Maaneet - WE WANT DIVORCE #1 | Part 1 - 25 - Page 66

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi buddies,

thank you so much for the lovely encouraging comments.

Sorry for this short update. lil bit busy with some work. tomorrow, I will try to give a long update. i will send the PM tomorrow. sorry for that. i am really in a hurry.



Part 21

Maan is still holding onto Geet's wrist and he escorts her toward the Mandap. Geet follows him as if a bride follows her groom during Saat Phere.

When Maaneet are a few meters away from the the Mandap, they notice that Adi and Pinky are taking their Saat Phere. Instantly, Maan turns around and looks at his hand which is holding onto Geet's wrist and then he looks into her eyes. Geet picks a clue from him and she too looks at their hands and then his eyes. maan keeps walking while looking back at her. Geet follows him while looking into his eyes. Maaneet didn't realise what they are doing. they have lost themselves in the divine feeling. (buddies, here imagine the GHSP scene of Maaneet's Saat Phere. It is such a heavenly scene. I still couldn't get over it.)

Few minutes later Geet comes out of the trance and she looks around. Fortunately or unfortunately anyone didn't notice Maaneet. All the eyes are fixed on Adi and Pinky's saat phere. Geet is shocked at her realisation of what she and Maan are doing and she instantly stops walking. The resultant jolt brings Maan back to this world. Geet pulls her hand out of Maan's grip and moves away from him. Maan didn't know how to react. He keeps staring at her. geet couldn't understand what is happening to her.

Geet: (st) yeh tum kya kar rahi ho Geet?... yeh galat hai...Maan se dur raho Geet

She couldn't understand what makes her feel guilty and why she wants to stay away from him. It is too early for her to understand anything.

On the other hand, Maan is tying to understand the reason for his action. At the same time he is wondering if Geet also went through the same divine feeling just like him.

Maan: (st) yeh mujhe kya horaha hai?

Maan recalls how geet pulled her hand out of his grip and moved away from him. he again looks at Geet who is still breathing heavily.

He tries to lighten the mood...

Maan: Geet! I think we are late. the wedding is already over

Geet's heart skips a beat.

Geet: (st) whose wedding he is talking about? is he just talking about Adi-Pinky's wedding or trying to mean something else?

Maan notices the confusion on geet's face

Maan: woh...i mean Adi-Pinky's wedding is already over

Geet replies mechanically, 'haan'

Maan: you go to the mandap... i have to make a phone call. i will come later

Geet nodes and turns to leave

Maan: suno!

Geet turns back to him

Maan: be careful

She looks at him questioningly

Maan: woh...be careful about your saree. You are wearing it for first time na?

Geet nodes silently

Maan: ab jao

Geet nodes and leaves the place.


hi buddies,

thanks for reading. i will try to continue tomorrow.

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Posted: 13 years ago
maan tkng cr of geet... haye so romantic...
Edited by krati5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 21 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d update ...

continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
He is caring towards her
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the update and waiting for the badawala update😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww loved it
maaneet were gonna take pheras 😍
plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
so small but beautiful... did they really take all saath pheras
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow
As always Awesome update ...
Nice one
Suprb
Fabulous...

Keep writing
Luved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome upate
loved it 😊

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