo

the best was ur way of decribing moon shadow on sea..tht was outstanding👏

locly do write more

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

OMG Anila- what is this yaar

Itna accha OS.. awesome hun

It was so cute , beautiful and fantastic OS

Simply fabulous yaar

bahut bahut maza agayi ise padke

By GOD nupur was so childish and cute and maynk a good and caring hubby

Hehehehehe nups ki demand pe demand……poor mayank ki halat he kahrab ho gay..lol lol

OMG agar ahana nehi hua pher bhi wo maynk ko blame karegi??

Bapre mannaparega- jahnsi ki raani nupur kumari title use isliye he mili hai..

So sweet OS ani..

Plz do write more n more OS…..

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TheLeo_M

@TheLeo_M

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

so nice and cute update...

nupur and her mood swing ... what to say about her... she is so cute here...

superb, just loved it...

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#119

cute and sweet one
loved the name Ahana
thanks for the pm

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nerdndproud

@nerdndproud

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#120

cute os anila. loved it. write more

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