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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome..

p.s: will give a bigger comment later..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
111: Loved it... The kiss, the dance, the tease, the hide and seek and finally getting caught, everything... so two more to go... Farnkly... knowing its all coming to and end i'm really not being able to enjoy the updates as much i wished to... sorry but had to get it out to feel better... *** breath in breath out *** relax ... sigh... and now going to read 112 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
112: Wow!!!! Simply awesome Finally Naini saw all her dreams come true and Rishab was so sweet... I guess now we can say they got a perfect closure... 😊
But frankly i was more glad for Meera and Yash... I was so wantin to read more on them and somewhere had it at the back of my mind to see it coming ... However i was pleasantly surprised with Yash's proposal cum acceptance of his drawback and he voicing it out with so much conviction and determination... I was surprised as much as any one in that room.!!! 😳
And finally Meera's acceptance... Glad she had Geet and her family by her side... And the kiss... Yash and Meer's first... was indeed the icing on the cake 😃
Wonderfully done!! Loved it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey.. part 111... what a marjawan update...😍😳😳😳
Beautiful... u brought back all their moments together making it something & transforming them into magic...
oh my... the button factory is must needed with these two around each other... u know from the time i read about Geet tugging his buttons.. i always wanted a scene wherein she would be sewing his button & here it is... Maan can never help himself than being smitten by her ... esply in her wedding lehnga choli...oh & that v-neck choli...is so much a torture for him..spcly when she is not even allowing him for even a kiss since a period as long as 3 weeks..too much for Maan... as they would loose control😆😆😆..
Then the remembrance of the song itself..ohoh evn i agree its their song.. now whenever i am gonna hear this song i'm gonna remember ur Maan- Geet. how can she think he won't remeber even the minute details of theirs..impossible...loved the whole scene of their kiss in memory of what could have been their first kiss... Geet realising the strong attraction & the magic his kiss & touch causing havoc to her senses by thanking they didn't kiss then pre-marriage as it would to strong to resist then...too good.
They have come a long way as a couple... Geet not so shy in front of Maan even in her half undress form...quite a progress from her wedding night when she couldn't face him when he did the same ... showing how Maan has helped her leave her inhibitions in front him...
Naini always catches them in such embarassing situations... 😊😉😉... Geet can never have the colour scarlet draining from her cheeks as long as her love sick puppy husband is around her...
Aww u again brought in the two crystals..i just love them...they both were again in almost same situation where he was searching a part of her which belongs to him and is with him always..how lost he is without it... and she being there to give it back to him as she will persue him no matter what... takes me back to part opensesame & recipe for marriage... where Maan realised that she will pursue him no matter what & will find her way to him.. & Geet realised that Maan to needs to be pursued... & she will never let go of him no matter what...respectively...AWESOMELY put forward...
The dance oh how even i wanted them to dance toghether as a couple... & finally Maan is putting forward his thoughts to her in words...loved it...living for the moment...so true & needed sometimes trauma's in ur life make u aware of things to be done which u were not doing.. assuming u had all the time in life...
Again i feel even my vocab has become stuck on two words...HOT CHOCOLATE... for this update...
Edited by Onir - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome ...
FABULOUS UPDATE dear
U write so well
Luved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful updates!!

Both the proposals and their acceptances were beautiful in their own respects.


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Posted: 13 years ago
Sewing buttons has always been apart of Maaneet's life.
I loved when it earlier occurred after their marriage at Maan's cabin.
The song... played right at the moment...
She thought Maan had forgotten one of their beautiful moment.
But alas he proved her wrong..
Every he will always treasure single things that has to do with Geet.
Loved the kissing scene part...
Maaneet was caught by Naini 😉
The blue crystal... Beautiful part.
Their slow dance... Geet's wish to have a dance with Maan.
It looks like Maan has indeed started to think of now rather than later.
His confession was truly amazing...


Both the proposal part was wonderful to read.
Rishabh's proposal was shocking.
I was expecting them to get married together with Yash-Meera..
But I also wondered why Rishabh haven't talk to Naini's family yet..
So he plan to make Naini surprise as well.
His confession was truly touching and emotional..
Reliving their beautiful memories of together..
Proposing her in front of her family as she wanted it..
Naini's silent acceptance...
Her confess right after Rishabh made her ritually his..
Meera's cry in the early morning was indeed a shocking..
Doubting Yash for a trap phone call.
I wouldn't blame her..
She is hell scared to loose him knowing his flirtatious behavior before they coupled.
Yash's confession was truly genuine...
He was so nervous waiting for Meera's arrival.
Meera's acceptance was beautiful...
Now she would really believe him when he told her.. the ring felt off in the sink..
Poor felo.. got his hand cut in the process of getting his wedding ring back.
Their kiss before the wedding in really sweet...

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Posted: 13 years ago
How many updates left before the end???
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ajenn

How many updates left before the end???



Thank you for your comments. Last Update and an epilogue is pending.
Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey Hansini
loved each and every word of the proposals
naini acceptance and merra's acceptances was so apt
loved the part

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