ArHi SS/FF - With Or Without You- Chp 61/Pg114-Last Chp - Page 25

Originally posted by: Janet.Das

Hi there Vrush! (Erm, apologies if that's like a pet name and I'm being an over familiar idiot!)

Hey Janet! Call me Vrush! I dont stand on formality.

Well well well, what on earth were you giving me so much bhaav for on my fan fiction when you have such an amazing piece of writing here?! Dude really, I would've felt so proud if I had already read this FF before reading your comment! I would've been like oh my God she read and commented! Well, now that I know it was you, I still have that reaction, haha.

Me did not give any bhav to you. I said as i saw it. I try my hand at these ramblings. Well, and i loved the way you have written. Truly magical. some instances were so funny i could not stop from laughing hard.

Honestly, I'm not too much of a FF reader - let's just say that I'm not hooked onto anything and everything. Of course, if something catches my attention, I'll wait with baited breath for updates. I replied to your comment on my thread and then saw this FF come on the first page of the forum. Since your username stuck in my mind, I just quickly opened to skim through. Am I glad I did!

I know what you mean about reading FF for i read after Nargis recommends. I am not one to read all FFs. One is that if they dont update on regular basis my patience wears out... though i know who i really wait for an update. There are some fab writers on the forum, namely Livelygal, Romantic.chick whom i follow big time and now you have on my list of favs. I have yet to read Contract of hearts and i am sure it will easier for me now that it is over so no more waiting.

Thanks for reading mine.

I have been rather unwell with a throat infection and mostly bedridden for the past few days. That, of course, didn't stop me from reading your entire FF at one go. It's like reading a Mills & Boon with a story line! I cannot begin to tell you what a pleasure it was to read your FF.

Yeah i work on the M&B Style. I try to go beyond what the serial has to offer and yeah i try and give a new perspective. Though i do One shots to keep up with the track and my interpretation of the precap or a promo. So that is absolutely sticking with what the story has to offer though my masala is always there...na!! 😳

You Know M&B and storyline usually dont go together but i am trying my best to give some drama and story to work with.

I love how you've managed to create different people out of Khushi and Arnav and yet bring out such an amazing story. Normally, what I like about a FF is if it's somewhere in conjunction with the actual characters. In this case, however, you started a brand new thing and yet it's truly adorable. I'm a sucker for passionate love stories.

Ah! you see i have tried to keep them in same characterisation rather than character. I try to keep them in similar so it is easy to relate but yeah if i had kept them the same way they are, these guys in my story would be too frustrated by now. They would not have gone beyond eye locks...and that I definitely wanted to break from... They are from this generation and not totally desi(khushi)

From the last chapter, I see a bit of the closed non-understanding hero/too understanding trying to understand heroine coming up. Do I see a bit of angst coming up too? Oh well, I'm a sucker for angst too, haha!

Yeah some more drama else i would actually finish this story already...

pyar hua hai, ikraar baaki hai... toh bacha kya hai?? so thora drama and then closure... let him get out of this kabhi haan kabhi na mode!!

OK I've rambled enough with utter rubbish. In all, an amazing job really wonderfully done. I hope you keep at it! I won't ask for PMs mostly coz I know that going forward, I'll pro-actively check if you've updated :-)

~Janet~

No it is not rubbish i feel good when i read about what you perceive and how you interpret what i am trying to say. It gives me impetus to strive harder and bring a story that is wholesome.

Ah i shall send anyway. And i write in bursts. So yeah you might find four updates in as many hours sometimes and then none for few days... Frustrating i know but i only work when i am inspired!!

BTW now you can tell who actually talks lot of rubbish!!

Sharu

why do i have a feeling that they are going to drag this shyamu exposure till diwali?

I'm going mad. But I've got A big surprise for you.

You do?


now please tell me fast..or else..i will go mad!!

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

Sharu

why do i have a feeling that they are going to drag this shyamu exposure till diwali?

its not just your feeling mine too 😭😭
but rush i have braised myself up. because i have gone through n number of k-experience
with these kind of dhamaka ending the marriage with leads friend😡😔
at least here we are sure of the outcome Arhi marriage
so i am will to suffer it 😆

even with that diwali seems to better
but i wonder how will they drag.by that time i would have started hating rabba ve and
kushis dance 😡😭😭

If u don't mind I need 10-15 mins for ur surprise. I'm making a banner siggy for your story.

Oh yeah Sharu


i guess we will just have to grin and bear!!

and Lekha that is so sweet of You!!

i am waiting!!

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

Oh yeah Sharu


i guess we will just have to grin and bear!!

and Lekha that is so sweet of You!!

i am waiting!!

haha and we have FF written by you 😳 and some more in the forum and IF itself to vent out our frustration.
I feel its so much better now compared to KTH days 😔

Oh so true Sharu

the FFs on the forum helps to tide it all well...

otherwise i would have been bored and long gone..

i know sometimes i wonder why i started this FF for i know if not for this i would have left watching Iss Pyar for sheer drag!!
i mean go back to watching on sporadic basis

and know that you have not missed much!

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

Oh so true Sharu

the FFs on the forum helps to tide it all well...

otherwise i would have been bored and long gone..

i know sometimes i wonder why i started this FF for i know if not for this i would have left watching Iss Pyar for sheer drag!!
i mean go back to watching on sporadic basis

and know that you have not missed much!

i agree rush , typically that what i do these people drag so much that i tend to stop watching the shows. its not worth the time. Actualy BALH i have already started doing it 😆

whatever the reason 😉 its is indeed very nice that you have started writing FF.
and i just hope Iss... will keep up the spirit and wont drag is for more than a week.
They did drag shayam entering RM by two days and they have not kick started payash story
so hope they will not drag too much even if they do still keep us entertained with Arhi 😳