The last part of this story is entirely diff from the movie ... i felt the climax of the movie was not that good as it didn't show geeta's feelings perfectly... the hospital scene was a bit was artificial and it won't be acceptable if u read as a story...hope u like this end ...
CHAPTER ' 16
Maan , geet and ajay reached a resort far from the village nearer to airport ''''' pari was waiting for them there '''''.
" did u get the tickets and passport ?" maan asked pari
" yeah " pari said and handed them to maan
Maan gave tickets and passport to ajay
" these are the tickets '' after noon flight to US ''' umm' I ll come there after few weeks " maan said
Ajay just nodded and took them and went to the receptionist to collect the keys
" u r very sweet maan " said pari
" thanks baby " said maan with a smile while checking his phone
Pari pulled maan's coller and kissed his cheeks ''''' maan was shocked with the sudden action he looked at pari who just gave him a cheezy smile '''''.. maan wiped his cheeks and turned only to meet geet's furious eyes '''''''maan immediately put his hands down which were on his cheeks ''''''. And looked at her innocently'''''
Ajay gave geet her room keys ''''. He was abt to say smthing but geet just went away giving maan angry glare ''''.
" wat happened to her ?" asked ajay
" I '' umm''. Nothing'''. May be she is tired " maan managed
" ohk well here is ur key " ajay gave him the key
Maan immediately ran to see geet '''''.. the door was closed ''''' he didn't know wat to do '''''' should he knock the door '''''' wat will she do ? ''''. Is she angry ?...Oh god she will kill him ''''' now tat she has seen pari kissing him he has no escape other than to face her anger ''''''.
He knocked at the door hesitently '''''.geet opened the door she didn't say anything just walked in''''..
" I '' umm''.. actually '''..voh''''. pari "
*thud*
Geet slapped him before he could complete the last thing he wanted was to hear her name from him '..
" I didn't do anything ''' she was the one who ki'."
Geet raised her hands indicating him to stop
" I ll meet u at dinner " said geet
" but geet''."
" don't u hear wat I said " geet spitted ''''''
maan just went without saying anything
That was defenitely not one of maan's best day''''''''' At dinner pari was sitting near maan ''''''''' geet was killing him with angry glare '''''''.. how much ever maan try pari was in no way going away from him ''''''..
Maan made a baby face ''''''.. but it had no effect on geet who was ready to kill pari at any time ''''''''
Maan went to his room very soon not wanting to face geet's anger more '''''' while geet and ajay were out for a walk
" geet we are not going to US '''''''' we r going to singapore tmr morning " said ajay
" why ? maan didn't tell me tat there was a change in plan " said geet
" because tis is not maan's plan but my plan " said ajay
" I didn't get u " asked confused geet
" I don't trust him geet ''''. Who knows wat he ll do tmr '''''''.. his devil mind will plan something to stop us from going " said ajay
" but this is bad maan has done so much to u ''''' he saved ur life risking ur life and now u r decieving him''''.. he is ur frd " said geet
" frd ?... he is not a frd but pshyco '''''. God knows wat he ll do any time'''''. I m just waiting for a chance to get rid of him " said ajay
Geet just felt disgusted with ajay's words '''''.. maan love him so much and all he could return is haterd ''''''''geet wonders wat ajay did to deserve maan's frdship '''''''''' she just hated the sight of him '''''''. She didn't tell anything just ran away to see maan
Geet went to maan's room it was open '''''' she entered he saw maan sitting on the couch '''''''.. he smiled at her when she entered
" did u wanted to say good bye to me before u go to singapore " maan asked
Geet was shocked
" how did u know tat ? " she asked
" me and ajay are frds from childhood I know him better than anyone " said maan
Geet went and sat near him
" why do u do tis maan ? he doesn't deserve ur love " said geet
" we love someone not expecting anything in return not even their love ''''''' its just we like being with them " said maan " I have never expected anything from ajay nor I ll expect anything in future '''''.. my frdship is enough for both of us "
" don't u expect anything from me as well maan ? " askedd geet
" no sweet heart its diff in ur case ''''' I expect evrything from u ''''.. ur love, ur trust , ur belief , ur e verything'''''''. I want ur everything only for me '''' just me ''''''I can never share " said maan
" then why do u want me to go with ajay " asked geet
" I want u only with ur own will ''''. I ll never force u ''''''.. if u love ajay I ll make sure tat I never interfere in ur life " said maan
" wat if I didn't love ajay ? " geet asked
" wat if I never ever loved ajay nor will ever love him " asked geet''''''' maan just looked at her blankly
" tell me maan "
" I '''.. geet'''.."
" wat if i''''.. I always loved u " said geet
Maan didn't know at to say he was just staring at her
Geet moved close to him and placed her hand on his cheek
" tell me maan ''''''''. Wat if I give my everything to u''''''.." geet reduced the game between their face
" wat if I claim everything from u''''''" she looked at his lips''''''.
Without any second thought she claimed his lips'''''''. Maan was too lost to realize wat was happening ''''''''.. it was not the first time they kiss''''''''.. he has already kissed her in lifst but tis time it was diff '''''''''' tis time his lioness was on complete charge ''''''''. Maan didn't do anything just gave into her passion ''''''''
She broke this kiss after long time '''''''.. maan looked at her ''''''''''. Her eyes were closed'''''''''. He placed his hand on her cheek''''''''.
" are u ok " he asked
Geet immediately hugged him .
" I m sorry maan ''''''. I was a fool not to realize my feelings for you '''''''' I thought u don't know the meaning of love '''''''' I thought u r selfish '''''''' but I was wrong '''''''.. I was wrong abt u '''''''''.. I have never seen anyone with such a pure heart like u " she said ''' few tears escaped her eyes
Maan lifted her face to meet him
" u don't have to be sorry sweet heart ''''''. i' ''' I love u " he said
Geet blushed
" I expect something more than a blush " said maan
" I '''.. voh'''"
" come on tell me I m dying to hear " said maan who was looking at her internly
" I '''''.. oh god maan don't look at me like tat " said geet
" don't tell me u r shy''''''''. Shy was not the thing which I saw a few mins back " teased maan tracing her lips
" sto embaressing me " she hit his arms
" I m not saying anything ''''' I want u to say ''''..plzzz'" said maan
" i'''''. I love u maan " she said in one breath and hugged him
" I love u too sweet heart " he said
The big task ahead was to tell ajay geet's confession to maan ''''''. Ajay was not as shocked as expected coz he was always dwelt with a feeling tat maan may take geet away anytime ''''''''' though he was hurt a lot he didn't create any difficulty in their path ''''''''.. he went to singapore alone to make everyone's life ease
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every end has a new bigining
so here is my new ss
CAN WE FIX IT?
Edited by NANDY_BRU - 13 years ago