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Posted: 13 years ago

Ji...😉..

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4 ur new thread...🥳...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved both parts 13 n 14 ,...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updates dear loved them a lotloved the romance of maaneet . it was passionate 😳geet and dadi's plan was superb 😉glad that maanat is becoming a normal girl 😊the song was so heart touching 😭 you did an awesome job by selecting it 👏
maan was also shocked when he heard it 😲
her innocent questions also made maan speechless 😕
hope atleast now he will start to understand the importance of this little angel 😊thnks for the pmeagerly waiting for next prtplease continue soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it...hope maan starts caring for mannat...what did the girl do to not deserve love...
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Posted: 13 years ago
osum parts.t. .thanks. . .
.geet ka maanta ka khayal rakhana maan ko pasand nai aya. . . More geet maanata scine wil creat joulosy. .
Osum. .
Waiting 4 next pt
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Buddies there is next update for this.plz go through ..read n comment if u want more giv me ideas

Part 15

Maan looked at her face.First time there was lil smile at corners of his lips.He moved toward door when he heard Mannat's voice .Her sleep talk.

Mannat: Shahid Maan uncle ko hum Hamare Papa nahi ...Mere Papa Maan boltay hai aab .Per woh to Uncle hai.Bolo na Shahid …Maan uncle Mere Papa Maan kyo hai ? Bolo tum humko batayo…hum ko bollo " n She started to rub her legs on bed .Put off her comforter

Maan was scared with her behavior n he knew... she was in dream..but the words were main reason to worry.He ran toward her n held her in his arms.

Maan: Mannat Mannat.(he shook her n she came to her senses )

Mannat: Maan uncle aap humko kyo dant rahe hai ?(she was dozing but started to sob)

Maan: Main tumko dant nahi raha…U was dreaming…u were shouting .why ?

Mannat: Humko kya patta….hum to so rahhe thay?(rubbing her eyes Mannat said )

Maan thought it was not good to ask her anything.N even he knew about Shahid who became her friend .

Maan gav her water to drink n again put her on pillow

Maan: Accha aab tum so jayo ?

Mannat: Per uncle agar humko fir say dream aaya to aap humko fir say gussa mat hona ? (Wetness of her eyes melted Maan)

Maan: Nahi main gussa nahi hua tha..aur aab bhi nahi.tum so jayo….mujhe bhi sonna hai .Close ur eyes n try to sleep" Maan put her comforter once again .n this time also she went in deep sleep in seconds .

He switched lite off n left.But all incidents made him realize what was the importance of a father in Mannat's life.Even in her dreams.


Ya Mannat got lov from many ladies after she came to His life.But not that protectiveness, not assurance of safe life ,not lov which only a father could giv.She didn't know relations.But She knew persons lik Rahim Chacha, Shahid's father,Her Akaash Sir ,n above all Maan uncle had different place in her lif. She said She never cried after coming from Tina's life.

She had a feeling some where Maan uncle was the only reason who gave her such wonderful lif that She never cried again.

She never had any type of problem after her Maan uncle took her with him

She new she was able to learn new things due to Akaash Sir..appointed by Maan Uncle..as Daddi Bua told her

She also knew She chould show her stubbornness ,her anger,her frustration..and there were many persons…n they gav this right to her.n all this in her Maan Uncle's home.

For her every thing started from Maan Uncle n stopped at Him..even nobody else had this rite to come in her dreams except her Papa…in here terms"Mere Papa Maan" coz some where she had this feeling by saying so Mere Papa Maan she would get her father.But when her dreams would became reality only Maan Singh Khuraana knew

It was about 10:55 when he reached his room. Light was still on n Geet was waiting for him

Geet: Maan so gayi Mannat? She looked at him coming toward bed

Maan: Ha so gayi per bahut tang karti hai .(He tried to hide out his expressions)

Geet: Maan bachi hai ..aur Aryaman nahi tang karta?

Maan: kya tang karta hai…sarra din to chup chap sota hai mera baccha.fir bhi tum.(He took sleeping Arya in his lap.n kissed him)

Geet was observing him.She was able to read him even lil emotion on Maan's face He was much passionate now while kissing n tightly holding Arya .Those emotions were for both kids.But he was not able to find out why he was behaving so .

Geet: Maan aab betay se pyar he karte rahegay ja soa gay bhi

Maan: Ha Geet ..Jab bhi main Arya ku dekhta hu to mujhe sabh kuch yaad aa jata hai..how we restarted our life(not lives). He became reason to lessen our differences,... to remove all wrong things.But really this happens always ? that a lil baby becomes reason. If things go opposite to that !!" (Maan first looked at Arya n then in Geet's eyes)

Geet's estimate was rite ...He was talking about Mannat...But not able to express.Maan had left his ML stage far away.Even then some times over thinking brought fit of migraine to him.So to distract him from thinking... She intervened

Geet: Aap kahan say kahan pahunch jattay hai…let it go..jo ho gaya so ho gaya…per jo agay hai uske baare main sochna chahea..aur har pal main apke sath hu har burre aur acchay daur(phase) main as always u stand by me .U took time to accept me But u believed what ur dear ones told u about our relation.usse jayada kya ho sakta hai …k hamare rishtay main kitni shakti hai…jo koi sabot nahi magta ek dusre k liye pyar aur vishawas ka. U trusted me at that time …as always... same with me ..I m always for u " Geet indirectly lessen his burden n relief was visible on Maan's face.

Maan: Ha Geet U r totally rite…I always trust u …..n U me …n this relation will remain as such kush bhi ho ..hamare beech sabh kuch waisa he rehega…n I promise u " He smiled n kissed both his son n wife

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice parts thnx 4 d pm dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnx 4 pm

i think maan will accept mannat as his daughter ..


nice part


update soon:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 15
nice part...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice to see Maan's developing soft corner for Mannat...

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