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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
congo for the new thread
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
thanks for the update...after a long long wait...now you have to compensate with 3-4 parts in one go...this was a nice update but still hungry for more...DIL MAANGE MORE
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

part 64

she kept the finger on his lips.. no argument..baby ki anken mama ki tara brown hain
aap kitna bhi J feel karlo its not going to change
why will I feel J for that he said without thinking
phir aap mujhe yun wanha se keench kyun layen then
..

wo wo main..main actually wo tumhe.. he looked here & there unsure how to explain
rehne do.. I know u were J
he sighed in relief.

They were there in the shop for more than 2hrs & Geet was still not done. She had already picked almost the whole range of products .. still she felt there was more she needed.
He enjoyed every bit of her expressions.. their togetherness as a family..everything just felt like a dream.

Geet looked at couple of things more.. mujhe wo walin shop bhi jana hain
he accepted silently & followed Maan Singh Khurana & shopping.. he laughed at himself... carrying the bags which ever all out of control now.

Geet saw him struggling & immediately called the shop keeper & told them to do home delivery .. that to today. She checked her list & looked for Maan. His steps froze seeing rano mama infront of them.

Rano looked at Geet holding the baby & then at Maan.
Geet managing the baby & checking the list.. looked at the person who was staring at them. For instant she felt she was caught.. then immediately, smiled in excitement..
mama aap yanha?
Rano looked at Maan with questioning eyes
he was sorry.. then he looked at the baby
geet pulled Maan & introduced to mama..
mama yeh Maan hain humren saat college main padthen hain
rano repeated in shock..
padthen hain?
Geet bit her lips.. at her moms audacity .. she softly eyed her to be quiet
rano still looked at Maan for an explanation..asking does she know abt them
Maan shook his head.. hiding behind geet


Geet tried to explain ' mama he was working for some time after his graduation..which was not required at all.. both maan & rano knew exactly why maan was there in her college.. wat surprised her..was he actually managed all that..for her & baby
rano's eyes fell on the little one..
Geet immediately gave to her.. mera baby hain
rano's eyes filled in tears of joy..seeing the little one after so many days
Geet corrected herself... inka baby..she said so..so.. softly... like she as denying it to herself
rano slowly caressed his head.. yeh kya teehk hain sar ka malish nahi kiya
Geet ' main ne bhi yahi kaha tha.. lekin abhi sab teehk ho jayega .. I am taking caring of him.. mama sab teehk kardegi..
she leaned forward & kissed the baby
rano looked at Geet & then Maan.

She didn't know if it was alright to say anything. Especially when maan's eyes pleaded not to.
She looked at the little one & kept quiet.

Rano took them excitedly to a jewelry shop that was close by & picked up a chain for the cuty in gold.
Yeh aapki nani ki taraf se.. she spilled the beans
Geet looked at her in shock..
Maan immediately cleared covere it up..
wo..
umm..
aab tum mama tho aunty nani heen na
rano nervously
haan...
Geet nodded looking suspeciously at this sudden understanding between Maan & her mom.

Rano sighed in relief.

Rano was really happy to see the baby getting moms love unknowingly. She softly kissed his head ..& tear just followed. Baby began to get restless. Geet immediately took him & rocked him ...she could feel ..he was hungry.. it was more than 4 hrs since he had his last feed.. Geet restlessly fished the bag fo the bottle.. she was getting more anxious.

Rano slowly whispered in her ears .. tumhi ussen feed kardo
Geet was shy..excited.. tensed.. nervous..conscious..
rano slowly patted her back.. r u still lactating after that accident .. Geet felt so relaxed '
rano ' tumhe feed karna aayega
Geet shied & looked down.
Rano..softly caressed her cheeks
Geet looked at mom & then Maan.
Rano .. nodded -
main ussen kuch bol dongi
Geet smiled & took the baby to the changing room.

Rano took Maan & went out.
Rano '
yeh sab kya hain
Maan kept quiet looking down
rano '
tumne ussen kuch batya nahi?
He shook his head
rano '
phir wo baby ke saat
Maan ' she just
rano didn't let him continue..
mamta..
tumhe pata nahi kitni rathen usne jag ki kati hain.. ek adhorpem mehsos karthi ho jaisen

his heart tore apart..his sin didn't seem to end.. only seem to hurt is loved ones ..dear ones more. The sadness in her eyes, did she deserve those pain..those sleepless nights..

he murdered her soul..

one mistake broke her heart fading away their sweet little memories.. memories of the happiness. ..with the sorrows.. their togetherness... beyond the truth..

precap
naming ceremony

-PREV PART 63 NEXT PART 65-
missed u a lot plz plz..
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love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
me first
by waiting for update
i was about to log off when i saw update
part is so awesome
so finally story proceeds
it's great to see Rano's concern
so baby got first gift from naani
now naankaran ceremony of

garv

wish to put baby's pic but can't get it 😭

Edited by pritm - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
r
awesum one di..
shooo shweeettt!!!!!
n really glad to know tht rano is helping him!!!!!

phew...relieved!!!!!
want another update plzzz...
its just awesum!!!!!!!

Edited by kawaii_geet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
awesome part di...loved it...huhhh its 1 am here but i want to read it before going off to bed...now i m off...thanx di for such a cute part...love u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
oh I am so glad Rano now knows.. and that of course she understands, both him and her.. that felt really nice.. great update.. continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

Awesome Amazing Magical Beautiful👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Geet thought he was J coz of the Cutie had her eyes Nahii 😆😆
oh woh tho Uski Princess ko aur na dehke isliye tha Geet is so Innocent😳😳😃😃😊
Maan Singh Khurana shopping😆😆😆😆😆
Garv apni Nani se mila wow😃😳😊
Maan covering up when Rano told Nani ki taraf se😭😭
Poor Maan par uski Princess ki Khushi apni Cutie aur Maan mein hai😳😃😊😃😳😊
Waiting for next part continue soon😍
Muski Di🤗👍🏼
Thanks😳
Edited by angelgurti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
😃 another update!
yayyy!
di, aaj i re-read khamoshi!
kuch likha hai uske liye...bhot chotu sa hai...just 4 lines!
yahin post kar doon?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

r
awesum one di..
shooo shweeettt!!!!!
n really glad to know tht rano is helping him!!!!!

phew...relieved!!!!!
want another update plzzz...
its just awesum!!!!!!!

😡😡😡😡
its past one am!
u r supposed to REST!😡

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