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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jass.KN


Most probably today...I have some ideas about more clashes between Father daughter ...how Mannat irritates Maan...to bring out laughter for readers
thanx dear
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i love to see that dear. . . . Its make fun. . .egarly waiting 4 next part. . . Love it
Edited by ANGILS.KALI - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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update ..ll give after some time

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jass.KN

<update ..ll give after some time

thans . . . Will you going to post 2moro?
Will be waiting. . .
Edited by ANGILS.KALI - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74

Hey Buddies here is next part.plz go through it n comment..let me know what u want ..any twist n turn.

Part 13

Next Day

Here in KM Mannat was getting that lov in jst days..which She never got in years….But Maan He was what he was..nothing could effect him….Ya He was worried about Mannat's secret… But had no emotions for her…He was pretending so or really was such …nobody knew ..Even He himself

Around 5:30 n the evening…

Maan came back from KC ..This morning He left early coz much work was pending due to his emergency trip to Australia.So no Maan…Mannat clash in morning..n Eveybody in KM was waiting for their clashes.For Maan this was a big headache. But for family this was a Masala Movie.Mannat didn't know what to say in front of Maan. So She always said what She felt…But Maan always search for words and this was need of time... His on wrong step could create big misunderstanding between Him n Geet.

Maan (started to shout): Vinod… woh flower vase jo main entrance k pass tha meri study main kya kar raha hai ?

Vinod: Woh Maan Sir Geet Didi ne kaha tha k main usko yahan study main rakh du.

Maan (He again put his one hand on waist n one on forehead): Yeh Geet hai to meri Bibi..per usko samjhna badda mushkil hai Patta nahi kya kab kar de.Uske Babaji ko bhi nahi patta hoga

He was not aware that Geet was behind him..with a coffee mug in her hand.

Geet: Maan aap meri taareef kar rahhe hai ?

Maan: Aur kis ki taareef karru…aapke sivaa meri lif main taareef k kabil koi hai bhi nahi.

Geet: a lo…ek to maine aapka hi bhalla kiya..aur aap mujhe he sunna rahe hai..Vinod ne bataya mujhe k Sir chila kyon chila rahe hai….Vase hatta kar yahan rakh diya to kush galat kar diya(She was blushing in anger)

Maan: Nahi meri Maa aab mujh se bahas matt karna.Per koi kaaran to hoga….tumko patta hai na mujhe apni study main yeh phool paudhay nahi acchay lagtay…(He entangled his all fingers in front of her with a pity face )

Geet: Yeh kaheye na wajah janni hai. waise har cheese ki wajah bataani jaroori hai kya ?

Maan : Ya u r rite….har cheese ki wajah nahi hoti Espacially jo tum karti ho (He pointed his finger first toward Geet n then waved it in air )

Geet smiled under hi under n then busted in laughter.

Maan: aab isi hassi ki bhi koi wajah nahi hogi ?

Geet: waise Maan jab apko gussa atta hai.U looks so cute (she pinched on his both cheeks lik lil baby)


She knew how to handle her Maan…n her smile was enough to cool him down

Maan: Geet tum bhi na….u r impossible….kahan say kahan lay jatti ho …baat ko…


Geet: Ok ok Mr .Khuraana..I m jst taunting u.coz I was missing ur cute face in anger for so many days

Maan: Accha…itna miss kar rahi thi….to main door lock kar dun ….ji bhar k dekh lenna …( n he moved toward door )

Geet: Maan nahi woh….mujhe Dal k liye bindhi (lady finger) katni hai….nahi woh Arya k liye chay(tea) banaani hai …

But Maan locked the door n moved toward her…with small steps…with lots of passion in his beautiful big broad eyes….n Sensuous smile on his perfect M shaped lips….

Maan: Sssh chup bilkul chup (he trapped her in one croner of his study)

Maan: To tumko Dal k liye bindhi katni hai…ja pyaaz (onion)…Adhrak ( ginger) aur Tamatar (tomato ) katna hai…..Ha Geet…hamara 2 mahene ka beta chay kab peenay laga..ja Daddi Maa ko chaye denni thi..coz she usually hav tea at this time .

