Anjaan-AK FF pg.117 10/12, THE END - Page 34

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Posted: 19 years ago
that wuz great....i think of akshi as that grl vedika in jjkn she is soo cute 😊 ...plz cont. soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks to everyone for writting encouraging comments
next part will be posted today
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angad takes akshi inside khanna mansion, looks that naina is really worried
na: aliya kaha ho ithna sara kam bakhi hey ghar main koi dhyan nahin dhetha sham ko engagement hey aur sare ke sare preperations vayiseki vayse hey .....aliya kaha ho
aa: abhi ayi mom
a: mom
naina looks at the door
na: angad aghaye tum, adha pareshan dhur hogayi meri,
she notices akshi who is smiling at her, arey ye pyari si pari kuan hey angad
a: oh main badh main bathavungha mom
aliya just then comes down stairs running carrying so many covers in her hands
a: arey ali sara saman ek sath ku layi
aa: oh bhaya kya hey na, mom ek taraf se bhula rahi thi aur dhusri taraf mujhe kripa ke liye jo gifts liye tho oh bhi packing karni hey aur....
a: bus bus abb ek kam karo oh packets vaha rakh dho ramu kaka(servant) dekhenghey , tum akshi ko lekar jao aur dhono ready ho jana
aa: ok lekin abhi se tayar hokhe kya karenghey
a: arey tum ladkiyan tayar hone main sara dhin lagha dhengey issliye abhi shuru kiye tho shayad mere engagement hone thak tum log ready honghey
na,a,ak: Angaddddddddddddddd
aliya and akshi run for angad all the house, seeing this naina is really happy atlast angad comes and hides behind naina
a: mom bachao mujhe nahin tho ye dhono mujhe mere engagement se pehle hi mar dalenghey
aa: mom app iss bar bichmain (middle) nahin aye tho hi acha hey , ajj main vuse chod ne valli nahin hun,
a: maine kya kiye sach hi tho bhola, app hi bhuliye mom don't you ladies take such a long time for getting ready
naina turns towards angad and twists his ear
na: abhi bathathi hun
a: ouchhhhh...... mom dhardh ho raha hey chodiye na
just then dilip enters the mansion and hears the conversation
na: kya kaha tumne, hum log bahuth waqt laghayenghye ready hone main
di: sach hi tho hey
naina looks towards
a: thanks dad , dekh maa papa bhi mere taraf hey
he goes to his dad and hugs him
a: abb bholo
aa: acha tho ye bath hey chalo dekthey hey ajj kuan jaldhi ready hogha
a: dekhenghey hum bhi kuch kam nahin

in the evening everyone got ready but angad is taking alot of time

angad is wearing this by the time he comes down he only sees aliya and akshi waiting for him

a: ali mom aur dad kaha hey

aa: oh kya hey na bhaya tumhare liye wait karke karke thakgaye hey aur hall ko chale gaye, akshi abb patha chala na kuan jadhi tayar hogha aur kuan late karegha

ak: aliya humain tho pehle se hi patha hey lekin shayad angad ko patha nahin and she gives a hi-fi to aliya

a: abb bus bhi karo....

aa: aur chalo nahin tho sochengha kahi dulha ko koi kidnap tho nayi kiya na

akshi and aliya both giggle

a: hehehe very funny chalo

and 3 of them reach the hall where everyone is waiting for him, angad is meeting everyone but his eyes are in search of kripa, at last he finds kripa in between her friends who are really trying hard to cover so that angad can't look at kripa.

angad goes to the group of girls but just josh, prithvi and karthik comes there and pulls him away

a: arey kya hey

j: arey jara hum bhi dekhey kithney tadap raha hey bechara

josh is wearing this

a: vaysi koi bath nahin yaar bus ek bar kripa ko milkar atha hun, sirf ek bar

p: kya angad , shaadhi ke badh tho hume kaisi bhi bhuljayegha abb tho humare sath spend kar

prithvi is wearing this

a: no no main tum logo ko millungha na badh main please yaar

ka: yaha kya ho raha, kyun bechare ka tang kichtey ho, angad thu ja, jake kripa se millo

karthik is wearing this

a: thanks karthik and he runs from their

j: kya karthik tum bhi na

ka: abb maine kya kiya

p: kya kiya angad ko jane dhiya

ka: tho kya huva

j: jane dho apka kuch kiya na ja saktha, chal prithvi hum jake atleast ladikiyon ko pattayenghey

saying that josh and prithvi are about to go, but karthik holds them both

ka: arey pagal dostho ek bar udhar dekhiye tho sahi

saying this he points towards angad who is trying real hard to meet kripa but her friends are not allowing him

ka: abb samajh main ayi aghar maine vuse jane dhiya tho bhi kya kripa ke saheliya vuse kripa se milne nahin denghey

p: karthik you are great chalo jake hum bhi kisiko dhundlenghey

ka: chal....... his mouth is open and he is looking at the figure who is coming inside

prithvi and josh also see in that direction and they are also shocked to see that figure

