Mere Papa Maan/Thread2/MG:SS - Page 5

Originally posted by: Jass.KN

Thanx first off all...as I hav given reason on page 1...my SS has been transferred to FF section..so no more visible on here main pages ...n I hav not a long no of buddies on list...coz I m very selective...So for those friends who r not on my buddy n pm list ...I started thread two...n I think it is good also to do short portions... otherwise there is no reason...n Ya I gonna change parts as 9 n 10...n also summery

Jass😃

tons of thanx ..I always wait for ur response

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i m happy that u selected me in your friends list... loving it and waiting for next part do continue soon

Hey Buddies here is part 12..sorry for delay...But I also hav other fictions too...But I know every buddy loves this...so..here it is if u want to add something more plz tell me...commet plz...n if u lik hit

Part 12

Geet: Hum sabko…Daddi Maa pehlay to Maan ko yeh pata nahi lagna chaahea k hum jantay hai Mannat kon hai ?(what geet said no body was able to understand)

Daddi Maa: Per batay kyon…aur Mannat ko hum sabh jantay hai issi liye to unko hum yahan lay kar aaye hai ? (Daddi Maa wanted to know reason behind this )

Geet :Nahi Daddi Maa hum sabh nahi sirf aap…main chahti hum Maan ko yeh pata na chalay k hum yeh sachai jantay hai…aap isliye kyonki…Mannat kaise is ghar main aaye ..woh yeh bhi puche gay…

Daddi Maa: To beta batana to padega kaise aayi.

Geet: to jaise aap Mannat ko yahan layi..bahan tak hi aap Maan ko batta-a-gi…Aur woh yeh jantay hai k hum Amritsar main thay….isliye Maan samjhe gay humme kuch nahi patta….aur na he apne Dev ko kuch bataya….yahi laggy Maan ko

Dev: Per Geet aise kaya hoga ?

Geet: Hum sabh jantay hai..sach kya hai…Per Maan nahi jantay…ki humko patta hai….isliye Daddi Maa ko ek jhooth bolna padega

Daddi Maa: betay kaisa jhooth..or woh bhi kyon ?

Geet: Daddi Maa aap Maan ko yeh kahegi k…aapko Mannat ki sachai humko batane main mushkil ho rahi thi..Isliye aap Maan ko yeh kahegi k…aap ne Mannat ko Maan k friend ki beti bataya.hume

Nandini : Per Diddi…agar Mannat ko Maan Jija ji k dost ki beti batana bhi hai.to kaarann bhi hona chahea k ..kyon rakha apne usse yahan ?.

Geet: Nandini..kyonki Maan k dost ki bibi nahi hai..aur uska is shahr main aur koi nahi ….per business k silsile main us dost ko out of India janna pada..per woh apni beti ko sath nahi lay ja sakta...per Mannat Daddi Maa aur Maan ko acchi tarah say janti hai unse mil chuki hai ….isliye woh usse yahan Daddi Maa k pass chod gaya…aur Daddi Maa aap Maan ko yahin kahegi

Dev : Per Geet aisa karne ki kya jaroorat ?

Geet: Main janti hu Dev ….Mannat ki asliyat na bhi chipaye..to bhi koi baat nahi..jaise maine aaj Mannat ko kisi haad tak apna liya hai…to Maan k samne bhi apna leti…per Maan k andhar ek darr..aur guilty hone k feelings rehegi..k maine mazboori main usko apnaya..aur Maan mere same sharminda ho main yeh nahi chahti

Daddi Maa: Geet aap keh to theek rahi hai..aur hum aisa karne ko bhi tayar hai..per isse hogga kya..akhir kab takk hum yeh drama karegay (She was worried )

Geet : Tab takk jab takk Maan …Mannat k sath unka kya rishta hai... humko khud nahi bata they-tay..Maan jab tak yeh nahi maan latay k Mannat ko maine mazboori main nahi ...balki unki beti hone ki wajah se apnaya hai…aur Maan k dil se yeh darr na dur ho jaye k koi Sam hamare rishtay ko hilla nahi sakkti.

Daddi Maa: Geet jo aap kar rahi hai..woh koi bhi aur nahi kar sakta….sach main koi bhi Sam apke rishtay ki neev nahi hilla sakkti

Geet: Yahi Maan ko samjhna hai…jo yakeen Maan ki yaadshat khone say pehlay tha hum main..wahi aana bakki hai…jis din Maan ko yeh lagga k koi bhi sachai hum main duri nahi kar sakkti..us din mujhe mere wahi Maan mil jayegay (She smiled )

Nandini : theek hai didi hum wahi kare gay jo aap kahegi…. Waise bhi kal jija ji aa rahay hai ….to humko apne plan main kya karna hai yeh bhi sochna hai (everybody laughed)

Daddi was happy... coz Mannat's whole future was that decision which Geet had made….now for everyone Mannat was Maan k friend ki beti..jst Daddi new the real reason

Next Day

Khuraana Mension

Time 8:15 am in the morning

Maan returned from Australia early morning .Daddi Maa was in the sitting room waiting for Maan….Nandini took Breakfast for Dev in their room... coz Dev had meeting around 9 ..so he had to left early …..Geet preparing Maan's favorite Pasta.. orange Pan cakes….both kids were sleeping ..Arayman in lil baby cot beside Daddi Maa..n Mannat in her room….

