Ye Ishaare Hawaon Ke..! THREAD 1 - Page 48

Originally posted by: piya-

RES...

This was one of the best updates of this ff starting hi itna dreamy tha Maan aur Geet ek saath ek dusare ki baho mein

Kaash har din aaj jaisa ho toh inn palko ko sapne sajane ki jarurat nahi hogi

Kaash har aalam tumhari baho mein guzre toh Rab k darbaar meri koi farmaish nahi hogi

Tumhare daaman mein rekhar sadiyan beeth jaaye hume yakeen hai khushkismati ye humari hogi

Second highlight of this part was the Spare key

Aaj iss taufe ko Kabul karke meri zindagi mein apni mehek bheker doh

Apna haq jatakar mujhe apne zulfo k saaye mein kaid kar lo

Apne kadmo ki chap mere ghar mein sajakar meri veeran zindagi ko apne pyar se roshan kar doh

Ye key kafi important part tha which showed the significance that Geet holds in Maan's life

Phir Geet ka apne ghar aana Maan ka ghar uska ghar hi toh hua then those pics and the lovely lines written on them hai main marjaawa koi bhi ladki 7ve aasman mein udne lagegi

Aur phir maaneet ka pyara sa khana was so sweet

Another highlight was when maan teases geet that he was dreaming abt a girl

Maaneet ka hug aur tumhari pyari si poem was like a cherry on top of the cake

Outstanding update loved it muahh

Originally posted by: crazydevil87

bahar bechari rimi k haathon mein dard ho gaya hoga darwaza bang kar kar k aur ye geet madam maan ki cuteness admire karne mein busy hain...LOL

Maan: Jaan... Mere lips itne hi ache lag rahe hain to why don't you glossify them...sahi h maan beta maar diya mauke p chauka...

Geet: kitne besharam ho tum Maan... romance baad me karna.. Bahar ka shor nahi sunai de raha.. Rimi kabse darwaza peet rahi hai... wah ji jb khud madam admiration business mein busy theen tab to bechari rimi ka dhyan nai aaya ab maan ko special gud mrning chahiye to mana kar diya...ye to sarasal nainsafi h geet......

Maan: acha ji.. Utni der se jab aap mujhe dekh rahi thin tab to aapko ye khayal nahi aa raha tha...agree wid u maan

Geet: meri marzi.. Ab aa raha hai.. Jao Maan... Rimi ko pata lag gaya to...sahi baat h ab to bas madam ki hi marzi chalegi

Maan: pata lag gaya to kya hua... She knows we love each other..samajhne ki koshish karo maan bahot sari teasing jhelni paregi.....hahah

Geet: pata hai to kya hua.. Maan acha thori na lagta hai.. Please Maan.. Meri khatir jao na..ye lo ab maan kya kar sakta h geet ne to trump ka ace phek diya...bahar bechari rimi k haathon mein dard ho gaya hoga darwaza bang kar kar k aur ye geet madam maan ki cuteness admire karne mein busy hain...LOL

Maan: uffo Angel... You know I can do anything for you... And now you're taking advantage of that...ab facility h to use to karegi na...LOL
hehe sahi h geet lagta h aaj sari facilities use kar legi pehle maan uski baat nahin taal skta wali ab actress hone wali...LOL

rimi maan dreams mein nai reality mein tha...bas tumhein pata nai chal paya...
i luved geet's restlessness for talking to maan n den getting worried bout his lunch...dat was really very sweet...😊
awww dat was really sweet of maan to give her THEIR house keys...😊
oh i sooo luved ur idea of d room filled wid her pics n lines written on it straight from maan's heart...muah muah muah...hats of for d brilliant job dear...
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dis is for d mesmerising lines u wrote on d pictures...
you beautifully described geet's reaction over seeing those pictures n maan's startled reaction thinking geet was his dream awsome...
i sooo luved deir cutie kitchen covo its best part was jab maan says main kisi aur ka khayal rakhne mein busy hoon...hahaha budhdhu geet wo tumhein hi keh raha h...
chalo maan abse u'll get ur angel's hand cooked yummy food rather dan your hand cooked horrible one jisse tum bor ho gaye the...reshu their passionate expressive hug was truly mesmerising...👏
luved every bit of deir cute romance...n last two beautiful verse...amazing n beautiful...hats off n applauds n muahhhsss for such enchanting cute sweet n lovey dovey update...U R AN AMAZING WRITER KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK DEAR!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: vibhashekhar

Nice ff...

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

awww!!!...maan is so sweet!

loved it!

continue soon!

Originally posted by: luv_DD

omg d part z beautiful. .
Bechari rimi. . .
Aww loved maaneet. .
Spare ki ka idea was d bst . .
The words wid geet's pics r awesum . .
Love maan so much. . .
N pasta khane ka bahut aacha tarika hai.
Lovely . .want nxt part super son

Originally posted by: geetsweet

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi

brilliant update,,
loved it very much...
loved each n every dialogue...