camera slowly zooms on to the persons face and its misty

misty is wearing this

m: hi guys

j: arey misty you are looking amazing

prithvi closes karthik's mouth

p: ya its true misty , josh humain dhusre sotho se bhi milna hey na , misty ek kam karo tum karthik ko company dho main aur josh abhi athey hey

m: ok fine

karthik is still in trance

m: hi karthik

he doesn't repond, misty shakes karthik

ka: oh hi misty

m: kah ko gaye ho karthik

ka: oh kuch nahin, you are looking gorgeous

m: thanks

josh and prithvi are busy looking for girls to flirt, josh sees girl talking to someone with her back towards him

j: prithvi i think mujhe ek ladki already milgayi hey and he goes towards that figure and taps on her shoulder, the girl turns and josh is shocked to see aliya

aliya is wearing this

josh never saw aliya like this, she always more like a tom boy, he is totally fallen for her

j: aliya tum

aa: haan kyun

j: maine tho tumhe piche se dekhey socha koi kubhsurath ladki hogi 😉

aa: mathlab 😡, ladki nahi hun kya

j: oh bath nahin

aa: mathlab main kubhsurath nahin hun kya

j: soch na padegha 😆

aa: joshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh😡

all the akshi is giggling looking at josh and aliya

josh runs from their

ak: aliya

aa: bends down, kya hey akshi kuch chahiye

ak: tum josh se pyar karthi ho na

aa: kya

ak: haan mujhe patha hey, mere class main tina hey na vuse bhi rahul bahuth pasand hey, rahul har waqt vuse sathatha hey aur rahul jane ke badh tina kehthi hey i love you rahul

aa: shayad tina ko hey lekin mujhe kuch nahin hey ( thinking, arey yaar ye bath tho josh ko samjhni chahiye )

angad is tired of going through group of girls to meet kripa, atlast suryaban comes and rescues him by announcing that its the time to exchange rings

all girls move aside and angad got the chance to see kripa

kripa is wearing this

kripa is looking gorgeous

angad slips the ring into kripa's finger and kisses on cheek , she hits him playfully as everyone is seeing, kripa slips the ring, its time for dancing

kripa and angad goes to the dance floor first, josh drags aliya to the dance floor, karthik goes to misty

ka: may i have a dance with you(under his breath, the queen of my heart)

misty just nods her head

prithvi is looking for some one to dance, akshi is with naina and dilip, sakshi is standing with suryaban

sakshi is wearing this

prithvi goes to sakshi and asks for a dance , sakshi looks at suryaban , suryaban nods his head and sakshi goes to dance with prithvi

everyone is happy, after a while when angad and kripa are dancing akshi comes to angad

ak: angad may i have a dance she forwards her hand

k: angad ye bachi kuan hey

a: ye meri friend ki beti hey

k: oh, bends down to akshi, hi akshi iam kripa and they both shake hands

kripa feels like she knows her before

k: akshi kya thodi aur dher main angad ke sath dance karu

ak: ok, no prpblem

akshi goes to dilip agian

party is over, marrige has been fixed in 2 weeks

thats for today , hope you guys like this part

please do write comments

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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwwwwww that was tooo cute...cotninue soon!!! the dresses were beautiful!!! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Pooja922

awwwwwwww that was tooo cute...cotninue soon!!! the dresses were beautiful!!! 😉

Thanks 😊

luv

sweety

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Posted: 19 years ago
awwww akshi is sooo adorable yaar...the part was sooo cute...and the dresses were mind-blowing...plz plz continue soon...
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Posted: 19 years ago
Awwwww 😳 that part was too sweet and good! Cont. soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
gud part
cont soon
i liked some of the dresses
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Posted: 19 years ago
hi freinds,
Thanks alot for your comments
Iam going to finish this fanfiction by this month end as summer section will be starting
so their will be a new part almost everyday
Thanks again for your comments they really encouraging me
luv
sweety
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as everyone are tired from the party no one talks about akshi
akshi sleeps with angad
next day
during breakfast, akshi is still sleeping
angad,dilip,naina and aliya are having breakfast
na: angad beta aghar tum bura na mano tho
a: bhuliye mom kya bath hey
na: tumne akshi ke bare main kuch nahin bhola
a: oh actually mom,akshi ka mom meri achi dosth thi, jab main MBA kar raha tha, pichle bar jab main europe gaya tha thab milatha vuse, patha chala ki vusko ek ladke ne dhokha dhiya hey aur oh pregnant huvi, aur jab main nainital gaya tha, vuski parents wahi rehtey hey tho milne gaya aur patha chala ke vuski accident hogayi aur oh vuski memory kogayi hey aur oh akshi ko accept nahi kar rahi hey, issiliye maine socha jab thak vuski treatment hojayeghi thode dhino keliye akshi ko mere pass raklu
di: lekin beta tumhari shaadhi fix hogayi hey na, aur sare log kya sochengey, aur press ye sab rahethi hey kuan sa muakha mileghi kuan rumor likenghey bhol kar
a: tik hey papa main vuse dho dhin main nainital bhej dhungha
di: ok beta aur haan ajj tumhe office ane ki jarrurath nahin i will manage tum aram karo
a: ok papa
angad goes to his room
a:(thinking)main kya karu bhagvan
just then his cell rings and its from misty
mi: hi angad
a: hi misty
mi: angad are you ok
a: misty can i meet you, i mean are you free now
mi: ya
a: ok phir meet me at my home
mi: ok bus main ek minute main ayi
a: ek minute ?
mi: haan
a: misty tumhe ane main atleast 15 minutes laghengey na
mi: haan lekin jab main tumhre ghar main hu tho upper tumhare kamre ko ane main ek minute bhi nahin lagheghi na

