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I-love-Roses

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Posted: 13 years ago

#401

Originally posted by: sukugeny
awesome update shalinidi!just loved it.story is very interesting!thank u!

Thank you! You can just call me shalini...not di...

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I-love-Roses

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Posted: 13 years ago

#402

Originally posted by: minibsp2007
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">wow...👏superb update at last saxenas pay for their crime</font>

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Posted: 13 years ago

#403

Originally posted by: .rumki.
awsome update.finally abhay saved pia.now they r out of danger.loved this part.now what abt the ring?con soon

Thanks. I'll mention the ring in my next update.

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I-love-Roses

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Posted: 13 years ago

#404

Originally posted by: abhiora
wow shalini!!awesome update!!👏yay abhay and piya are both saved.😃.those evil werewolves!!😡how dare they torture abhay??continue soon..and thanx 4 the pm..

Thank you Tora!

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Pavana Babu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#405

great updates

i finally caught up :)

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visma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#406

this part was a bit too much of violence but they did dserve that kind of an ending. Hope Abhay saves his Pia and can find some peace. Finally are the vampires going to gain supremacy as they have Pia with abhay now.

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I-love-Roses

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Posted: 13 years ago

#407

Originally posted by: kuttu
this part was a bit too much of violence but they did dserve that kind of an ending. Hope Abhay saves his Pia and can find some peace. Finally are the vampires going to gain supremacy as they have Pia with abhay now.

I'm still planning what to do with the ring...

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I-love-Roses

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Posted: 13 years ago

#408

~38~ It was nearly dawn in Dehradun after a night full of turmoil.The Raichands have just reached home.As Pia entered their room leaning heavily on Abhay's shoulder,she murmured,"Abhay I want to have a bath,I'm full of blood".Abhay nodded and made her sit on her couch."But I'm feeling light,my head's swirling",she moaned."You want me to be with you?",he asked gently."Hmm",she said."Shower?",he asked."No I can't stand".He helped her to the bathroom and made her comfortable in the large bath-tub made of a blend of pink and green marbles and tiles.He opened the tap and warm soothing water started flowing in.Pia rested her cheek on his bare chest as her arms encircled his waist.As the water level rose with all those bubbles,he took off her silk bloodied gown and started stroking her face gently.Pia closed her eyes and Abhay spoke in a whisper,"For a moment I thought I'd lost you"."Sam didn't make you suffer,did he?",she asked."They tortured me and trust me I couldn't have survived if Jeremy didn't reach on time",he said kissing her eyelids.A single drop of tear rolled down her pretty cheeks."Shush don't cry,they're gone forever.Now you're totally safe",he said.He embraced her tightly touching his cold lifeless body to hers.They remained quiet for a long time while Abhay tried to pacify her.She slowly dozed off to sleep.Abhay washed off the soap from themselves and wiped her dry.He slipped a black knee length night suit on her and placed her on the bed.Instantly Haseena walked in."She's okay Abhay?",she asked."Yeah",he whispered."You've got to come down for a while",she said."Something urgent?",he asked."The Cseryon siblings are here",she said."Why are they here?",he asked."They want answers as to why we killed so many werewolfs without apparent reasons",she said."Okay I'm coming down",he answered."Abhay you're not getting it!They'll find out about Pia",she seethed."Can't we take them somewhere else?",he asked."They're already seated in the hallroom",she said."Okay come",he said and rushed down with Haseena.The unbelievably gorgeous siblings were occupying five single sofas."Greetings Diotrephes",Abhay said as he sat inbetween Naina and Haseena."Greetings Abhay",Diotrephes said."We're here to ask you about a few things.Firstly,why did you decide to destroy the Saxenas?We don't kill,we make agreements",Portia asked."They'd captured Abhay so we had to kill them",Jeremy answered."And what caused this tension?",she asked."We're enemies so we don't need reasons to fight",Abhay said."Perhaps I know of one reason",Lydia said.Abhay looked at her violet eyes,looking determined."You guys are fighting supernatural wars for sheltering an unwanted human?",Diotrephes roared."She's a descendant of Arvox and I was protecting her!",Abhay said."Don't tell me she got the ring",Lydia said."She did!The saxenas wanted this ring and you know what consequences this could bring.So I was indirectly saving our clan",Abhay said."Sorry we misuderstood",Festus said."You have the ring?",Diotrephes asked."Yeah but it belongs to her",he said."I want to see who won your heart next after Delinsey",Portia said."Deli is my best friend and Pia is my soulmate",he said."For Delinsey,you're not just her best friend",Lydia added."Bring her down",Festus said."She's sleeping",he said."Never matter,just bring her down,we want to see her",Lydia said."Ok",he said and got up.While climbing the stairs he thought,"I've remembering you after so many years Deli!".

Readers and silent readers Please comment! This was short 'cause i'm really tired tonight. If you want PMs, send me a buddy request.

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Resh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#409

wow shalini awesome upadate.So Abhay had a past how Pia will face Deli.I loved it.Its so gud 2 c Abhay caring 4 Pia so much.I hope they dont harm Pia 4 ring.Chalo reveal all mysteries soon😳

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purple_shadoz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#410

hey shalini...awsm updt dear...lvd d way abhay tuk care ov pia...😳dt ws so beautiful...👏so i gs dr r a few new entries nw...hmmm wtng 4 it...deli seems tl b intesting...😛wd lv to read mr abt hr...jst arequest...cn u '.z jst once shw abhay bng takn care ov by pia????pl z plz plz...wd lv to read it...u nio i av read ur ff atleast 4 timws...m n lv wd it...dl cont soon...😊