Anjaan-AK FF pg.117 10/12, THE END - Page 6

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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
that was great! I think Mishty deserves a really tight smack on teh cheek! Im glad angad and kripa are Friends now continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#52
Great part plz continue. 😊 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
lovely plz con soon now i no when a n k fall in love then josh ll come thwn he n mishti willmake plan 2 saprate angad n kripa plz con soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
that was really good, u hav 2 cont, soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: karipa

lovely plz con soon now i no when a n k fall in love then josh ll come thwn he n mishti willmake plan 2 saprate angad n kripa plz con soon

you can't guess who is going to seperate angad and kripa becuase i only didn't planned to seperate them

sweety

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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice story cont soon plz 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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THANKS TO EVERYONE FOR WRITTING COMMENTS

recap:

angad and kripa become friends

in the night

angad in his room takes out the paper

a: hey kripa your are really beautifull, i never thought that i can see you directly and that too we will become friends.

at the same time kripa in her room takes the paper

k: you are so handsome angad, but i don't think that we will get married becuase misthy loves you and you see tear fall on her cheak

next day morning

angad is out on jog and kripa too nad they both end up halt at the same beach they both sit on the sand but a little far from each other

angad sees kripa, he camly goes to her and sits next to her, kripa has closed her eyes allowing the fresh breeze to refresh her

a: (thinking) she looks like an angel, he come scloser to her face he was about kiss her when suddenly she opens her eyes to see angad staring straight into her eyes they both stare at each other for a while

angad comes back from his trance

a: kripa tum yaha

k: angad i need to ask you that question, beacuase i come here daily for morning jog

a: oh, i came here just today for a change

k: oh , can i ask you something

a: haan pucho

k: with a innocent face, kya mitshy apki girlfriend hey kya

angad can't stop looking at her

a: laughing, kisne kaha tumse ki misthy meri girlfriend hey

k: kisine nahin kaha, ijust asked you

a: haa bhi aur na bhi

k: main samji nahin

a: pagal, its so simple oh meri girl friend issliye hey ki she is a girl aur naa issliye ki main vuse pyar nahin kartha

kripa is happy inside but doesn't show it out

k: acha angad i need to go now

a: ok bye , see you tomorrow

k: bye

they bid bye to eachother head back to home

kripa after gettign into her room she dances

k: yes yes he does love her yes yes and suddenly she becomes dull and thinks to herself does he love anyone else, lekin mujhe kyu ye sab main ye sab kyun soch rahi hu thinking taht she goes to take shower

i know this is a small part, i will write another part later in the day hope you guys like this part

sweety

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Posted: 19 years ago
#58
awwwww..tht was really sweet and cute!!..i love ur fanfic sweety!!..its different!!!!..i cant wait when they realize their luv for each other!!..plzzz continue!!..i cant wait!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59
Plz continue that part was nice.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
lovely part!! plz continue soon!!!


take care
Laiba

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