Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag
maan is really a bast***
geet shud hav killed him
but wht i hate most is he will torture her, he wll sleep with every girl possible but atlast he will get a life happily ever after but geet shud b pure, tortured n die evry min n , only hav him in her life n even after abused n rotten in hell by him she have to have a heart to forgive him when one 5n day suddenly he realise his mistake n a little remorse when compared to the hell evry min she gone
is it the same fate for ur story also ?? If so plz think some thing diff bcoz at last seeing maaneet together sucks
i knw i reacted a bit overly but wht to do evry where its the fate of mny stories n geet hav the same situatin n maan in same set of mind
so i am really waiting for some real twist n dhamaka where it can satisfy my brain while reading a story
actually i asked many writers to think in diff perpective but also respetd thir view but never twice mentiond my idea n so the case with u bcoz i will anyway read ur ff from ur view so its just my opinion n no offence or not to hurt u
so plz dont think it as -ve remark n take to heart n think abt discontinuing story
i liked ur story but having got to read same type of senarios through out the forumns made me ask for diff story line rather than a similar hunt n torture game
hope u dont take offence
n i wont b bashed by anyone for voicing my opinion
bcoz i wont anyway write same stuff twice so i will read n comment n like the posts
Hey that's a very good response!!!
I'm so apalled that it brought out this kinda reaction from u 😆
but hey that's so not the fate of this ff!!! Maybe u r forgetting that geet is not some damsel in distress!!! She is THE Geet Handa!!! THE sherni!!!!
No doubt she is broken rite now, but that's because she is in shock and trapped bcoz maan found her all of a sudden, all her fears hv come true... But she will get out of it!!!
She is so not suffering when he is enjoying his life!!! If she will suffer, then he will HAVE to suffer with her!!!
Don't worry it's just gonna take some time but she's gonna stand up pretty soon
n I'm happy that u took it out of ur system...u know it's not a goodthing to keep it all inside!!!
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