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Posted: 13 years ago
oh wow it was touching, pls geet maan ko ek chance do na pls
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Posted: 13 years ago
this is so so so so so so
awesome yaar
i loved it
it's amazing
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome outstanding...upd
lov it...
wow cant xpress in words hw maan words made me feel...
the intensity of his lov iz 2 b seen in his words...
gud wrk dear...
each & evry word of maan iz awesome...
lov it
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!devil s in so much pain...
can' bear dat...i hope nothing vl go wrong..
if she denied again maan ko toh use mandap se utakar le jana chahiye...
i think even she wants dat..
luvd d inner fear shared by maan...jst awesum..
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Posted: 13 years ago
i can't see maan like this how much he loves geet now he want to change because he love her so much but if geet don't accept him than i think she don't deserve his love
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Posted: 13 years ago
i am alll sob sob sob sob...lovedd his wordsss...
so much pain n sorrow n torturee..
waitinf for geet ka reply!
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Posted: 13 years ago
she went to meet Rishi in resturant and MAAN followed her See what love made him a stalker he smashed Rishi on glass tablehow can he control himself for so long after all he is DARE DEVIL and Geet came back with out talking to rishi and challenged Maan now Geet is turning into devil
He came to her room through windowand he begged her for giving him only one chance OMG yeh wakt bhi dekhna tha devil begging for a chance to be loved still Geet is not believing him em feeling really bad for MAAN
and eagerly waiting for Geet's reply Geet say yes
FOR
Abdullah, hadia and Harshita
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Posted: 13 years ago
Simply amazing!!!
Love can really change people and to great extents... Extents that may not exist for us to realize of it presence but only to be felt once in love...
As much as my heart goes out for Maan and his love for Geet, I feel for Geet too for her delimma is something that can be understood... Both are in pain and please release that for them!!! 😉
Great flow and nice pace Annie... Awesome story... Loving every update... great work 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
You ..! what are you doing here..? she asked in shock.. who is tat me thinking

I have to talk to you.. you can't leave this job.. you can't leave me.. ! he told he impatiently OMG the devil have cum to meet her

Maan you have been following me..? she asked in disbelief..

Please.. let me go..! she tried to free herself but his grip tightened on her..

Meantime they caught Rishi's attention.. he walked towards them.. OMG now rishi have cum wts gonna happen now

Leave her hand..! Who are you..? Rishi asked him rudely..

No one dares to ask me who I am.. ! he barked.. yeah rishi don do that or else u will not be alive

What are you doing..? she is my.. Rishi was about to finish his sentence but Maan raised his hand indicating him to stop.. hey am warning u na rishi don do that he ll kill u pls run for ur life

Don't complete this sentence because I may not be able to control myself after that.. he warned him..

But.. Rishi was about to answer when he snapped

Look.. you are standing here alive just because of her.. otherwise I have shredded you.. but I didn't even touched single strand of your hair just for her..but don't take it for granted.. because even I don't know when I may loose my control.. yes very true rishi oly coz of geet ur alive still don make the devil to loose the control

Please lets go from here.. all this is beyond my tolerance.. he told her while trying his best to control his anger..

Leave her ..she is my fiance.. O gosh now every thing gone OMG rishi wt will be ur condi

These word threw him over the edge.. he was unable to control himself.. the demon he had been fighting since yesterday was mocking at him.. OMG demon is cuming out of him

Before he could comprehend his own actions.. he smashed him in the glass table shattering it into numerous pieces.. see i told u na rishi see now wt happen to u

Geet gasped and ran towards Rishi..

Are you alright..? she asked him.. geet u r so concerend abt rishi uh???

Rishi looked around in disbelief.. He only had few scratches.. i told u before itself na rishi ...

He was still in fight with himself.. he wanted to tear him apart..

She turned violently towards him..

I told you before don't force me.. she spatted out..

You wont be able to succumb me to your demands..

She was furious..

I am going to marry him tomorrow and you can't stop me.. you can't do anything Mr Maan Singh Khurana.. omg wt decision she had taken now out of anger y geet y ??? u made such decision uh???

Even she didn't realized what she had said in anger,. She came here to refuse but in state of anger, she challenged him that she would marry Rishi.. OMG of of anger now u r becoming devil now geet listen don do this plz

Geet.. listen...he tried to argue..

But she left from there.. he followed her..

Geet listen to me.. he almost pleaded.. Now the devil is pleading ...

She was lost in her own thoughts when some one hugged her from back.. hmmm i think that is the devil

She was about to shout when he covered her mouth and pressed her to the near wall..

I can't let you go.. I can't ..he told her helplessly.. plz geet try to understand him plz...

How did you get here..? she asked him as soon as he freed her.. hey he is the devil he knws how to cum ok...

She pushed him a little to maintain some distance between them..

Always harsh ..always dominant.. this is what you are..! always demanding.. because other plead and beg in front of you.. omg again ur getting angry aon him y u have become devil to day uh???

He took few steps back.. and paused a little..

Look.. I don't know how to explain you.. I am not good at it..

But I .. I love you.. I don't want you to leave me.. He paused unable to frame right words.. hey geet see he is showing his love to u

please don't go..

he felt helpless.. he was pleading.. Maan Singh khurana.. The devil himself was pleading.. NO MSK is pleading unbelievable my head is spinning

I know you don't like my attitude.. but its not my fault .. I have been always like this..

