LOVE..beyonds..LIMITS thread 2 pt 78 -pg 126 - Page 13

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nice part. i loved it... thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing part loved it
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me said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials me don't watch but me read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...me really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...me never pm u...4 my any update...
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Originally posted by: sukklover

frnd...😉...

4 Pming Me...😛
👍🏼4 ur
updates.👏👏👏..
me dear...😃..
really dear..😛
lots of hugs n kisses 4 u...🤗...
lov,❤️
Tama
P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...me only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as me saw many of my comments r copied me'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡
P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...me tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕
Note:
guys...me sad...me PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18..increased 30 now...😕
me said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials me don't watch but me read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...me really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...me never pm u...4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...me know just few..but me updated for them surely...but that surely me said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭


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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...rano-maan convo was sweet...loved the last passionate part...update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved da update
i want maan to beat up
hameer
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Posted: 13 years ago
kal se wait kar rahi hun pls update karo na
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😛 thnqq for d LIKES n COMMENTS 😛
part 67


geet smiled - me sirf aapki hu maan..sirf aap ki..

listening dose words...
maan heart pounded in happiness...

n wid dat he slammed his lips on her neck...
his sudden act made her close her eyes in acceptance...
his face got hidden completely inside d hollow of his neck...
his heart was beating faster n faster...
while her heart beat started to match up wid his...

as his lips touched d warm n white milky skin of her neck...
a shiver ran through deir spines...
he hugged her more tightly...
while she pulled his head more into her neck giving in to his needs...
she felt his lips making patterns on her skin...
he rubbed his lips on each n every inch of her skin...1st getnly n deeply...forcefully..making her insane...
...
his passion was not easy to handle for her...
but she loved it completely...

his lips reached from her neck to her scalp..rubbing sensuously..n den back to neck...
his fingers were dugged inside her skin of waist..
while she was tightly holding his head in anticipation...
...
dey didn't know anything...
all dey knew is nothing vil go wrong wen it cums to deir love..deir bond...deir emotions for each other...

he whispered in d crook of her neck..."..tum sirf meri ho..."

n his words carrased her skin making her moan his name..."...maan.."

...
his fingers were giving sensual massage on d skin of her delicate waist...making it change from white to reddish a bit...
she snaked her 1 hand more tightly over his neck...
while d fingers of her other entered his hairs..pulling dem in anticipation of his action...
he pulled her more n more tightly into him..but..
to his badluck..dere was no space remained...
his lips got adjusted in d crook while he nuzzled his nose on her throat...
her face was rised up giving him more room...
she was looking up..but her eyes were closed tighly..trying to catch up wid his passion...
he kissed her crook deeply...
d kiss was so intensive dat it became hard for her to breath...
she had to swallow her breath through her throat..

...
he slowly came out of her neck...
she made her chin down to meet his eyes...
dere were so many emotions dey could feel in each other eyes...
deir hands were still all over each others...

geet moved gently to his ear n kissed it gently...
deir was no blush anymore..but love n pure love...

maan's smiled..closing his eyes..as her lips touched his ear-lobe...


geet whispered - <3 jaan <3 ...me apki hu..apke liye bani hu...bina apke geet kuchh bhi nahi hai.. <3 ..geet..geet ki saans..geet ka pyar...geet ki khushiyan..geet ki zindagi...sab MAAN se hai...maan hai toh geet hai...<3 ..agar maan pareshan hai..to geet thik kaise ho sakti hai.. <3 ..apne maan ko khush dekhne ke liye to geet jiti hai...

...
maan's heart stopped beating wid dose love confession of geet's...
he couldn't breath...
he couldn't think..
he couln't feel anything else...
was she just said all...

a gal..he saw few days back..
n fell in love wid her...
he also thought vil she ever love him...
how scared he was wid d thought dat dey even dnt know each other...

he suddenly remembered d way she was leaving dat play ground..wen he saw her for 1st time...
how scared he was thinking he vil never b able to see her again...

n now...
...
d most beautifull gal in d world...
real angel created by god...
d real meaning of love n care...
GEET...loves him most in d world...

wat...wat he could ask more now...
dere is nothing left to ask...
coz dere is nothing other dan geet...
everything is geet...n only her...

his heart started beating faster n faster..hearing dose words of hers...

she could feel d flow of emotions in his eyes...
she carrased his hairs gently...

geet continued - maan...aap pareshan kyu hote hai..me hu na..apki geet..apki sari probs ko door kar dungi..mere hote huye..koi gum apko chhu bhi nahi sakta..warna ye puri duniya tabah kar degi apki ye geet...mera har lamha apke liye to hai..to fir aisa kaise ho sakta hai..ke apko meri zaroorat ho aur me ake paas na rahu...

maan was touched touched wid dose words...
he alwz took care of every1...
but he alwz wanted sum1 who vil take care of him...
vil take him like a small child..vil hide him into her delicate arms..
vil hide him from dis cruel world...

just den..she pulled him again..into d hug...
he rested his head on her shoulder..
his eyes were closed..
his hands were locked over her wist...
n his heart was locked inside her heart..

maan slowly whispsred - koi tumhe mujhse nahi chhin sakta geet..koi ye soche bhi..usse pehle me usse jaan se mar dunga...

she knew he was tensed...
geet - koi mujhe apse nahi chhin sakta maan...par kuchh aur bhi jo apko pareshan kar raha hai..batayiye mujhe...
maan - mera chhota bhai dev..uski life me etni probs chal rahi hai..his love life has lost d track...
geet smiled...
she loved d way he was conrcerned about his family...deir family..
geet - maan..apko usse waqt dena chahiye...sab ki zindagi fairy tale ki tarah nahi ho sakti na..babaji jo kuchh bhi karte hai..soch samajhkar karte hai..shayad isme uska kuchh bhala chhupa ho..koi sikh ho jo uske liye jaruri ho..babaji usse strong banana chahte honge...aur agar unka pyar sachha hai..to wo apna khoya huva rasta jarur dhund lenge...

