Y is life so UNFAIR??!! Thrd 2 (link thrd 3 pg 1) - Page 57

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

maan is really a bast***

geet shud hav killed him


but wht i hate most is he will torture her, he wll sleep with every girl possible but atlast he will get a life happily ever after but geet shud b pure, tortured n die evry min n , only hav him in her life n even after abused n rotten in hell by him she have to have a heart to forgive him when one 5n day suddenly he realise his mistake n a little remorse when compared to the hell evry min she gone


is it the same fate for ur story also ?? If so plz think some thing diff bcoz at last seeing maaneet together sucks

i knw i reacted a bit overly but wht to do evry where its the fate of mny stories n geet hav the same situatin n maan in same set of mind
so i am really waiting for some real twist n dhamaka where it can satisfy my brain while reading a story
actually i asked many writers to think in diff perpective but also respetd thir view but never twice mentiond my idea n so the case with u bcoz i will anyway read ur ff from ur view so its just my opinion n no offence or not to hurt u

so plz dont think it as -ve remark n take to heart n think abt discontinuing story
i liked ur story but having got to read same type of senarios through out the forumns made me ask for diff story line rather than a similar hunt n torture game

hope u dont take offence
n i wont b bashed by anyone for voicing my opinion
bcoz i wont anyway write same stuff twice so i will read n comment n like the posts



Hey that's a very good response!!!
I'm so apalled that it brought out this kinda reaction from u 😆

but hey that's so not the fate of this ff!!! Maybe u r forgetting that geet is not some damsel in distress!!! She is THE Geet Handa!!! THE sherni!!!!

No doubt she is broken rite now, but that's because she is in shock and trapped bcoz maan found her all of a sudden, all her fears hv come true... But she will get out of it!!!

She is so not suffering when he is enjoying his life!!! If she will suffer, then he will HAVE to suffer with her!!!

Don't worry it's just gonna take some time but she's gonna stand up pretty soon

n I'm happy that u took it out of ur system...u know it's not a goodthing to keep it all inside!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

Any way after posting such a long post i was bit cool
being too involved in ur story i cant ctrl myself hating ur maan in this(only this bcoz in rest of ur ffs i loved his char) ff

so i must say u r one of those gud writers who can get extreme out of readers dear

really gr8



Thx dear
i know it's a very big compliment
n I'll try not to disappoint u in future...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: srirad

<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">Wonderful update...👏</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">Loved theit conversation..</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">Felt very sad for geet...She will apologize or not.?</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">Continue soon..</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="4">Eagerly waiting for next😊</font>



Thanks srirad
I don't know if shell apologise or not...hvnt thought abt it yet
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abisamratgunjan

<font color="#ff00ff" size="3">lovely update dear</font>

<font color="#ff00ff" size="3">we cant see maan like that</font>
<font color="#ff00ff" size="3">pls make him change</font>
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</font>
<font color="#ff00ff" size="3">
</font>
<font size="3" color="#9900ff">and for ur porblem dear</font>
<font size="3" color="#9900ff">see what u think</font>
<font size="3" color="#9900ff">and what u feel right u do it</font>
<font size="3" color="#9900ff">but what u choose in ur life is the precadiment also</font>
<font size="3" color="#9900ff">u should be with that</font>
<font size="3" color="#9900ff">dont no what is our fate</font>
<font size="3" color="#9900ff">may be ur bf may be good or ur parents choce</font>
<font size="3" color="#9900ff">so think with heart and head on</font>
<font size="3" color="#9900ff">bt after that dont blame anyone dear</font>
<font size="3" color="#9900ff">becoz u took the choice</font>
<font size="3" color="#9900ff">so go head wihich u think the best</font>



Hey don't worry, he will change...but slowly n gradually... He has just been evil in like 5 updates...story hasn't even moved too much...so how can I change so soon?!!

Thnx so much for a wonderful advice!! I'll try to go with my heart but that's the problem, my heart is confused lol 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: d2407

I was wateing for this ff so impatiently..its awesome..thanks for the updates..hope geet vl gather some courage to fight maan..do update soon..thanks



Thnx dear
don't worry geet is a strong girl!!! 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

i noe maan s such a jerk..!
but he can't c geet's tears..
he s afraid of losing her..may b dats y he s behaving as a devil so that geet vl accept him out of fear!



Nice observation!!! I mean he is getting botheredby her calling him monster!! But he don't know himself that yet!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: seemamary

Loved it, amazing. continue soon and have that boy problem solved in your life.



Thanks honey
n I wish it gets solved too *sigh*
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, brilliant part
feel sad for geet
continue soon



Thnx dear
I too feel bad for geet..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: todayzstar

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="2">Wonderful update...
cntnue soon..:)
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Thankyou dear
n I'll try to update it as soon as I can
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Posted: 13 years ago


Thx sneha

ps: love ur profile pic...made me nostalgic...those were golden times of geet

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