There was loneliness that surrounded me.. I secluded myself further from everyone.. from everything.. now maan is openeing up himself plz listen to him geet

When you sent your own mother to mental hospital ..what else do you expect..? you are the one who is responsible for this loneliness.. there must be some reason i believe ...

You don't have any idea about anything.. do you want to know why I did that..?

Please I don't want to know.. because there can be no justification for such an absurd behavior.. hey listen to him first i knw u r angry but u have to listen geet

Ok then let it be that way.. I accept its my fault.. I accept I am bad.. I accept everything.. I won't deny anything,.

But don't I have the right to love some one.. ? you can't snatch that right.. yes geet he has the right to love geet ...

Please I know you want something different.. something more which I am not..

But I can do anything for you.. ANYTHING.. see the devil is changing coz of u geet She couldn't believe.. Maan Singh Khurana.. man full of ego and dominance was confessing his love.. she looked at him with doubtful eyes.. look into his eyes geet how much truth in that plz try to understan geet

Look I am trying., I am trying to change just for you..

I left him today.. I could have killed him but I spared him..

I could have taken you with me forcefully but I came here just to talk to you.. OMG i can't take man the devil is pleading so much .. geet listen plzzz

He tried to explain himself..

He was in pain..

This gnawing pain was killing him more and more..

He just needed one chance to redeem himself.. yes once chance one chance he'll change o god wt is this

But I can't trust myself.. I know I am sinister.. I can't trust myself until you are there..

He continued..

I would not let anyone rest in peace if Iam not in peace..

But if you are with me I can try.. I love you ..Please reciprocate me once.. just once.. see geet how much he is trying to change plz give him one change ...

But she turned her face.. she was still unable to believe him.. because this was not the Maan she knew.. this maan was not the devil she despised.. right now she could see a man who was begging for his love..GRRR now u r becoming devil wt will i do

But could she trust him'? yeah she can just one chance just only one chance

That day in office when I kissed you.. you responded back..

That day when you were in my bed you slept with me peacefully.. didn't you?

There is something between us.. Don't deny it.. yeah he correct geet

But she was blinded by her sheer hatred..

I am lost in this unknown obscurity.. I always thought that darkness is stronger than light.. it overpowers light.. But I was wrong.. now I realized even one ray of right is enough to break the darkness..

Despite my countless mistakes.. why does it feels so pure when you are around me..?

I am dominant.. but why do I want to change my decision just for you..?

I never think once before.. but why I ceased myself from killing him just because it would have hurt you..?

I never cared what others think.. then why I came here without letting anyone know..?

I know its not going to be easy.. we will have to work on it on daily basis.. but I would still want to try.. no matter how impossible it may seem, because I want you. I want all of you, forever, everyday.. for eternity.. omg he is pouring out everyithing to her i couldn belive that the devil will open up to geet like this

I told you yesterday that if you want me to beg you ..then sorry I won't' But today I am ready to even beg you,.. Now he started beg also this is impossible man just for one person the devil is changing so much yaar

He dropped on his knees.. and hugged her .. and begged

I cannot exist without you..! I simply can't..

I am forgetful of everything but seeing you again..

My life seems to stop there, I unable to see beyond that..

You have absorbed me.. I feel like something in me is dissolving'

Why why'just tell me why.. why I am so helpless..

Geet..! I will ruin everything' I want to change.. please let me try once..

I cant do it alone.. I can only do it for you.. I can only try if you are there beside me..

Please just once say you are with me.. leave everything.. just go with me..

Please just once...! no me sobbing like anything here this is too much wake up geet listen to him give him once chance plz

Maan Singh Khurana an evil monster himself wanted to be defeated.. he himself accepted his defeat even without fighting..

But why I fell helpless in front of you...?

Never wanted this' Its frustrating.. its killing me.. this Excruciating pain is unbearable... take out his pain geet i knw u have undergone so much but ... but now pls help him yaar

But how can you love me so much..? You are heartless creature..! she accused him.. OMG u not understanding him now wt will i do

If I don't have a heart then why does I feel so much pain here.. he placed her hand on his heart.. why does it I feel so much pain here when you walk away..?

I always thought myself to be heartless.. but I cant be.. loving you is the only thing that made me realized I have heart .. A heart that can contain love..immeasurable love for u

Please don't go away..

I am not even control of myself...

I might do something that I may regret myself...

Please save me.. save me from myself...

Please...!

He begged bending on his knees..

I want to try geet . just for once.. to be good.. just for you

when I saw you lying unconscious on the floor.. that night changed something in me..

I am a devil.. but I am a devil who is insanely madly in love with you

NO no no i cant take this any more geet i am getting so suffocated by ur behaviour now plz try to understand plz give him one chance i beg u knw plz plz plz

his eyes welled up for the first time in his life.. OMG first time devil is crying coz of u geet atleast now cant u understan that he is trying to change himself frm devil to normal person uh????

DIDI awesome update so much painful update i m felling that pain now plz continue soon ...
OMG this update is dedicated for me uh didi thank u so much didi luv u uumaahh
i am so happy didi
Edited by poongs123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Rapcheek bhapkas dhasu update
maan feelings u describe very well
my devil changing only for geet
loved it

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