Geet & Maan OS:-The Date!

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Great that I had a chance to comment before I slipped off😃

I am sure you are a big romantic at heart - judging from 24HOURS and this one.

I loved the OS immensely, I love mushy romances a lot..and your concept of a strong minded Geet, a professional yet soft hearted Maan and Office Romance is just too great...I go into dreamland whenever I read such stories..

Well the plan for the date was awesome...MSK also needs help, hmm? The sweet and simple gesture like dropping off one invi card which he didnt do this time should have served as a great hint ... Loved Maan getting everything ready for Geet through Adi

and the naughty idea of introducing her to his date; Geet getting all jealous and insecure at the idea of meeting Maan's date 😆was awesome...

I just love it that your Geet is always a strong minded individual - i hate lumpy character sketches showing Geet as a helpless person depending on Maan 😡

ooh cant stop gushing about it..it was too romantic 😳

I quite love the idea of adding a part or two , will u try ?

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pushpi

@pushpi

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

That was super duper cute!! Wish there was a Maan like that out in my community hehe :-)

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Bulbul

@Bul3

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Aw 😳 lovely and supercute OS 👏 great work!

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-Elfin-

@-Elfin-

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

I guess after reading my comment everyone will pounce on me with jootas and chappals.😆😆

I dont want a Part II

Sometimes incompleteness imparts a certain aura and romanticism.😳

The beauty would be, each one of us will imagine the end in our own way and it would be different, the common ground being "happily ever after"😉

But that does not mean I do not want another OS...samjhi tum *Maan ishtyle*😉😃

I loved the story but more so I loved the characters especially Geet, I like girls who do not mix personal and professional. She is in love with the man, she gets jealous and hurt but that does not stop her from doing her job. Bravo.👏👏

And Maan was yummilicious...call me old fashioned but I love men to take charge specially when it comes to wooing.☺️☺️

Fabulous piece of work.👏

Loved it.😃

Thanx for the pm love.🤗

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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Glad to see you Manashi...

I shall reply you later...I have headache building and need to eat breakfast. 10 mints I start my work.

See you around. Have you read all of my FFs? You need to bring yourself out of it...duniya jay tel lene aish tu kar...

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-Elfin-

@-Elfin-

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Newdime
Glad to see you Manashi...

I shall reply you later...I have headache building and need to eat breakfast. 10 mints I start my work.

See you around. Have you read all of my FFs? You need to bring yourself out of it...duniya jay tel lene aish tu kar...

Oh no problem Shaheda...take care and rest...

Yes I have read all your ffs...they are brilliant...just the way i like...😃

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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: pushpi
Hola my creative writer

How iz it going Kiddo...
it has been so busy since morning..this stupid escalation then meeting...I feel hungry now...may be i should eat my lunch early...😕

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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Who Knows Better!

Wikipedia: I know everything!
Google: I have everything!
Facebook: I know everybody!
Internet: Without Me you all Nothing!
Electricity: Keep talking bi**hes! ...

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Aww, Shoo shweet! Loved it! :)

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arabianpaki

@arabianpaki

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Newdime
Who Knows Better!

Wikipedia: I know everything!
Google: I have everything!
Facebook: I know everybody!
Internet: Without Me you all Nothing!
Electricity: Keep talking bi**hes! ...

So true.. I know the pain without electricity..
I can go days without internet... but electricity.. Props to our ancestors who survived without electricity.. and to those people living in third world countries.. who still have to survive in limited electricity!

though between the other three ...google wins 😆..always!