Sindoor- Pyar Ho Gaya - Page 25

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: zhasan2

really..didn't notice😆😛

😆Thats good!!😛Now i dont have to go back and edit!! 😆😛

Edited by moderngirl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Scene 45

Ved shocked..she pushes Dhruv back and takes the scarf in her hand 😡

Dhruv- (romantically) arre jaan kya kar rahi ho??

Ved- (stern) Dhruv yeh kya hai? (shows him the scarf)

Dhruv- (confused) jaan, thats a scarf!!

Ved- I KNOW..Lekin kiska hai???

Dhruvs got no clue!! 😕

Dhruv- muje kya patha jaan..tumhara hi hoga!!

Ved- (angry..thinks he's hiding something) Dhruv! Yeh mera nahi hai!

Dhruv- (calm) Ved agar yeh(takes the scarf) tumhara nahi hai tho kiska hai??

Ved- (angry) yeh muje kaise patha hogi..yeh scarf tumhare gadi(car) mein tha tho Tumhe patha hoga!!

Dhruv- (shoked at the way Ved talking) Ved yeh tum kya keh rahi ho!! Jaan trust me..mein sach mein nahi janta ki yeh scarf kahan se aaya aur kiska hai!!(doesnt see trust in her eyes) ved muj par vishwas karo 😒 ..I.(ved interrupts)

Ved- (furious) VISHWAS AUR TUM PAR!! (dhruvs shocked) (demandingly)DHRUV muje ghar jaana hai..abhi aur issi waqt!!!

Dhruv- lekin Ved..(gets cut of)

Ved- (faces away from Dhruv in anger) muje kuch nahi sunna..I WANT TO GO HOME NOW!!!

Dhruv sighs sadly and drives home

Ved hasn't said another word since

Dhruvs confused himself

He has no idea where the scarf came from in the first place!!

Both arrive home

Dhruv stops the car

Ved walks out before he can say anything and goes in the house

Dhruv follows behind

He walks into their room and takes off his tie

Ved in the shower

Dhruv sits on the bed dejected 😔

Ved comes out of the bathroom and takes off her jewelry in the mirror

Dhruv walks up behind her

Ved pretends not to notice

Dhruv puts his hand on her shoulder

Ved pushes it off and walks over to the bed

Dhruv- (walks to towards her) Ved mera baath tho suno!!Tum itni naraaz kyon ho..just cuz of a scarf!!

Ved- (faces him in anger) Kya sunoo mein...bolo..first tum ghar dher se aathe ho..kehte ho ki meeting main tha!! Agar meeting ein ha tho ek call tho kar sakthe the na!!..tumhare cell bhi off tha..na jaane maine kitni baar Tumhe call karne ki koshish ki..phir muje tumhare gadi mein scarf milthi hai aur tum kehthe ho ki Tumhe kuch patha nahi..tho mein kya sochoon Dhruv..tum yeh bhi nahi keh sakthe ki yeh scarf tumhara hai kyon ki yeh ladies scarf hai!! bhala ledies scarf tumhare gadi mein kyon hai jab thak...(sits on the bed with her face in her hands)

Dhrv sighs sadly and sits next to Ved

Dhruv- (hand on her shoulder) jaan jo hamesha dikne mein sach lagtha hai woh hamesha sach hota nahi!!

Ved looks at Dhruv blankly

Dhruv- jaan apne Dhruv par thora tho bahrosha karo..kya mein tumhare saath aisa kar saktha hoon!!

Ved - (stands up) Dhruv muje tum par vishwas hai lekin kabi kabhi aisa hota hain aur mardon(males) ka dil kissi khoobsurat aurat ko dekh kar bahek jata hai!! (DHRUV SHOKED..HES HEARD ENOUGH 😡 !!)(Dhruv takes her arm and swings her around)

Dhruv- (FURIOUS!) Ved SHAK KA KOI ILAGE NAHI HOTA HAI!! YAAD RAKHNA!! (he storms off to the bathroom

Ved lays on the bed angrily

Dhruv comes back out and goes lays in bed beside Ved

Both face the other way thinking the other ones asleep

Dhruv cant fall asleep..he keeps recounting the nite over nd over again in his head

Ved thinks thoughtfully at what Dhruv said

Shes beginning to think both ways..what dhruv said could be right too...but how did that scarf get in jis car!! ved confused!! 😕

The next morning

Rudras getting ready while nih making the bed

Both are talking about the day and what not

When Rudra remembers something

Rudra- arre nih..mein tho bhul hi gaya tha!! Aaj shyam ko thaiyar rehna

Nih-(walks up to him) kyon, kahin ja rahen hain hum??

Rudra- (smiles at her) yep, maine hum theeno kehliye restaurnt book kiya hai!!

Nih- (confused) hum theeno??

Rudra- (holds her shoulders) yep, hum theeno..mein, tum aur
Shania!!

Nih- (jealous) KYA!!

Rudra- (looks at his watch) yep..gotta go ..(kisses nih) bye jaan!!

