MG FF: For the Love of a Child (ch. 29 on p. 136)

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Mishu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#411

awesome update dear...plz continue soon...

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Mina420

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Posted: 13 years ago

#412

I really felt like jumping into the scene and stranglign that Sameera, I mean waht does she think she is??? Simply coming up and saying all is over can we start afresh??? (I am still fuming).
I don't know if this was intended by u or not but the maan in this FF seems a more clear thinker. The actual Maan would have gotten hell angry and pushed her away or somethign but this one reacted differently.
I am eager to know what Riya has been planning and how Mr "Finance" is going to help...

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music

@music_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#413

I loooved it. Did you know you were making me scared to hell when you were describing how Samira was coming near Maan? I swear I was on the verge on my chair hoping that Maan doesn't get influenced; now that's gonna be interesting! Hope he really tells Geet about this damn Samira and tells her to pretend to be his wife and then they will fall in love...well, not this depends on you, I am already excited...please please you need to post soon cos I really wanna know what will happen? My, my, my Riya, I love you darling, she's such a sweetheart, love the way you pictured her and now Thomas gonna help her with her plan. You made me laugh at the Riya-Thomas Fiancee part and I was on the point of killing Samira on the spot. Continue soon! Love'

Frankie

Edited by music_girl - 13 years ago

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Mirela

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Posted: 13 years ago

#414

*hello my queen*... *thomas knew how to complement a lady* ...*u r my finance* 😆 😆 😆 I fell from my chair reading this..so sweet, sweeter than sugar 😉 He compared her to an ice cream 😆 And then ofcourse smarter riya didnt break his bubble but also gifted him a cute blush...wow,i could picture this beautiful scene 😊 😊 Uff these men,always get melted with beautiful women,both thomas and maan...first is innocent but last is confused between past,lust and old feelings,new feelings...liked That maan fel angry at sameeras insult to geet...Loved how u described his reactions ,so real!!Hmm,be carefull maan lies kn become true,my guess is that with this they will get closer! Knt wait for riya and her parterns plans 😉 Superb as always,thank u! 👏 👏

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ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#415

for the first time i love the entry of Sameera

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-memorable-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#416

thank you for such a wonderful update

finance & fiancee confusion was awesome 😆

Thomas is quite a confidant kid in ways of proposing Riya again n again😆

this sameera she has a guts to say both are destined to be together after she cheated on him,got pregnant ,then terminate it without any guilt... must be very disbelievingly shocking for maan to see a woman's this side whom you loved once.

claiming geet his wife that was expected in this situation

lets see how it goes next & what is Riya planning to bring maneet close 😍

update the next part soon

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So I was saying

@SoIWasSaying

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Posted: 13 years ago

#417

sweet sight with geet an maan

an that sameera is such a shit

throwin herself geez

how can a women stoop that low??

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seemamary

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Posted: 13 years ago

#418

Loved it, sameera is shameless after after cheating maan, this woman has the guts to face him again and asking to restart a fresh. i' am glad that maan tols sameera that geet is his wife, hope it becomes true and am upset with you. I regularly press the like button and also comment but you commented for everybody but not me, am sad.😭 you forgot me.😒

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Uthra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#419

I was not expecting an update anytime now and hence was procastinating my comments. So this time, I am writing my comments as soon as I finished reading and I better see my name in the awesome thankyou list. Chapter 22

Maan is getting to know Geet and finds out she is more than an ordinary clerical assistant. I am sure the future will give more opportunities for him to know her and be surprised or even pleasantly shocked. Aaww! He doesnt let her take the bus and comes to pick her up. So sweet. And he even notices her beauty. way to go Professor. Well, Geet got promoted to being called by her first name, I wonder when Maan will be bestowed the privilege. This little girl Riya is upto something isnt she?

Chapter 23

Rocker update. Little Riya is so adorable. wonder what is planning. I hope it will bring Maaneet closer. Oh I hate Sameera. It was satisfying that sameera's comments on Geet irked Maan to an extent that he declared that Geet is his wife unable to tolerate Geet's integrity being questioned. I am surprised at the audacity of the woman to try to seduce Maan after all that she has done to him. How is Maan going to tell Geet about his past with Sameera? Geet will certainly play along and Oh this is going to be interesting.