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janvi

@janu_2006

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Posted: 13 years ago

#411

hey

gr8 part...

cont.sooon

thanks for pm dear..

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#412

awesome part!

loved it

yay maaneet are finally back together and all lovey dovey

hope they get married smoothly now with no other problems

con't soon!

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ninand

@ninand

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#413

That was a genius ploy of Geet-😆, ignoring him supremely to get him out of his funk.. smart girl😎

Their playful little date at the beach warmed me up, and brought those two back to where they had left off.😳

And Yash trying to help Anu out of her state of mind.. splendid.

Great update.. Do continue soon!

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#414

Nooo I typed such a long comment and then some twilight quiz popped up on the phone and killed my old page. Refreshed it n it was all gone :(

I'm tooo mad to rewrit the whole thing.
I was just writing to u that this update was quite a treat.
All the charecters were well chalked out . Each one of them have their individual spot to shine at. Story progressed in all fronts.

I wish I cud rewrite the entire scene of maaneet to comment on every line but that wud take forever.
The car ride, maan's irretation, geet's potrayed indiffernce towards him, their lacing hands n hug infront of the sunset, remembrance of old times, making of new memories... I enjoyed evry bit of their togetherness.
Aaa I screamed so loud whn maan heightened geet's thirst and left her dangling in mid air, asked her "shadi ker lain?"
I was about to fall off from my bed in excitement.
His gesture n sentence had it all... The mischief, naughtiness, his longing, their longing, his adoration... All... Everything!!!!
Wow aaahhh I wish I was there to witness them but then again if I was there, I don't think any of this wud have been happening.
Thank u sooo much for an adorable read.

Edited by basicquestion1 - 13 years ago

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Anu

@anuandavi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#415

Soni, that was awesome. The proposal, The acceptance, the lift in the air and twirl, the much awaited kiss and above all the lift back to the car. Thanks for the tension free lovely romantic update.