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Chickee

@Chickee

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#611

hahahahaha ... yeh dekh, mujhe credit mil raha hain!!!

Originally posted by: pranatim

🤗 for you chicky..

Loved the update ..Thanks for pm janet..

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Ishrafan11

@Ishrafan11

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#612

Wow great update too good hope they get married

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farhacassim

@farhacassim

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#613

Awesome, passionate update, Janet. Am still fanning myself..whew!

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#614

omg this update was one of the best ones yet!!

awesome job on this one janet!!

too good!!

loved reading this!!

thank you so much for the pm!!

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Simply_Smart

@Simply_Smart

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#615

Oh.My.God!!!!!

Wow!!

I don't really know what else to say right now, so I'll be back later!

But, for now, 👏

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#616

What's going to happen when they are married?

great update and thanks a ton for the pm

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Chhaya

@arhi-fan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#617

It was such an awesome update. More of a passionate one. Even i felt they would do it before marriage. Thanx for pm.

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#618

WOW was that hot or whatt?!?! Just perfecto..,,beautiful depiction of each action, words, feelings and just the passionate romance overall! Youve done a magnificent job as a writer to bring forth the correct emotions of Arnav and Khushi! I LOVED THE PART =) Do continue soon! thanks for the pm :)

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arshia

@ashvez

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#619

@Janet...Amazing update!!!

I enjoyed the tease between the brothers...Brilliant!!!

The contrast between the two was wonderfully potrayed...her hesitation, his openess for her to have her presence...through his difficult moment..as he din't care what others would think...as he is ASR...he doesn't bother about people's opinion.The struggle which he was going through was fantastic..he wanted her to understand him and just be with him...instead of thinking the inevitable of sleeping together.

Enjoyed the innocence with which she tries to win over him...with her seduction.Chooo Chweet.

And finally their control & resistance...needs a huge pat on their backs. & our heads...🤪for not running with varied thoughts...hehehehh!!!

Yaar!! JAb Dekho Break Lagaati hai...when will they go with their passion uninhibited???😆

Today's epi...I found yesterday's precap, more passionate then the real scene...as I was expecting just the heratbeats than the whole Rabba Ve..song.And some of Arnav's expressions were not reaching his eyes..he had a frown deeper than required for that particular scene.Only , towards the end his expressions got softened...which was apt for the entire sequence.The intensity was missing...it was not matching with Khushi's discomfort.But thats just me...

Ash.