OS: Bepanaah Pyar - P3 Final Pg14 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Arhi-Sarun

so beautiful and different...loved it...please continue soon



Thank you so much for the beautiful comments dear! 😳

Will be writing the next part shortly!

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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
u all forum members r vry talented in writing...just loved ur os..keep updating.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: music1

Beautiful and totally different my friend😊



Aww thank you so much for the lovely comment my dear! 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Rashiii17

u all forum members r vry talented in writing...just loved ur os..keep updating.



WOW thank you so much dear! I don't know about talented 😆 but I do enjoy writing from time to time! Thanks for liking it! 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: -vodkatiny-


we should have promotions for this at the bar asap!!🤣


My my my Nicky !!! what are you made of... the songs just added the most breathtaking feel to your tale ...!!!
There is always so much pain yet that much more love in your tales and i wish i could just read on and on and on...
I dont remember where you said Arnav was atm but i surely wanna be there ... and i surely wanna feel every emotion right now for Arnav, for Khushi and live every bit of it and fall in love all over again with them ...
I am telling you, Baba really misses us, but she would be thrilled to know you have taken over the writing mantle from her !
Mera kya hoga babaji?in do maharathiyo ke beech yeh kis nikammi ko bhej diya aapne 😳
i love you nicky🤗even more after this update!!!😊



LOL MY TYYY
🤗🤗🤗🤗
🤗

kitne dino ke baad!! aankhe taras gayi thi!! 😳😛

arrey bar pe promotion kyun.. baar wale sabhi yahiin toh hai! 😆

Girl did you know that you give me the most hatke comments ever? ❓

Thank you for liking my thought on adding songs. I wasn't sure how it will be received. But I guess it was liked.

AWWW Thanks dear! Trust me, I felt it, lived it, endured it... all the emotions I wrote about! I know what you mean! I get engrossed in the tales too!

OHHO itna credit mat do mujhe please... baba ke saath mera koi comparison nahi hai yaar! She is a star! ⭐️

But you know I love you more! INFINITY wala yaad hai na? 😉

I am just so glad you are back! Hope you are here to stay! I missed you! 🤗❤️



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Posted: 14 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: shailusri1983

Very good concept! The songs you have chosen flow very smoothly into your story giving it more charm and beauty. A very refreshing angle to a love story dealing with the problems after marriage. Continue soon!



WOW thanks dear! I am glad you like the addition of songs!

I hesitated.

Yeah I wanted to explore on the post marriage blues!

Thanks again for such positive reinforcement and words of encouragement! 😳

it truly means a lot coming from you! Your FF has been marvelous!

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Posted: 14 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Minnie.

awhhh bless ya lovelly postt soo sweet of u once its complete send me another pm lolz



Minnie 🤗


Thanks a bunch for liking it darling... Will surely PM you when the next part is up!

How are you?

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesum;D:D
thanks for the pm;D
\Write moreee;D:D
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
Quick Question: How can someone be so perfect?😲
Ans: Only Di can be this much, perfection at it's best!😃

The prelude was breathtaking! The picture was so beautiful! No, I didn't know this place before😕
Lonavala mein hain kya! That's far from here, but I just loved it! And the description of the place, it was so so so so good, no best!👏⭐️👏
Oh! he and Khusi are married! Wow!😃
I just loved it! And the songs, they were apt!⭐️
Best part was comparison, so different yet so similar, It was so nice
Aw, they both cared for each other!😍
The last part was heart breaking!😭
They tortured themselves, simply!🤢

(picture daal diya!😃)
This was so good
I just love to read your writings!


You are the
BEST!
⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
nyccc..thnx for pm..waitin for next

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