Around 8:25 Maan entered KM..everybody was too happy to see Maan after two weeks especially Geet….She ran toward Maan n hugged him tightly…

Geet : Patta hai kabse apki wait kar rahay hai hum sabh

Maan : Ji Mrs Khuraana hum bhi kabse wait kar rahe thay k kab ghar pahunh kar apne bacchay ko dekhay (He smiled)

Geet : oh to bete ki yaad aa rahi thi…na bibi ki..na daddi maa..ki…(she made angry face)

Daddi Maa also came there

Daddi Maa: Geet betay hum abb puraanay ho gaye hai…

Everybody laught ..Maan touched Daddi Maa's feet n then hugged her..till then Dev was jst about to leave…after meeting Maan ..he left in hurry…..

Maan took Aryaman in his lap : Apne papa ko mis kiya ….baby(n he kissed his forhead n cheeks )

Geet: Maan breakfast almost ready hai..aap pehlay fresh ho kar aaea….fir betay say jitni mail milap karna hai kar lijiye

Maan: Geet kya hai ...tum puri Hitler ho.. jaata hun abbhi to aaya hun

Geet snatched Aryaman from Maan n pushed him toward their room

Geet: Ha main Hitler he hoon…ja kar fresh ho jaaea..apke kapday maine bed par rakhe hai..woh pehan lijiye..

Maan knew he couldn't do against Geet so he gav his beautiful smile n moved toward room

9:15 am

Everybody at breakfast ….Maan took his first bite when he heared a known voice

Ya She was Mannat.Nandini gav her bath n put on her cloths..But she was not ready to comb her hair..which were too unruly coz of curlz…So she was shouting

Mannat: Daddi Maa Aunty se kaho na..Mannat ko pain hiti hai..humko combing nahi karani…

Maan dropped his folk in plate from his hand looking at Mannat "yeh yahan kaise' 'Maan's self thoughts ..He was shocked n surprised

Geet: koi baat nahi Mannat main apki poni kar deti hu…..chalo…Maan looked at Geet's face that with which ease... She was talkinh to her ….

Maan : Daddi Maa yeh yahan ?

Daddi Maa: JI beta Rahul ko bahr jana tha to uski patni bhi nahi hai..aur na koi relative hai in delhi…so he asked me to keep his daughter here for few days

Maan was surprised... what Daddi said.?..He looked at Daddi..But Daddi put her hand on Maan's to keep silence .

When Geet left…Daddi told whole story how She came to know bout Mannat..n how She asked everybody here..that She is ur friends daughter

Maan: Per Daddi Maa jab Geet ko pata chalega to ?

Daddi Maa: Betay apne humse kyon chipaya….kyon ghut ghut kar apne aap ko preshani di

Maan(he had tears in his eyes): Daddi Maa kya karta…isko chod nahi sakta tha..aur apko aur Geet ko batta nahi sakkta tha…aap to theek samjh gayi…meri mazboori..per Geet kaise react karegi..

Daddi Maa: beta Geet aur apka rishta itna kamzor nahi….k koi baat galtfahmi ban jaye..apko apne pyar per bharosa karna padega..aur Geet ko batana he padega….isliye to hum usay yahan laye hai….aap apna time ligiye ….hume jo excuse bataya sabh ne maan liya hai…aur don't worry beta every thing will b alrite

Maan: ji Daddi. n ...He left with these two words without having his breakfast…

Geet had left Maan n Daddi alone intentionally …so that daddi could tell him what was planned…But Maan was in Dilemma

Geet had done with Mannat's hair..n Maan was moving toward his room..when both Mannat n Maan clashed

Mannat got lil bit scared : Maan Uncle ..aap aa gaye

Maan: Ha main aa gaya…..kyon kush kehna tha ?(Maan put his one hand on his waist)

Mannat nodded her head: Mannat ko kuch nahi kehna…Mannat ko apse darr lagta hai..(she put her eyes done..n ran away toward Daddi Maa…

But Maan was looking at Mannat..how easily She had mixed up with his family..But gonna b happen after this suspense came in front of Geet..He thought for while ..n left from there.

I will pm my all friends n buddies after some time...till then if u find

plz comment ur appreciation is my way

Jass