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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jass.KN

GONNA POST NEXT IN TWO HOURS


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry Buddies there is Jagran in near by house..so I visited them...n now I m watching Geet HSP...so after few hours I ll b back 😊

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Hey Buddies forgive me I was not able to update this thread..But here I m...u ll lik this...plz respond towards this..n ur response .. appreciation is my way

😊 PART 9😊


Daddi had decided to take Mannat with her.She was aware that which kind of storm was wating for her..But about after effects ... She was not sure...whether good or bad…?...She told Daddi Bua that She would convince Geet…n this was true…How that was important...?

Daddi had lil time to think ……so She had to take action as soon as possible in few days.On the other hand Daddi Bua was also fed up staying aloof …away from free n peaceful lif of Village …She decided to go back next morning…Daddi asked her to stay but she was not ready

Daddi Maa: Laxmi aap itney din yahan rahi..aab kush din hamare sath rehiye na.


Bua Daddi : Nahi Bhabi main to gaon jayungi aab..Iski chinta thi..per aab nahi main janti hun aap sabh smbhal langi.(She put her hand on lil Mannat)

Mannat was again on a new journey .But this journey had a destination..A final verdict of her life was awaiting .


Khuraana Mension

Time 1:15 pm

Holding Mannat's lil hand Daddi entered Khuraana Mension .This time Mannat was not sad…Hopes were there in her innocent eyes….But What were her hopes…Even She didn't know coz lif had never given her right to wish anything from anybody .Daddi asked Vinod to place Mannat's stuff in Guest room till... She could prepare a room for her..in her own home.

Daddi took Mannat to sitting room n asked Nakul to bring juice n snacked for her

Mannat: Yeh Maan uncle kar ghar hai ?

Daddi Maa: ji beta ..per yeh aapka bhi ghar hai.

Mannat(looking in Daddi Maa's eyes): Hamara ghar…apka ghar kahan hai ?

Daddi (laughed at her ): Betay yeh Hamara bhi ghar hai

Mannat: Accha…per aap kon ho ?

Daddi Maa (taking her in arms): Beta Hum Maan uncle ki Daddi Maa hai..aur Aap bhi humko Daddi Maa keh ker bulaye .

Mannat: Daddi Maa…!!!( She pronounced such a way that She took Maaa word too long )


Daddi Maa hadn't yet asked Mannat to call Maan Papa...coz ...She wanted time to analyse things .This was the first meeting of Mannat with Daddi Maa...But Mannat was too happy……Sometimes unknown feelings which can't be expressed…But make others to judge the reason.And Daddi had been clearly observed that in Mannat.She was moving here n there lik squirrel ….Daddi had decided to keep Mannat's secret..even from Dev..coz She was waiting fro Geet to come …

Dev Came home in the evening n surprised to see Mannt.But Before he could ask something Daddi came to him

Daddi Maa: Dev betay I know u wanna know ...who She is ? ...But u hav to wait for some time….let Geet n Nandini to come back home

Dev knew every step Daddi took that had any strong reason behind that .So it was better for him not to ask her .On the other hand Daddi was aware…about the day Geet had decided to visit Golden temple.n it was not good to give tension to them….so that they could pay homage with peaceful mind…n happiness


After three days….Geet n Nandini had visited Golden temple…Daddi made a call to Geet..n asked to came back with next flight….without giving them any reason..Geet n Nandini were upset..But they had no other option ..

Same Day

Time 2:30 pm

Khuraana Mension

Geet n Nandini were at home.Daddi Maa was too happy to see them back..But so many conflicts inside her. .How she would tell Mannat's truth to Geet.?.But there was no option.But before letting others to know this… She decided to tell only Geet this truth.. so She took Geet with her to Geet's room.

Geet : Daddi Maa kya baat hai aap kyon itni preshan hai.?.(She placed slowly sleeping Aryaman in cradle )

Daddi Maa ( hesitating to speak ): Geet betay Baat he aise hai..k apko batta bhi nahi saktay..aur chupa kar apko kisi dhokhay main bhi nahi rakh saktay.

Geet : Daddi Maa plz aap kuch bhi apnay dil main na rakhiye…jo hai batta deejiye..aur aap kyon keh rahi hai..k dhokha..dhokha aur woh bhi aap..aisa main soch bhi nahi sakti

Daddi Maa: Betay dhokha to kismat ne diya hai hum sabko ..jo hum apko batta nahi paa rahay ..to aap sun kar kaisa react karegi ( Daddi Maa got emotional )

Geet : Daddi Maa baat job hi ho..per mujhe aap per pura bhrosa hai….jo hai aap keh dijiye..yun ghut ghut k rehne se koi bhi hal nahi nikalta...

Daddi Maa: Geet aap k Maan ki zindgi main aane say kai saal pehle…Maan ki zindgi main ek ladki thi jise Maan pyar kartay thay shaddi karna chatay thay

Geet : Daddi Maa Sam naam than a uska …..