Geet: Maan jaane dejiye na…bahut kaam hai….(she was trying to push Maan away….coz She knew what was Maan upto )

Maan: Nahi Geet..kaise jaane dun…mujhe tang karne ki sazaa to milaygi (He whispered in her ears…Geet was loosing her control )

Both were looking in each others eyes when Maan removed her dupatta n threw it on his study table….unzipped her kurti .placing soft kisses on her back,neck ..n then lips….Geet put her both hands in Maan's hair pulling with full force she had. They were extracting each others juices with their lips.Suddenly Geet pushed Maan away n started to unbutton him….biting her chest….his neck…both of them had lost their control..undressed each other when Maan took her up to single bed in his study.Where sometimes he took rest during his work

Here they made lov for how much time..even they didn't know …She was feeling him deep inside making small noises every time. He entered her they were out of this world..when Maan's phone buzzed….Addi was calling….

Maan: Addi tumko issi time call karni thi ? (he shouted)

Addi : Sir kush khas kaam kar rahe thay aap..maine to yeh batanye k liye phone kiya tha kal ki presentation ki final details apko mail kar di hai.ok sir main rakhta hun .Sorry to disturb u (Addi disconnected)

Geet: Kya hua Maan aap itny gusse main kyon hai?(wearing her kurti Geet said)

Maan: gussy main . Addi duffer , is liye phone kiya k kal ki presentation details mail kar di hai..jo presentation maine khud tayaar ki hai Aur phir kehta hai Sir sorry to disturb u (He threw his phone on Couch )

Geet smiled: Accha he hua…kam say kum main to shoot gayi warna patta nahi kya haal hota mera (she murmured)

Maan: Geet kya kaha tumne tumhara kya haal hota.Hall to tumne kiya hai mera Yeh dekho….meri chest,neck, upper arms…yeh lov bites tumhare hi hai..maine khud ko to nahi kaata ( Maan showed lov bites where ever Geet bited him )

Geet: Woh to main uun hi..per shurru to apne hi kiya tha ….(rubbing her open hair Geet said hesitatingly )

Maan: theek hai shurru maine kiya .khatam bhi main he karta hu.(he moved toward Geet to catch her but She left room n closed door on his face.But her laughter was still buzzing)

He smiled: Is k kush nahi ho sakta..yeh ladki mujhko he pagal karke shodaygi

9 :00 pm on dinner table

Maan,Geet,Dadi Maa were there only.Dev n Nandini were out for a party..n Mannat….as always she had finished her dinner at 8 coz lil girl could not wait for this late.When She started to dozz no body knew..so Geet finished with her dinner around eight..But still she is awake coloring in her drawing book in livin room..jst front of dinning area so She was visible from there as always Aryaman was sleeping in pram coz everybody in this house never kept both kids aaway from eyes for a while…in this house….

Maan: Daddi Maa...Geet bataa rahi thi usne ek nayi recipe sikhi hai n she gonna try it…(he taunted looking at Geet)

Daddi Maa: Accha betay..per Geet apne humko ya Nandini ko bataya nahi..Maan ko batta diya jinka inse kush lena denna nahi

Geet: Nahi Daddi Maa..woh to main yu hi….

Maan: Nahi Geet tum ne kamal ki recipe batayi thi Daal wali Bhindi..jarror try karna

Geet(squeezed his hand n pinched him on arm from behind): Per Maan apko to Indian jayada pasand nahi..to fir aap

Maan was not able to shout ,patiently beared pain

Daddi Maa:Betay yeh aap table k nichey se ek dushray ko kyon tang kar rahhe ho samne kar lo hum kuch nahi kahtay (She smiled )

Maan: Nahi woh Daddi Maa..yeh Geet yahi mujhe tang karti hai hamesha ..maine isse pusha k vase meri study main kya kar rahha hai..to kehti hai mera bhalla kiya vase wahan rakh k…jab k sabh jante hai..mujhe study main yeh sabh pasand nahi

Daddi Maa: oh to yeh baat hai jis k kaaran aap ki yeh cold war chal rahhi hai.Maan humne he kaha tha Geet ko k vase study main rakhwa they.its too costly apko yaad hai ..apney hume gift kiya tha mother's day per..coz I lov different kind of vases….to hum apney betay ki di gift ko kyon khraab hone they (she explained the real reason )

Maan: Per Daddi Maa woh vase to kabka wahin hai..to achanak uskso kyon hatta diya ?