He leaves

Nih stands there mad

She just cant stand shania!!! 😡

HOPE THE UPDATE WAS OK!! 😛

Edited by moderngirl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
AWESOME JOB!!! Hope Shania doesn't come in between Rudra and Niharika a lot 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome update but that shaina better not come between rudra and niharika
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks for the comments 😊 !! I'll try cont sometime this week! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
GREAT CAN'T WAIT!!! I really hope Ved realises that dhruv wud never do something like that!!! Con't soon!!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
nice update.....aab is scraf ke piche kahin Rahul ka tho haath nahi 😡 Rahul and Shania...err make lives miserable for everyone..lol update soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks again everyone!! 😛 Iam trying my best to update this FF soon, but Things keep coming up!! 🤢 My promotions coming up too so i have to get ready for that, than my familys goin to canada But as soon as all this is over..I'll cont soon!!! 😛
Edited by moderngirl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: zhasan2

k!!! have fun though!!!! 😛

THANKS...😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey everyone!! I just finished my project so thought I'd write an update..Hope you like it!! 😛

Scene 46

That same morning

Ved wakes up with kind of a heavy head!

She turns around to Dhruv side only not find him not there

Ved quickly sits up on the bed and looks towards the bathroom

He's not there

Ved then remembers last nites events

She ties up her hair and goes to the bathroom

After a while she comes out and puts on her jewelry and what not as she gets flashes of last nites Argument

* FLASH*

Dhruv- (calm) Ved agar yeh(takes the scarf) tumhare nahi hai tho kiska hai??

Ved- (angry) yeh muje kaise patha hogi..yeh scarf tumhare gadi(car) mein tha tho Tumhe patha hoga!!

Dhruv- (shokec at the way Ved talking) Ved yeh tum kya keh rahi ho!! Jaan trust me..mein sach much nahi janta yeh scarf kahan se aaya aur kiska hai!!

Ved- (furious) VISHWAS AUR TUM PAR!!

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Ved- (faces him in anger) Kya sunoo mein...bolo..first tum ghar dher se aathe ho..kehte ho ki meeting mein tha!! ..tumhare cell off tha..na jaane maine kitni baar Tumhe call karne ki koshish ki..phir muje tumhare gadi mein scarf milthi hai aur tum kehthe ho ki Tumhe kuch patha nahi..tho mein kya sochoon Dhruv... kya sochoon mein!!

Dhruv- (hand on her shoulder) jaan jo hamesha dikne mein sach lagtha hai woh hamesha sach hota nahi!!
jaan apne Dhruv par thora tho bahrosha karo..kya mein tumhare saath aisa kar saktha hoon!!

Ved - (stands up) Dhruv muje tum par vishwas hai lekin kabi kabhi aisa hora hain aur mardon(males) ka dil kissi khoobsurat aurat ko dekh kar bahek jata hai!!

Dhruv- (MAD NOW) Ved SHAK KA KOI ILAGE NAHI HOTA!! YAAD RAKHNA!!

****FLASHBACK ENDS*****

Ved like ouch

Mein kuch zyada hi kehgayi...shayed Dhruv sach bol raha ho..lekin voh scarf..(doesnt know what to think)

Ved sighs and goes downstairs at the breakfast table

Everyones eating

Ved walks downstairs but doesn't see Dhruv there

Kavita- (turns to see Ved) arre Ved, good morning! (gestures her to sit) aao khana khalo!

Ved goes and sits in her spot without Dhruv next to her

Ved- mummyji, Dhruv kahan hai?

Kavita- (smiles) beta voh tho kaam par hai...lekin kya Tumhe pata hai ki Dhruv aaj itna udaas kyon tha?? Usne tho nashta bhi nahi ki!!

Ved- (smiles as if she doesn't know) nahi mummyji, muje kuch nahi pata!! (feels kinds guilty as she eats but doesn't notice that nih was staring at her the entire time)

After breakfast

Tara leaves for college

She bumps into the same guy again

Its rahul!!

Both have the same classes

They talk

Tara realizes how much both have in common

Back at the Raizada house

Ved in her room thinking when nih enters

Nih (sits next to Ved) kya baath hai Ved...kya Dhruv aur tumhare beech mein koi jagra hua hai??

Ved (looks at nih pretending nothings wrong) nahi tho...Dhruv ko office mein kuch zyada kaam tha tho issliye voh office jald chalagaya!!

Nih (serious) natak mat karo Vedika!!! Tum mujse jhoot nahi bol sakthi...ab sach sach batao, kya hua??

Ved tells nih everything

Nih listens carefully

Ved like I don't know what to think anymore!

Nih (puts her hand on Ved shoulder) Ved tum kya etna bhi nahi janti ki Dhruv kabhi aisa kar hi nahi saktha!!! Chaiye duniya ulta kyon na hojaye lekin Dhruv aisa kabhi nahi kar saktha...kas karke tumhare saath..voh tho Tumhe itna pyar karta hai!!

Ved doesn't say anything

Nih sighs knowing how stubborn Ved can be and leaves

Ved thinks a little and decides to go to the park

She takes a taxi and arrives there

Ved walks around the park pondering about what nih said

She finds a bench and sits as she thinks

When suddenly her cell rings

Ved answers

Hello

Rudra- hello Ved

Ved- Rudra bhaiya??

Rudra- (sounds rushed) haan Ved..Tumhe kya patha hai ki Dhruv iss waqt kahan hai?? Kuch urgent kaam hai!!

Ved- bhaiya voh tho office mein hai!!

Rudra- (confused) office?? lekin Ved voh yahan nahi hai!!

Ved- Kya!!

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