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Awesome Natasha! Your style of writing simply mesmerizes the reader with it's etiquette description! You can actually picture an image whilst reading phrases, and is enticing, and touching! I especially liked this phrase you wrote!

"The sky overhead was slowly turning from its deep purple to the pitch black that matched how he felt that night; broken and crushed and left to nothing. Random bright specks gradually started to light the empty mass of heaven above. His back was set against the trunk of a large tree and his knees were brought up to his chest while his face was buried in-between. He let out a huge sigh and brought his head back up to meet with the tree trunk. A silent tear fell down his cheek while his eyes turned up to gaze into the night sky."

Emotions, and the backdrop of the environmental description, enveloped reader's into a charm, and it blended so well!

Continue soon!
Keep smiling...
Love
Soni

Hey Natu, too bad you has flu, anyways how you feeling now ? How is your friend now?

It was really good to read a story written by you after a long time, you style is something very peculier and different, Awesome story.

Takecare

omg that story was so BEAUTIFUL! im happy it didnt have a sad ending! i luved this happy ending! plz cont. soon!

Awww that was soo wonderful, i think i really needed ur to read u writing!!! 😆😆 and welcome back! 😃😃😃

That was truely amazing..as always of course! 😳

a really nice short story natasha welcome back. we missed u. hope ur feeling betta 😊