Geet: Maan nothing serious Mannat Nandini k sath lukha chipi kheltay Kheltay….vase k pichay ship gayi..aur completely chipney k chakkar main vase gir challa tha…jab Nakul ne usko pakad liya..n Daddi Maa ne kaha isko study main rekhney ko….Study k interior se match karta hai..so…aur kush…

Maan: Nahi nothing else..I m fully loaded with lil food n more Mannat talks (he put his hand on stomatch)

DaddI Maa: betay Mannat ka apke khaney se kya connection..hav ur dinner beta…

Geet: Daddi Maa I think Maan is feelin jealous k Hum aaj kal unse jayada Mannat per time spend karte hai

Maan:Mannat again every thing revolves around her in our house these days…But me not fellin jealous…aur kyon…..mera ghar hai…per ha agar app logon ne baat challa he li….really u r concentrating on her more than anything else

Daddi Maa: Let it go Maan .She is a lil grl .look at her…ek bin Maa ki bacchi hai..agar humare thoday se pyar se usko khushi milti hai to hamara kya jatta hai..pyar kya hai ,nafrat kya hai ? kya patta usko

Maan first time looked at Mannat with Daddi Maa's eyes . She was making aeroplane out of a paper….He smiles with his well reserved smile..which came on his lips rarely.But when he smiled that always from depth of his soul….But suddenly that disappeared.Daddi Maa n Geet noticed that But they behaved lik they r unaware of it.


Friends plz comment n hit lik ..I ll pm my buddies as soon as possible till then if u find comment n giv ur response

lov

Jass

tons of thanx😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Buddies here is next part.plz go through it n comment..let me know what u want ..any twist n turn.

Part 14

Daddi Maa:Geet I hav finished so I think I should go to room..bahut thak gaye hai…hum Aryaman ko apne room main lay jatay hai…aap jarra Mannat ko sulla dejiye…

Maan: Daddi Maa its almost 10 aur is time Geet should breastfeed Arayman its much necessary then this girl . I think aap Mannat ko apne sath lay jaye…..

Geet: Maan Daddy Maa is too much tired….Khuraana Trust ka jo charitable hospital under construction hai Daddi Maa visited that today…..so don't u ask her this…Daddi Maa Arya ko is liye apne sath lay k ja rahi hai..coz he is sleeping….aur apko bhi apna pending work complete karna hoga…so usko akela nahi chod sakktay..n to handle Mannat for sleep is a tough job…jst lik u..jaise aap raat ko sonne say pehlay…kitni karvat badltay hai..how much u rub urlegs on bed …even u don't know . But I know

Maan: mere jaise….how Geet….pehlay u should care Arya..after that do whatever u want with this girl..?

Suddenly Mannat came to them..But she stopped far away finding Maan in front of her….

Geet: Mannat beta why r u there ? come to me

Mannat: Humko uncle se darr lagta hai..per humko sonna hai…

Maan: yeh ek baat kyo repeat karti hai..humko uncle say darr lagta hai..main rakshash hu kya (Maan got irritated)

Geet: DD to aap ho .Everybody nows .But I hav n idea.everything gonna sought out…I ll tak Arya..aur aap Mannat ko sulla kyon nahi detay..n plz deal her with lov…shayad apko DD samjhna band kar they (she smiled)

Maan: R U made Geet .But for me nothing is impossible..I m Maan Singh Khuraana…Arya ko lo…n go to ur room…I ll take care of her….not k mujhe iska mind change karna a bout me..But u challenged me …I gonna complete this task …usko sulla dunga

Daddi winked ..looking at Geet n ladies left…Daddi to room..n Geet took Arya to their room .

Mannat: Maan uncle aap Mannat ko sulaye gay …?

Maan: Nahi Maan uncle apko song sunaye gay is adhi raat ko ( Maan made face in front of her)

Mannat: Apko song aatta hai ?

Maan:kyon tumko aata hai ?

