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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#201

Loved the update Mya!

Poor Khushi seems to be going through quite an ordeal. First she can't get through to Arnav after their argument, and then she gets an earful from Mami Ji.

Arnav's scene was great to read. I look forward to reading whats going to happen when he gets home, provided Khushi hasn't fallen asleep!!

Thanks for the PM sugar!!

😊

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Nina90

@Nina90

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#202

The story's just beginning and I'm already hooked! Off all the story I've read, somehow, Arnav's thoughts and actions linger in my mind *stupid obsession*

The story's great so far and I love how Anjali keeps teasing them! Please update soon!

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@Flame.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#203

I loved it when he said, Mrs Khushi singh Raizada !! It sounded awesome 😛

And it was great reading about Arnav. I hope when he comes home she hasn't eaten anything and Arnav feels touched seeing her concern !

Omg cant wait for the next part to be updated 😊

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Vanisha

@TheBlueAngel

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#204

jeeezzz dey r both sooo stubborn yaar...dey truly mke a perfect couple😆
eagerly w8in 4 da nxt update😃

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LoveArnavKhushi

@LoveArnavKhushi

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#205

hey, update was nice.. both Khushi and Arnav are missing and thinking about each other.. but will never accept that fact 😆

My suggestion is please concentrate on ur writing.. there were many spelling mistakes.. so it becomes difficult to read hindi dialogues.. please don't take it negatively.. i liked ur story 😳

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desigirl_VD

@desigirl_VD

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#206

nice!! it wuld nice tat u showd arnavs point of view nice update tnks for the pm and update soon!

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#207

good one so both of them are stubborn

do continue

bye sumi

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AquaBluez17

@AquaBluez17

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: Meenakshi_Dhane
hey, update was nice.. both Khushi and Arnav are missing and thinking about each other.. but will never accept that fact 😆

My suggestion is please concentrate on ur writing.. there were many spelling mistakes.. so it becomes difficult to read hindi dialogues.. please don't take it negatively.. i liked ur story 😳

thanks 😊 i understand tht ppl were having some problems understanding some of the lines. i will try my best to fix those errors! thanks for reading anway😃