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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey friends after long silence I gonna update here is next part of my work n I gonna give more plz read n reply

Part 7

Now holi celebrations r almost over..n Adda she came running to me ..She has rashes due to colors. But she never listen to me while playing..n even me I never stopped her…why….what other things I can giv to her. Accept some moments to joy. I try my best to provide every thing which she wants..But some times I can't fulfill her wishes…n even She is used to it….from the day which became the reason for her existence..Maan n Geet's marriage. He without thinking made me part of his lif…without thinking what law was ? What society's reason gonna b..how both families react ? He knew one thing he loved me…..up to an unknown limit. till know which I m searching for…

He took that step to get married. but why I got ready ?….even without thinking the outcome. But some where he was my hope.As I judged him. I was happy but not lik him..

Maan: what happened Geet ? (when he watched me standing silently he questioned )

Geet: Maan what gonna happen now ? ..(I said with shivering voice)

Maan : what Geet…u r my wife..n this is reality…I don't care what constitution says..what society says…( he was bit angry )

Geet: But I hav to..I hav to care what ll b reaction of my family. ( tears came out of my eyes)

Maan: What gonna happen let it go…we ll think about ….but today is our day..n don't spoil…this Geet…?

He said only this n held me by hand.before we could move forward Unexpected heavy rain stopped us…Mine n Maan's cloths were all wet .But how could I go home as such.So Maan loaded my Scooty at back seat of Jeep n we decided to go his home.I was shivering coz there was time of fall winters. Punjab is such an area where actual rainy season is this the winters…But that day was clear…how weather changed that was surprising …Heavy rain washed away my sindoore ..what that meant I was not aware…But that came in my mind now…might this was the signal of nature ….I m a married woman but even then my marriage was unacceptable..

At Maan's house

Geet: Maan how ll I go home

Maan: Its 11:30 n ur college ends at 4 so don't worry..

Geet: But Maan I m fellin to much cold.

Maan: there is not ladies wear…so do one think go to my room and mere cloths pehen lo…

Geet: per mere cloths.( I was bit in hesitation )

Maan: my servent is not here..so giv it me…main washing machine dryer main sukha deta hu.go ...

I did that..I changed in his nite gown….n he put my cloths in dryer….Maan also had to change..he was also shivering…But that rain changed my destiny…as I was in Maan's home. Which become the reason to cross all limits.He owned me.He was my life partner…some where I was also ready but there was a hesitation. But inner desire overcame all …

Maan was in his track pants ...his nite gown I wore... was scrolling down from shoulders.He looked at me for a while n then passionately started to kiss me..my neck my shoulders n my gown n his track pants were down on floor.We had crossed every limit after which no limit exists between two creatures. We had forgotten running time.We came to senses when Maan's phone buzzed.

Maan: Hello

His assistant Addi was on line.After discussing few things Maan disconnected

Geet: Maan what we hav done .We shouldn't hav done this .

Maan: No Geet we did nothing wrong ..u r my wife .( he had confident in his eyes n voice )

Geet: U accepted me but what about others…my family ur family .

Maan: They ll accept us jst hav faith.( he kissed me )

Geet: Maan its already four I should go now…

Maan: okey ur cloths r dry now..let me bring ( he put on her cloths n went out )

But what about my Mangal sutra.I couldn't remove .But Maan told me relations not depend on any symbol.Against my will I removed it.Putting on my cloths I went toward my house.My life was changed. I was not a girl any more ..a woman !!!married woman.

No body at home doubt me as all knew I was a faithful n loyal daughter.My sindoor was already washed away .n Mangal sutra I removed..

That was the first day n last day of my married lif.He left away ..He left me alone. Never looked back. from that day .

I called him in the morning…But his phone was switched of.He was not at home,Servent said Maan left late nite for Delhi.But why without letting me know.Servent had no phone no of Khuraanas in Delhi.I waited for him for days but he never asked me back.On the other side the people from Canada postponed their visit for few months due to some personal reasons.I felt relief that Now at least I could wait for Maan.But he never came back even after month.After so much labor I got no of KC..but no body replied. Where was he why he left me . Whether he was same lik others .Might b yes.

My exams date was around the corner.But I was moving away from my studies.I was jst going college in hop that some day Maan will b there in my way.In the same manner when I was ready for college.I felt giddy n fell down in my court yard. Local doctor said this might b due to burden of studies.Bur after that continuous vomiting made my Maa n Chachi worried.n that happened which I never expected. Gynecologist in Hoshiarpur cleared I was pregnant with one n half month baby.Maan's baby.My Mom n Chachi said nothing there n when they came back.A storm was waiting at out home.

Brij : Hamare Purkho ki izzat ko mitti main milatey hue tumko jarra bhi darr nahi lagaa .( He shoked me from shoulders n pushed me )

Channi Chachi : Brij is tarah mat karro…Pet se hai

Brij : Pet se hai to iski aarti uttaru…isko or jise sath isne muh kala kiya hai usko chodu ga nahi main.( he heled me from choti )

He slapped me many times Asked me many times about who was responsible for this .But how could I take Maan's name.Two days my family tortured me for abortion or other wise Brij Veerji was ready to take away my lif.But how could I kill my baby ...who had not any fault.How my mistake became the reason of a death .So I took final action n left my home at nit.Where to go even it was not clear to me…But I knew one thing my final destination was Maan ..n I had to reach .
But the way toward that I never got.
Geet Handa
Before moving froward don't forget to comment n hit lik...As I gonna update next part after a while 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

i m first yupiii

osum part dear.. to good


😃

Edited by ANGILS.KALI - 13 years ago
Sonia.KN thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

superb update but why maan left her pls make maaneet n ada meeting soon eagerly waiting for that

missed ur update jass by after three or four days u r updating r u alright
Edited by sakshi04 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
great work, loved it so so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Feeling very bad for geet, want to know the side of maan's story.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
part 7
nice part...
poor Geet...
so young and now pregnant with Maan's baby and where is that guy?
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
awesome update
seems like something i missingg how maan didnt came all this time there must be something or other that may have held him
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
oh terrible
do give us Maan POV why he left without leaving any message and never came back for her

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