Daddi Maa : Aap janti hai…?...😲

Geet : Daddi pura nahi per itna..k Maan usse bahut pyar kartay thay….

Daddi Maa : per betta kaya say patta chala apko..?..

Geet : Daddi Maa …Maan ki yaadashat jaane say pehly...ek din Maan site per thay aur tej warish main bheg gaye ..sardi bhi bahut thi..isliye Ghar aatay aatay…Maan ko high fever aa gaya…

Daddi Maa: Ha such us time hum …Laxmi k pass gaon gaye thay aur aap ne phone per bataya tha…Per beta us incident ka Sam se kya baasta

Geet : Daddi Maa …Doctor ne injection to de diya ..per Maan ko fever itna tha..behoshi main patta nahi kya kya bol rahay thay ..tab Sam ka naam unke muh se sunna tha jab woh yahi baar yeh rahay thay bar bar ..'Geet …mujhe chod kar mat janna..Sam kyo kiya tumne mere sath aise.bolo Sam….Geet main tumse bahut pyar karta hun…tum Sam ki tarah mat karna mere sath….'aur sath main Maan jaise ro rahay ho.😭..unki akon say aasu ruknay ka naam nahi lay rahay thay..Per subha tak woh sabh bhool gaye ..what he was saying ?...Daddi Maa maine unse kuch nahi pucha k woh kon hai.?.kyonki mujhe apne aur Maan k rishaty per bhrosa hai..Maan ka kaha ek ek shabad mujhe mere babaji k bol lagtay hai…..

Daddi Maa( She had tears in her eyes): Itna bhrosa hai aapko apne Maan per

Geet: Bharose say bhi kahin jayada..koi Sam hamara rishta nahi tod sakti…Aur Daddi Maa maine Maan se Kabhi nahi pucha…. Kyonki yeh jaroori nahi k jaise Maan ko mere barre main sab patta hai …Main unka ateet bhi janu…Jo ateet that woh ek sach tha..per jo aaj hai woh bhi ek such hai..such yahi hai k Maan sirf mere hai…..

Daddi Maa: Betay Maan apke hai aur rehe gay..per agar kismet hi saath na they to …..agar apka ateet apke saamne aa khada ho to ..?

Geet : Daddi Maa aap kya keh rahi hai…?.Ateet samne khada ho…u mean to say Sam….?😡

Daddi Maa( She started to cry ): Beta Sam nahi per us ateet ki parshaai (shadow) Maan aur Sam ki Beti

Geet: Maan aur Sam ki beti …yeh aap kya keh rahi hai ( she fell on bed ).?.n she was jst lik a statue.

Daddi Maa: Beta hum jante thay aisa hi hoga jab apko patta chalega

Geet: Daddi Maa maine to Maan se kuch nahi chipaya to Maan ne kyon..kya unko mere uper yakeen nahi tha ?( She started to shout…)

Daddi Maa : Betay dheeray boliye ..Aryaman uth jayegay…Geet betay aaj Maan aap k fir say apna Maan cukkay hai..per betay..woh yakeen abhi aana bakki hai is rishtay main jo ...tab tha...jab Maan apse aur aap Maan say kuch nahi chipati thi...Woh dar gaye hongay beta .

Geet :mujhe unke aur Sam k rishtay k bare main kuch nahi jaanna..kya hua kyon hua…per aab kyon...aap ne kaha " agar ateet samne aa khadda ho to " iska matlab Sam n Maan ko dhoka diya... aur aab woh apni beti ko dhal banna kar …fir say Maan ko paana chahti hai…..mera ghar ujaadna chahti hai…Maan ko maine koh kar paya hai..aur himmat nahi hai mere main aab(tears came down on her cheeks)

Daddi Maa( she sat on bed next to her): Nahi Geet Sam phir say Maan ki zindgi main nahi aa sakti…Maan ne har darwaaza band kar diya hai uske liye.Per beta…baat Sam ki nahi us Nanhi se bachi ki hai..jiska na koi apna hai…na koi ghar

Geet: Daddi Maa to aap mil chuki hai ussay ?.

Daddi Maa: Ji beta woh issi ghar main hai ….

Geet was in big shock : Kya Daddi Maa aap usko is ghar main lay kar aa gayi.?.Mere ghar main .😲.usko ujaadnay k liye..Muje aap say yeh umeed nahi thi..😭

Daddi Maa: Betay umeed to na hum ko thi a Maan ko..aur Maan to yeh jaantay bhi nahi k hum usko yahan lay kar aaye hai..