Mannat: Ha humko atta hai..per promise me aap hamara song sun kar humko datty gay nahi

Maan: Bas bas..aab challo room main..kya musibat hai

Maan took her to room

Maan: aab chalo bed per jakar close ur eyes..aur so jayo main yahi beitha hun(he gav instruction to her….n started to check his emails on his phone…sitting o sofa)

Mannat was lookin at him putting both hands under her chin n What he was doing when Maan noticed her.

Maan: tum so nahi rahi ? aur mujhe kyon dekh rahi ho aise.

Mannat: kush nahi..per apne to mera song sunna he nahi (she said with ease what she was thinking)

Maan: mujhe tumhare song nahi sunna..so jayo

Mannat: ok hum nahi soye gay…jab takk aap hamara song nahi sunay gay.

Few days in KM were enough for this lil creature…to pull out all her emotions ..even she didn't know what emotions were….But she was learning to express…with her laughter… with her shout ,with her anger ,with her stubbornness every felling a child could express.so thats why She had become stubborn in front of Maan.as She always afried of him.To got rid of her Maan asked her to sing..

Mannat:Sunaye theek hai ..aap pehlay hamare samne beith jaaye na …

Lik she was commanding him n he sat in front of her n without saying any other thing She stood up on bed…n started to sing song with actions

Babul Jo Tumne Sikhaaya

Jo Tum Se Paaya

Sajan Ghar Le Chali

Sajan Ghar Le Chali

Sajan Ghar Main Chali

Yaadon Ke Lekar Saaye

Chali Ghar Paraaye

Tumhari Laadli..!

Maan was shocked to listen this from a tiny mouth..n He also stood up from couch

Mannat: Maan uncle apko acha nahi lagga…

Maan: Nahi acha tha (he was shocked ) yeh song kahan say seekha tumne ?

Mannat: Yeh humko Bua Daddi sunati thi…per Mannat ko bas itna atta hai…patta hai aaj humne TV pay same song sunna jab Nandini aunty dekh rahi thi ..aur humko fir say yaad aa gaya….T V main jo aunty singing kar rahhi thi unhonay bhi kya Daddi bua se song sikha tha Maan uncleee ? (revolving her round eyes she took uncle too long )

Maan: Nanhi .ha .woh (He was in search for words).

Mannat: Uncle aapko bhi ronna aa raha hai ?

Maan:kyon ?

Mannat: patta hai Woh bhi jab ek aunty singing kar rahi thi to so many aunty uncles were also crying kyon ro rahe thay woh aur Daddi Bua bhi roti hai…

Maan: Aur tum?(he smiled looking without blinkin )

Mannat: Nahi hum kyo roye…jab aap humko Tina Massi k pass say lay kar aaye thay tab roye thay per fir Mannat ko rona nahi aaya.

Maan: Theek hai aab song ho gaya..aab tum so jayo…Maan laid her on bed n put comforter on her.

Within few second She was in deep sleep.But this lil girl's song emotions put deep impact on Maan's mind which made him to think about Mannat once again

Friends plz comment n hit lik ..I ll pm my buddies as soon as possible till then if u find comment n giv ur response

lov

Jass

tons of thanx😳

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow I am first to comment today.
Jass Loved it Loved it loved it...
Particularly PART 14.
The song was Oh so tear jerking...
Loved Maan's reaction to Mannat singing it and to her innocent questions.
Also am loving the way Mannat is now transforming into becoming a normal little girl.
Pls continue soon dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 14 was exceptionally good
mannats song ws awesum
brought tears to my eyes
ab shayad maan ko ehsaas ho jaye ki woh is choti si ladki ka babul hain
plz mannat deserves love from maan

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mehek25

Wow I am first to comment today.
Jass Loved it Loved it loved it...
Particularly PART 14.
The song was Oh so tear jerking...
Loved Maan's reaction to Mannat singing it and to her innocent questions.
Also am loving the way Mannat is now transforming into becoming a normal little girl.
Pls continue soon dear.


thanx dear..even I hav no words ..thax for ur comments
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Posted: 13 years ago
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mannat's part ws so emotional...i really feel sad for her...continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thnx 4 pm

Part 13

Adi...Kabab mein haddi 😆

Part 14
Nice plan by Dadi n Geet ...Mannat's song was fabulous ...it was very touching ...maan shouldn't behave badly with mannat

update soon

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