Anjaan-AK FF pg.117 10/12, THE END - Page 31

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Posted: 19 years ago
tht was so cute where a was like her rooms here thn evry1 started laughing
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: sweety223

because she rejected josh and angad was josh's friend, she can't be friendly with him but atlast they are going to be best friends.

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sweety

cool😛thx for answering 😳

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: angadlover<3

omgg...the next part is it going to b abut kripa's daughter???... cant wait for the next part!!...and btw the last part WASNT boring..it was gr8..plzz continue..

Thanks alot 😳

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Posted: 19 years ago

angad and kripa spend all day shopping

next day
kripa is taking rounds in the hospital with chief doctor and her cell starts vibrating, kripa looks at the number it is from angad, when she is keeping her cell phone back in her coat doctor turns towards kripa.

doc: Ms. Kripa no cell phone during working hours
k: sorry doctor and she switches it off
during lunch when she goes to her cabin to fresh up, a nurse comes upto her and gives her a rose with a card
kripa smiles and opens the card and its from angad

jab se thune meri dil churaya
neend nahi hey ya chen
soch tha huva har waqt tujhe baho main barlu
thaki kabhi dhur na ja paye thu mujh se
rakh lu tujhe har waqt mere ankhon ke samne
aur dekhtey rahu vun akiyo main mere liye bara huva pyar
kab hogha ye sab sach
kab hogha mera sapna pura

I MISS YOU Kripa

kripa smiles and her eyes are filled with tears, she calls angad
a: hey kripa I think you got my card
k: meri jaan tujhe main bassa hey
sochthi hu ankhain bandh karlu aur thu mere samne aye
mujhe apne baho main liye
shayad bhol jaovunghi main apne apko
lekin kabhi nahin bhul pavunghi tujhe

I MISS YOU TOO Angad

a: abb mujhe bhi rula dhiya naa
k: angad mujhe tumse milna hey ajj sham ko kithney bhaje tum log ja rahey ho
a: sham ko nahin abhi dho gantey main hum nikhal ne vale hey
k: kya
a: ek kam karthey hey close your eyes and take my name and I will be in front of you
k: nice joke tumhare office se mere hospital ko ane main ek ganta laghe gat ho ek minute main kaise avoghey tum
a: try tho kar lo
kripa closes her eyes and angad comes into the room
(angad was outside the room all the time kripa is talking to him)
a: open your eyes kripa
and his disconnects the phone , kripa opens her eyes she is shocked to see angad in front of her

NOTE: these are my own poems please don't copy

thats for today sorry for the short part
next part will be about kripa's daughter
please write comments
luv
sweety

Edited by sweety223 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: sweety223

no one liked it 😭 😭 😭



awww...dont cry...i didnt like it....I LOVED IT YAAR...gr8 job..tht was a cute part..and swt poem..plzzz continue..
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Posted: 19 years ago
Great part! Luved your poems! Cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: angadlover<3



awww...dont cry...i didnt like it....I LOVED IT YAAR...gr8 job..tht was a cute part..and swt poem..plzzz continue..

Thanksssssssssss alotttttttttttttt😳

luv

sweety

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: amneetkaur_24

Great part! Luved your poems! Cont soon!