Geet was surprised that Maan knew nothing about Mannat's presence here…after Daddi n Geet's garma garmi…Daddi told her everything…from Maan n Sam's relations to How Maan came to know about Mannat..n what action Maan took…..Geet calmed down lil bit after this...But it was hard to accept this fact..for Geet…..Months back same situation was in front of Maan..when Geet disclosed biggest secret of her lif….But Maan accepted slowly .. even that child.Now its Geet's turn…

Daddi Maa was waiting for her decision what Geet had made…

Daddi Maa: Geet batay kya socha apney.?.

Geet( wiping her tears): Daddi Maan mujhe kuch time chahea ..plz mujhe akela chod dejiye

Daddi nodded her head ..n She left


Hey Buddies after long ...I updated this in new thread..sorry for that...I hop u ll lik...plz comment..respond n hit lik


Tons of Thanx

Jass😛

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Buddies forgive me I was not able to update this thread..But here I m...u ll lik this...plz respond towards this..n ur response .. appreciation is my way

😊 PART 10😊

It was seven in the evening ..But Geet didn't come out from her room…Now this thing was to worry at.Daddi had disclosd Mannat's reality in front of Dev n Nandini too…….Unaware of everything Mannat was watching cartoons on TV.She hesitated lil bit in front of Dev n Nandini..But Daddi introduced them to her as Uncle n Aunty….

"Nandini Betay Geet abhi takk anhi aaye baahar..😲humko chinta ho rahi hai" Daddi Maa asked Nandini

Nandini : Daddy Maa jis ko humay apnanay main problem ho rahi hai..Geet Didi to sidhay usse juddi hai (She could feel that Grief from which Her sister was suffering )

Daddi Maa said nothing after that.

7: 50 pm

Daddi noticed Geet coming downstairs Arya in her lap.

Daddi Maa felt lil relief to find her in front.

Daddi Maa: Geet betay hum apka kab se wait kar rahe hai…per apney kaha tha u need time..so humne apko disturb nahi kiya

Geet : Thanx Daddi Maa….Mujhe patta hai..You r waiting for mu decision

Daddi Maa: Geet betay nahi hum apka wait apka decision sunnay k liye nahi kar rahe thay... But... coz Hum apsay pyar kartay hai…aur hamara baccha mushkil say gujar rahha ho..then hum shanti se kaise reh saktay hai

Geet gave Arya to Nandini and hided herself in Daddy's arms

Geet : Daddi Maan bahut mushkil hai yeh faisla lenna..aur aab mujhe patta chal rahha hai kaise Maan ne sab saha hoga...Per fir bhi Maan ne mujhe apnaya …Naam diya..mere samne ek dhall ki tarah khade rahe..Maine Maan ko kho kar paya hai..per Maan badle nahi..Ha unko time lagga.fir se pehle jaisa honne main .per mere pass to hai aab…(She had lots of lov in her eyes)

Daddi Maa: Geet hum jante thay koi bhi Sameera aur usse judi koi bhi cheese apkay rishtay to tood nahi sakti

Geet: Issi liye Manne faisla kiya hai…Main us bacchi ko apnane ki koshis karugi..isliye nahi k ek din Maan ne mujhe apnaya tha…balki is liye woh Maan ka ansh hai..Arya bhi…aur mere liye Maan se juddi kisi chotti say choti cheese bhi mayne rakhti hai..to yeh to ek jiti jaagti zindgi hai….Jo mere sath hua..uske baad bhi main apnay bacchay say nafrat nahi kar payi..k woh uski yaad hai jo mere saat hua

She continued

Geet : uskey liye sabh chod diya….Maan k sath bhi yehi sabh hua….Main Maa hokar apney bachay ko alag nahi kar pai..fir kya hua Maan pita hai…ek pita ka bhi wahi rishta hota hai ..jo maa ka .Mata Pita ka rishta to wohi rehta hai..isliye Mai usko apnane ki pehlay koshis karugi….

Daddi Maa: betay Hum jantay hai aasaan nahi yeh sabh karna…per apko dhokhye main rakhtay to aap ka vishwaas uth jatta humse….Per beta aap yeh na samjhey k Maan ne dhokha kiya ..Mannat k barre main na batta kar

Geet: Nanhi Daddi Maa…maine Maan ko galt nahi samjha kabhi... aur na samjhu gi …Per I need lil time

Daddi Maa: its up to u Beta.

In this conversation between two ladies.Mannat came runing...

Mannat: Daddi Maa ..humko bhukh laggi hai..(But She stopped at one place ...to find Geet in front )

Geet : to yeh hai Mannat(in thoughts)


Hey Buddies after long ...I updated this in new thread..sorry for that...I hop u ll lik...plz comment..respond n hit lik


Tons of Thanx

Jass😛

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update loved it continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrates for new thread and superb updates
Plz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for ur ff... its awesome... continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats !!!!!!! 4 d new thread ...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank your so so so so so much for lovely update. . . And 1 bonus. . . 2-2 part.
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loved both d updates ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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