MG FF: For the Love of a Child (ch. 29 on p. 136)

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abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

awesome upadte
so geet is goin to stay with them

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 13 years ago

#242

This was beautiful, but feel sad for maan
Riya is his whole life and to know that her comes first must be so hurting
But what a great dad, he can do anything for her happiness

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Dilsay

@Dilsay

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Posted: 13 years ago

#243

lovely and a heart warming update dear...

thanks for the PM...

I love this dad who loves his daughter so much that he is ready to do any thing for her happiness...

Geet answers her daughter that she was waiting for her to get her was simply mindblowing ...

keep up the good work...

continue soon

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

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Posted: 13 years ago

#244

haye ... awesome ... lovely ... adorable ... fantastic ... 🤗

Riya is a sweet heart ...❤️ absolutely adorable ... and surely her dad can do anything for her ... 😃

the part when Riya spoke to Dolly being a bad girl and cried was soo heart breaking 🥺 .. I had tears in my eyes😭 ,,, but then u made it all happy shappy 😃

cant wait to read more

love

Sana

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-Elfin-

@-Elfin-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#245

I guess this is the first time ever that I would be commenting.😃

This is one of those stories, where all the three central characters are right from where they stand, but the situation makes it difficult and painful.😭😭

A man like Maan who has been betrayed repeatedly by the women in his life, has trust issues. We surely cannot blame him.

Geet never wanted to infiltrate their lives, but return the money so that she could get over the guilt of "selling" her daughter.😭😭

And the poor child, still craves when she has everything, just not together.😭😭

Now that the story has taken the most awaited turn, I as a reader have a request.😳

Can Maan fall in love with Geet for what she is, and not because she is the mother of his child. Hope you understand what I mean.😳😳

Your last line of the update takes the cake for being the best dialog I have read on this forum in a really long time. 👏👏👏

Brilliant stuff. Congratulations.👏👏

Please update sooner than you usually do. Will be waiting.😳

God Bless.😊

Thanx for the pm.🤗

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seemamary

@seemamary

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Posted: 13 years ago

#246

Amazing, loved it. Awesome update. continue soon.

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Mirela

@Myra.nelly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#247

again a brilliant part!!glad that dadi woke some senses into maan,now his angel wont cry anymore!loved that both maan and geet have a imensd care 4 their kid!wonder how things will b now!thanks 4 this superb part