Originally posted by: merrydock
ccuteaangele,
i love the way you write, i liked the love scene between arnav and khushi, but anjali interuption????. you mentioned that this was as far you could go with the scene due to inexperience, i would like to offer my writing skills in this department, i cannot boast vast experience, but i have a very healthy imagination. and lots of romance novels to back my knowledge.
just a sample:
they freeze hearing Anjali muffled voice :'chotte ? khushiji"
Arnave buries his face in her hair groaning, 'God he didn't want to stop', he could hear her heavy breathing, feel her chest rise and fall beneath him, he brushed her ears lobs softly with his lips. Whispering "khushi". She mourned her fingers clutching his neck and shoulder tightly, tilting her head so that her lips brushed his ears she whispered huskily," if we stay very still and don't make a sound, your sister will think we have already left the room and will go away?".
shocked he lifted his head to look into her face, what he saw there left him speechless, her face was flushed , her eyes dark with desire, his heart jumped , she wanted him as much as he wanted her. her eyes were pleading he not leave her, and he did not want to go any ware, all he wanted was to be right there with her , he wanted to bury himself within her. "khushi" he groaned
"its di, we can't let her go with that man anywhere alone" khushi sighed " your right, Arnavji, i just , i just" pushing herself up by her elbows, she took in a deep breath composing herself,
Arnave was still lying half on top of her, his face still reflecting his need for her , she lifted one eyebrow questioningly. he shook his head, and lifted himself completely of her, sitting by her side he watched her straitened her cloths and put herself in order. taking another deep breath she pushed herself of the bed. " coming di" she called aloud.
Arnav caught her hand as Khushi walked away from him, she turned around to face him, he said huskily " this is not over, i promise, tonight we will pick up where we left of", he watched her cheeks turn a becoming shade of pink as she gasped. his face broke into a wide wicked grin.
Khushi stared at him. this man Arnave Singh Raizada. who rarely smiled was giving her the most adorable , mischievous wicked grin, she had never seen this side of him before, she blushed deeply at his promise. Bending to bring her face to his level she brushed his nose with hers, not to he held back she grinned " I'll hold you to it". she said mischievously. Watching his eyes go wide at her open challenge.
Khushi turned back towards the door to open it for Anjali.
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