Thanks 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
its great the poems are lovely continue soon 😊
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kripa opens her eyes and sees angad infront of her, she hugs him tightly
a: kripa chale
k: hmmm chalo
they go out for lunch, kripa has taken day off
angad goes to kripa's house as they will be strating from their, suryaban is waiting for angad
a: namste papa
su: chale beta
a: haan
and they both start in angad's car, they reach in the night around 8 pm (i don't know how long it will take from mumbai to nainital)
while getting down the car
a: uncle app chaliye main saman lekhar atha hu
suryaban goes inside and dadi opens the door
da: kaise ho beta
su: main tik hu lekin akshi (kripa's daughter) dhikayi nahin de rahi hey , so gayi kya
da: nahin oh tujhse naraz hey
angad enters ,dadi looks at him in her own style (cheshama nichey karke )
su: maa ye hey angad khanna, jiske bare main maine phone pe bath kari
a: namaste dadi
da: jithey raho beta
su: akshi upper hey beta, tum fresh up ho jao main vuse nichey lekhar atha hu
a: kya main bhi apke sath
su: smiles, chalo
angad and suryaban goes up to akshi's room
room is fully decorated with different types of soft toys, in the center of teh room their is a car bed on which a 5 year old girl is sitting with her hands folded
su: hi girl friend
she turns her face other side angad is standing at the door looking all this
su: bahuth gusa hey apko mujhpe
akshi nods her head saying yes
su: kisliye
ak: ajj kuan sa dhin hey
su: ajj thursday hey
ak: tho apko kuch yaad nahin hey
su: kya hey ajj ka dhin
ak: ajj mera janam dhin hey , apne mujhe wish nahin kiya , mere liye gift bhi nahin laye hongey app , last time bhole ki app mere liye bada gift (showing with her hands fully stretched to indicate big) layenghey lekin app kuch nahin lekar aye
su: maine app keliye gift laya
ak:excited, sach kaha hey mera gift dhikaye na
su: ek minute
suryaban looks at the door for angad but angad is not there so he goes down where dadi is arranging for dinner
su: maa angad kaha gaya
da: patha nahi, nichey aya aur bhola abhi avungha , mujhe puch ne bhi nahin dhiya ki kaha jaa raha hey
just then someone knocks the door
su: main dekhungha and he opens the door in front of their is big gift box which covring the whole door
su: kuan hey
angad comes from behind the gift box
su: angad tum
a: oh ajj akshi ki janam dhin hey tho soch ek chota sa gift dhey dho
su: kya ye chotta sa gift hey
a: app andhar chaliye aur akshi ko nichey bulayiye
suryaban goes and gets akshi down
akshi sees the gift box in the center of the room
ak: WOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWW, hugs suryaban, Thank you dada, dada kya hey iss main
su: mujhe patha nahin
ak: kya
su: haan mujhe patha nahin , ye apke liye ek khass insan ne lekar aye and he points towards angad
akshi goes to angad who is standing along with dadi
ak: app kuan hey
angad bends down on his knees
a: main ...... main apka naya dosth, happy birthday akshi
ak: apne mere liye birthday gift laya
a: haan
ak: apka naam kya hey
a: angad
ak: can i call you angad
a: luaghs, yes
ak: Thank you and she kisses him on his cheek
angad is happy, suryaban and dadi has tears
akshi goes to suryaban
ak: dada main gift open karu
su: haan
akshi opens the gift with the help of angad, inside the gift box their is a huge teddy bear holding a birthday cake
ak: ithna bada teddy bear nere collection main nahin hey
a: apko pasand aya
ak: bahuth , apko kaise patha mujhe teddy bears pasand hey
a: dada ne bhola, abb jaldhi se cake cut karo aur hum dinner karenghey
akshi cuts the cake and every had their dinner all the time akshi is with angad, angad feeds her dinner,reads bed time story
next day angad wakes up and goes to akshi's room he sees her sleeping holding a teddy bear, he gets remember of kripa and he calls her
k: hello
a: hi sweetheart
k: don't talk to me
a: kyun kya huva
k: kal rath se tumhari phone ke liye aur abb yaad ayi main tum ko
a: oh thoda busy tha
k: chalo mujhe abhi hospital jana hey sham ko bath karunghi
a: bye
k: bye
da: akshi beta utho school ko dher ho rahi hey
ak: ajj school nahin jaonghi dadi, mujhe sona hey and she sleeps in dadi's lap
da: utha akshi , meri achi bachi hey na thu
ak: nahin main apki per pothi hu
a: akshi kya tum mere sath bahar ghumne avoghi
ak: wakes up, kab chalenghey
a: tum school se ane ke badh
ak: phir mujeh nindh a rahi hey and she pretends be sleeping
a: come on akshi utho, tum ready hoke school ko jao aur sham ko main tumhe pick karne avungha phir hum gumne chalenghey
ak: promise
a: promise

thats for today
hope you guys like this part
please please do write comments even if you don't like so that i can improve the story
luv
sweety

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