IPKKND: It's Not Right! Thread 1 - Page 73

Shyam is such a creep! Arghhh!

wow so intense 😲...great update...👏

:) i just have to comment though i have not finished this chapter! u've got a great sense of humour..i keep smiling while reading.. esp that bit where arnav asked payal to dance!! haha and now when khushi is thinking about attraction: attraction is when she wanted to eat jalebis with some guys in lucknow!!!...hahaha..how sweet and innocent! keep it up❤️

love ur story please add me to pm list

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan

Nice one! This Shyam creep is disgusting!

Thanks!

Originally posted by: Bubblii

I am completely hooked to this story! love it love it love it!

I loved the part where she tells him to stop babying his sister!

Awesome! 😆

Thank you! I definitely think Arnav needs to stop doing that, on the show as well!

Originally posted by: Zeee

aww man!! poor khushi! and arnav! dude!! you got the wrong guy! its shyam you want not abhi!!!

xx

Originally posted by: FarighInsan

Aaahh..!! the last linee!!! :) :) :) it gives me the shivers... And pooor Khushi... wish i wa there instead of her right then, i wudv punched the weirdo right in the nose, knocked him out and dragged him out of the house and thrown him into the gutter!! The filthy slime..!! Too bad Khushi dznt realize he cant actually DO all that, that thr are a hundred ways she can save her family from that evil snake ! Well, thats Khushi, naive and innocent... But oooh Shyam Booger deserves a beatinnnggg!!! Awsome update! loved every bit of it, even the Shyam part, cuz ofcrs tht makes up partv the story!

Aww so glad you liked it! :DD

Originally posted by: AquaBluez17

OMGg!! Shuey!! YOu udpated!! No wayy!!!


Awesome update hun! Oh no silly Arnav, blaming it all on Abhi!

I want to punch tht creep. plzzz can I?!?!?!? PLZZ??!??!!?!?

I will take tht as a yes and go n punch him :D

If polices come 2 your house, it is all on you buddy :P

Mya :D

P.S. We r still not friends teehee. We hav a mutual understanding when it comes to FF's rofl. I loved tht Avi!!

Thanks so much! You and Hershi can both take turns punching Shyam :P

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Loved the update Shuheda!

Poor Khushi...she can't lighten her load with anyone it seems.

I can understand why she won't tell Arnav, but why not Abhi?

Looking forward to reading more.

⭐️

Thank you! All will be clear in the next chapter :)

Originally posted by: harsh42

Aah!!

That dirtbag of a man!! Toad, Shyam!!!
Man, do I hate him!!!

Awesome update Shuheda 😳

Do continue soon... And thanks for the PM that you're gonna send 😆

Thanks so much!

Originally posted by: aparna5293

This arnav is such is slow brain person and claimed that he knows everything.
But we still lovee him
dont make hetred track plz
i want arnav to believe khushi

Aww, no hatred track I promise! Arnav very much likes Khushi and he's admitted it to himself. Now he just has to admit it to Khushi!

Originally posted by: bhavnah

grt update dr

Originally posted by: immayurfan

Nice part

Originally posted by: alice54

Good update!!!!!!!

Hope she says the truth to Arnav and he rips him apart...

Originally posted by: cpervaiz

its kind of unnesscesary to put all blaming it on abhi and not telling arnav anything...otherwise it was a nice one i must say:)

Thank you everyone!

Originally posted by: reyabear

Yay I was the 50th liker. :P

This update was too sad :( I wanna kick that Shyam in the *you know where* reeeaalllyy bad! Watch me go ninja on him like George Lopez *wachhaaa!*

I hope Arnav beats him to a pulp soon! :D

& I hope Arnav and Khushi get married, have 2 kids, and live happily ever after...okay now I'm just getting carried away. :P

Woo!

Don't worry Shyam will get what's coming soon! But the marriage and 2 kids is a looong way away yet :PP

Originally posted by: malluangel

hershi.
you're stalking abilities scare me.


loveddd the update.
uff. arnav! why are you so blinddd

Haha, they scare me too :PP

Thanks! Love is blind Aishu!

Originally posted by: desisweetheart9

Thanks for the PM. Yuck. Shyam is horrible.

Originally posted by: anita_21492

she could have told arnav or abhi the truth about the creep

i liked the update

thanks for the pm and please update soon

Originally posted by: rumu

Arnav should kill tht Snake sooon...

Excellent asusal...

Originally posted by: pinkpearlz

I intensely dislike shyam, ugh!
Ok babuji tussi great ho! Hp arnav khushi will talk and sort out the problems.

Originally posted by: magi11

👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼... superb update...

Originally posted by: sarach

fab update..plzzz update sooon

Thank you everyone!

Originally posted by: uniquebluerose

Oh Gosh this Shyam the slimy ball...

how i hate him...please somebody 🤢😡 teach me anger management...I think i will killl him soon!!!!!

Actually not one stick s are necessary i am so angery that i can burn him to death...He hurt Khushi

Oh god somebodyplease tell Arnav and I am sure he wiould do the needful ...i have half mind to shout ARnav and give him the message

hope Khushi doesn't agree to the marraige for the sake of her parents or anything like that!!!!

oh god please let thing sbecome alright soon

Haha, no need to dirty your hands by touching Shyam, he'll get what he deserves soon!

Thanks for your comment as usual :D

Originally posted by: -Gautami

Very well writtn.
Nice updt.

Originally posted by: rbarretto

super update...

Originally posted by: minimuffin86

another misunderstanding in the making... and here i thought that they had made progress. great update! thanx for the pm!

Originally posted by: mohitkizee

Very well written
Just loved it

Originally posted by: MsCeylon

Why is Khushi acting like a scary cat ?

I feel sick with this Shyam character, he's worse than the one in the story... :(

Pls make Arnav realize the truth quickly... pls...

Originally posted by: littlemoi

fantastic!!

Originally posted by: prerna1

great part
plz continue soon

Thank you everyone! :D

Originally posted by: payal.12

great as always...😍

Originally posted by: Raadhni

love ur story please add me to pm list

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

simply awesome

Originally posted by: Bloem123

Loved it very nice Update

Originally posted by: KaushalyaFan

That was great.

KF

Originally posted by: thouhida

wow so intense 😲...great update...👏

Originally posted by: Fahmz

that was fantastic ⭐️

Originally posted by: day2008

THANKS

Originally posted by: tinsel

Fab update⭐️

Thank you everyone! :D