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Posted: 19 years ago
#21
very---very good , i m loving it-------plz post soon. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#22
its soooo gud 👏 plz post the next part soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
pls update ur fiction 👏 👏 its really nice
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Recap

Bhoomi and Arjun fall on the bed.

Part #8

Arjun is looking at Bhoomi with a glowing eyes and Bhoomi is staring back at him shly

Bhoomi: Arjun kya dheka reho

Arjun: Bhavri mein dhek rah hoon ki tum kaise shanti ho

Bhoomikya bhool reho

Arjun: bhavri goenka ap meri achi dost yeh (looking at bhumi's eyes, coming closer to her)

Bhoomi: ah Arjun,

Arjun: aur mein tumse kehna chata hoo ki

Bhoomi: ki

Arjun (coming closer, whispering in her ear) ki tumahri saree par spider yeh

Bhoomi (screams) Kya (gets up on the bed and shakes her hair and saree and Arjun is watching her)

Arjun: Bhavri tum mein atna peshrant hone ki zaarot nahi yeh

Bhoomi: Kyu (she sits on her knees with a concerned face)

Arjun: kyu ki mein maazaq karaha tha

Bhoomi: kya

Arjun: ah (nodding is head)

Bhoomi achha, aur yaha par meri jaan jahrahi yeh

Arjun

Bhoomi:very funny (she grabs a pillow and hits him playfull) tho yeh tumahri saaza

Arjun: acha yeh baat yeh and he takes a pillow and hits her and they have a pillow fight.

After a while they get tired and laugh and Bhoomi rest her head on Arjun shoulder and they fall alseep

Meanwhile in the heritage house


Shefali: mein Arjun aur Bhoomika ke alag kaise karu? Woh toh sabke ladali bahu hogayi yeh

Then shefali sees her reflection in the mirror who is wearing a white sari

White Shefali: Shefali why are you trying to hurt Bhoomika, woh tumahri devarani yeh?

Shefali: meri revenge ke liye, usne mera pyar le liya

White Shefali: lekin jo tumahare nahi tha use par tumahara ahak nahi yeh, after all woh tum thi jisne Arjun ka saath shora aur Yuvraj se shaadi ki

Shefali: ha lekin mujhe pata nahi tha

White Shefali: tum dhuk yeh shiwa kuch nahi milenga agar tum Bhoomika ko tang karogi

Shefali nahi jeet meri hogi yeh tub meri badle ki aag jo meri dil mein yeh woh pori hogi

LK (comes) Nahi Shefali, yeh tumahri zid yeh lekin ek din tum bhoomika se maafi mangi hogi

Precap

something fun

Sorrie guys for any spelling errors my hindi.


Take care with lots of love

mamta
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25
its superb, mind blowing awesome 👏 👏 we should make a soap like saarthi..i ll be the director n u can be my script n dialogue writer!! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
its 1derful!!!! 👏 👏.its da best among whatever i've red.continue fast please.i love your A-B 😳 🤗 scenes.hey....i want 2 be da costume designer n make up person!! 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#27
greatttttttttt...absolutely wonderful... 😆 😆 just started readin yr fan fic..all scenes r superb..specially arjun n bhavris...seem sooooooooo reall... 👏 👏 👏

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