maan listened to her carefully...
her words sothed his heart like balm...
how she understand situation so positively...
in 1 sec..she solved his probs..so simply..

he cam out of hug..to meet her eyes..

maan - tum mujhe etne achhe se kaise samajh pati ho...
geet smiled - maan ko geet nahi samajhegi to aur kaun samajhega...maan ko samajhne ka haq sirf geet ko hai...

maan was once again lost into her words...her love...

n with dose words...
once again...unknowingly.unintentionally...

he slammed his lips on other side of her neck...
it was again a sudden action which made geet go insane wid his passion...
re rubbed his lips deeply on her skin..
like her skin was giving him life...
his 1 hand moved from her waist to her hairs...
as his fingers touched d scalp of her hairs...
she let out a high breath in anticipation...
deir proximity was making dem go creazy...

...
her heart missed a beat...
as his tongue touched her skin...
his warm tongue between his lips..playing on her milky white skin..
she closed her eyes more tightly trying to match wid him...

her dupata was long fallen...
he tasted every inch of her skin n finally reached her collar bone..
she pulled his hairs tightly as he bite her collarbone..making a reddish mark...
...
d bite brought him back to his senses..which he was lost long...
he came out of her neck..
panting heavily..trying to catch his breath back aftr long...
both looked at each other flushed...
how creazy dey go wid each other...

he saw d reddish mark on her collar bone...
he took out his finegsr from her hairs..
n carrased d reddish mark ginetly wid his fingers...
she lowered her eyes..feeling blushy...
he gently take out his other hand from her waist...
cupped her face wid his both hands...
n placed a kiss love love n care on her forehead...

...

just den a male voice brought dem back to reality...

hameer - geet tum yahan...
geet n maan broke suddenly hearing his voice...
geet shocked a bit - ohh hi..hameer..
maan looked at d person top to bottom...
hameer - umm..yaah.me yahan dinner ke liye aaya tha..but tum yahan...
hameer was speaking to geet...
but his were caught on maan..which didn't go unnoticed by maan...
geet - haan..me bhi yahan dinner ke liye..
hameer - i hope.i didn't disturb..
dis time maan spoke...
maan - not at all..mr.hameer..btw..m MAAN...maan singh khurana...

...
geet looked at him wid dat...
MAAN SINGH KHURANA...
i didn't know his full name yet...
oughhh..mene kabhi unka pura naam tak nahi puchha...how stupid im ...
but she felt like she hav heart dis kind of name..sumwhere..from sum1...
she was not remembering...
her thought was broke by hameer's voice...

hamer - oughh..mr.khurana...its pleasure to meet u...my dad alwz keeps giving ur example...u r an ideal...
dere was no emotion on maan's face...
like hameer's sweet talk was not gonna melt maan singh khurana...
maan - ur dad...
hameer - yaah..mr.rizvi..industries..
maan - ohh..ohhk...nwz..how do u know my geet...

d word my geet didn't go unoticed by hameer..
neither by maan...
geet blushed a bit...dere was so beautifull smile on her...
she felt like she is in heaven...
maan singh khuran's geet...d word sounded so perfect..
n now she came to know..he must b a big personality...
people knows him by his own name...
his quite popular...
how i didn't know...
oughhh

hameer - actually we r from same class...
maan - ohhk..
hameer - u 2..??
geet - we r together...
maan smiled wid dat...
hameer - ohh..congos to u both...
maan - thnx..
geet - i hav a request...mere group me kisi ko mat batana..
maan n hameer looked at her confused..
geet - i wann make it special wen i vill tell dem...
hameer - ofcrose...
maan smiled - can i expect d same..
hameer - ofcorse mr khurana..
geet - umm..we shud leave now..see u...
hameer - yaah..

n wid dose words...
maan n geet made deir way...
leaving an extremely angry n shocked hameer behind...
he slammed his balled fist on near wall...his hnd started bleeding he didn't care...

as he was passing by...
he saw his geet in sum else arms...
his anger had no limit wid dat...
as he moved near..he sa dat person kissing geet's forehead...
he would hav killed dat person on d spot...
but he controlled himself n moved twords dem..
he got confusd wen he saw d d person is nothing but d great maan singh khurana...
goshhh..
how his geet knows maan singh khurana...
n how d maan singh khurana is dating geet...
dey said dey r together..
how can dat be possible..
geet is his right...
den helll howww...
dats not done..
no way he could let kind o dis happen...
he vil teach geet a lesson for touching sum1 else...
geet can b only his...
only hiss...

wid dat he again hit d wall hard...
just den a gal ran twords him worried sick..
she held his hand gently...
gal - wat d hell r u trying to do...
hameer - leave me..or i vil kill u...leave me alone...
gal - no way im gonna leave u...
hameer - is waqt mujhe akela chhod do wrna me kya kae bethunga ye me khud nahi janata...
he screamed - just gooo
gal got scared n left from dere getting hell scared of his sudden anger...

...

maan geet walking...
both were not looking at eah other..but deir fingers were mingled into each others...

geet naughtily - mr.khurana...

maan looked at her instantly
dere was inch of naughtyness on her face...
maan thinking.."..mr.khurana..wat is she up to...god save me.."

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome...no lust only true love
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update. I hate this Hameer.

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