angadlooks at the door and finds misty standing
mi: hey angad kya huva
a: misty main ek badi musibath main hu and i don't who can help me
mi: kuan si musibath appadi hey
a: tum jo tapak padi ho 😆 😆
mi: shut up angad abb sidha sidha bholo kya bath hey
a: i don't know where to start
mi: kahi se bhi
a: its big secret tum kisiko bhi nahin bhologhi, iam teeling you because i trust you
mi: ok
a: akshi ko mili kya tumne
mi: haan bahuth hi pyari bachi hey
a: akshi kripa ki beti hey
misty is totally shocked: kya bath kar rahyey, if this is a joke then its the worst joke angad
a: misty iam not joking , ok listen kya huva ki .....and he tells her the whole story of what happened to kripa
mi: oh no. it can't be true, kripa ke sath ye sab huva aur vuse kuch patha nahin
a: abb main mom aur dad ko kuch kahani sunadhiyalekin dho dhin main akshi ko nainital bhejungha bhi bhola, abb main kya karu misty kuch samjh main nahin a rahi hey, i don't want to send her back and i want give her my name lekin kaise
mi: ek bath bholo mujhe, tum kripa ko ye sab bholna chahtey ho
a: no i can't
mi: phir ek hi rastha hey, can you go in that root
a: kuan sa
misty and angad both discuss something in silence
a: misty kya kripa akshi ko accept kareghi aghar main ayise karu tho
mi: sure oh jarrur accept kareghi, aghar.....oh accept nahin kari tho main huna tum se shaadhi karne
a: haan..........kya kaha tumne misty and angad both run downstairs where akshi is playing with aliya
ak: kya anagd tum bhi humare sath khel rahey ho
a: haan, chalo ek kam kartey hum log jake kripa ko pick karlengey aur vaha se beach pe jayenghey khelengey phir sham ko picture dekhey ke bahar dinner karke ayenghey
ak: yayyyyyyyyyyyy
mi: angad tum ek kam karo tumhari red beauty ko nikhalo aur kripa pick karne chale jana, main, aliya akshi ke sath tumhe beach pe milenghey
a: ok and angad takes out his red beauty after a long time
aa: misty mujhe rastey main kuch kam hey tho thodi dher rukna padegha
mi: sure not a problem
angad goes to kripa's hospital and finds out that kripa is not at the hospital and she has kept leave for 3 weeks, so he goes to kripa's home
mi: aaliya kaha jana hey pehle
aa: mall ko
mi: mall ko ... aghar mall ko gaye tho ek dho gante easily lagenghey
aa: issliye tho mall ko chalenghey
mi: mathlab
ak: arey aunty thodi dher keliye angad ko aur kripa aunty ko akhel rehne keliye
aa: akshi chup
ak: arey maine kya kiye, ye aunty ko samjh main nahin arahi thi tho main bhol dhi
mi: ye 5 sal ki hey 20 sal ki
aa: mujhe math puch
ak: iam 6 years old not 5 or 20 aur mujhe sab patha hey
aa: acha aur kya kya patha hey tujhe
ak: yahi ke tum kal rath vale uncle se pyar karthi ho aur ye aunty ko vuss uncle pyar karthey hey aur ...
before akshi can say something aliya closes her mouth
mi: ye kuan si uncle ke bare main bath kar rahi hey
aa: mujhe kya patha, oh bath chodo aur jaldhi se gadi chalavo na
mi: ok ok
and they head towards mall
in the mall misty and aliya are shopping for akshi, suddenly someone taps misty, misty is turned back and shocked to see josh
misty and josh hug each other its a friendly hug, but aliya is feeling jealous, even she knows that misty and josh are just friends
josh look at akshi
j: mi sty who is she
ak: hi iam akshi and iam guest of Mr.Angad khanna, and forwards her hand
j: shakes his hand, nice to meet you akshi iam josh kapoor angad's....
ak: angad's best friend
j: tumain kaise patha
ak: mujhe angad ne bhola hey
mi: anywasy josh hum log beach ko jar rahey hey kya tum avoghey
j: oh thats great its been long time we had a picnic, ek kam kartha hun main karthik aur prithvi ko bhi bhulavungha aur angad ko tum bhol dhena ki oh kripa ko lekhar aye
ak: ye plan tho angad ka tha

thats for today
hope you guys like the part
please do write comments
luv 😊
sweety

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