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Posted: 14 years ago
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CHAPTER 1
"THE BED"
Armaan walked inside the bar.How could he ever forget that this day had to be celebrated.It was the day his love Shilpa left him.Well it demanded celebration and there he was gulping his 7th shot of scotch.He spotted a girl in red dress who was surrounded by bullies.She was really frightened and was looking for help desperately.Armaan turned away...Her feeble voice caught his attention...
G-"Please let me go..."
Her voice reminded him of Shilpa.A bully was about to touch her when he received a strong punch from Armaan.Many rose to support the goons and before Armaan could even understand anything ,the girl caught his hand and made her way to exit...They kept running for god knows how long..She pulled back Armaan panting to realize they were in some sort of forest and it was nearing dusk...She asked him
G-"Are u crazy? They could have killed you"
Armaan-"Stop it ,ek tho i was trying to save you and you are trying to ,no.no showing attitude to me "
G-"Whatever...where the hell are we?"
A-"Xcuse me ,I am no Google map"
G-"U are irritating..."
A-"Anyways i am Armaan" he said extending his hand forward...😊
G-"I am not interested in all this so instead of introduction will you think about how to get us out of here "
It was then that they looked around themselves to find themselves standing in some sort of cliff.A voice caught their attention.
V-"Hey there can you help us both of us to get out of here"
Armaan bent down to see two guys hanging from near the edge.Armaan immediately took a spare rope and tied it to a rock.He sent it down and the guy at the bottom managed to climb up...Armaan extended his hand and caught his hand in time ,,,he was up.
Guy-"Abhay common up... and brought him up"
Abhay-"Maan tu theek tho hain na?"
Maan -"Yup it was fun..."
A-"Certainly was ...hanging at an altitude of 4000ft for 15minutes was😉😉"
G-"I think we should go ummm...Armaan"
Abhay and Maan thanked Armaan and asked him as to what he was doing with a pretty girl?He cursed his faith and told them it was only his bad time.They started walking initially in different direction and very soon all the four finally came to the realization that all of them were lost ...Girl was walking when she spotted a beam of light and screamed,scaring the trio...
A-"What the hell are you doing?"
She pointed to the light making a baby face...which Armaan noticed..He just wanted to pinch her cheeks..
Maan-"It is a vehicle common what are we waiting for?"
They ran crazily and literally jumped before the jeep.Armaan literally pulled Abhay from getting run over...The driver put the brakes and got down to slap Abhay...Abhay was shocked to see a girl in red dress..She shouted"R u MAD MISTER u could have become a tomato sauce"
Abhay on the contrary was lost in her...Maan gave him a few slaps...to get him out of his dreamland...
Armaan-"Can you give us a ride to the nearest town?"
Gi-"Alright hop in..."
G-"Myself Pia...and u all?"
Armaan ,Maan and Abhay introduced themselves and the turned to the girl...who spoke for the first time."Ridhima here good to see you"...
Armaan-"So tum Ridhima ho..."
Pia-"Common guys we will get struck up in the cold winds..."
Ridhima found it a bit wired..She shrugged it of.The drive began .Armaan continuously trying to flirt with her...
Maan-"So Pia where are you from?"
Pia-"Don't know...as i am running away form Darjeeling and driving to save myself continuously for the last 2 days..."
The four of them looked at her shocked...
She continued"I really don't know how i am going to survive...😉"Abhay wanted to know why and how but couldn't...

smritiz thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
chap 2 s ready will update it on seeing the response for chap 1...So want to know how Geet will cum in ...y is Pia running,who s shilpa?

wanna know?????????????/


then better do comment😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Nice update dear.
Loved it...
Continue soon...
Now waiting for Geet's entry.
Thnxxx for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
awasome update
pls continue soon
next time pls give precap!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
wow!
great start.
i like it.
well u hv my comment.
so continue soon
thnx for pm !
love khushi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
Gr8 start continue soon...❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
chapter 1 ...

awesome ...superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
Interesting...
waiting for geets entry...
update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
interesting...plzzz do pm me whn u update...thank you..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
Concept seems to be interesting.
Continue soon pls
Add me to ur pm list.

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