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Updating Part XVII soon...
Edited by ana1411 - 13 years ago
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PART - XVII

Maan reaches home''.. There was a smile on his face''..

Vicky, Anvesha and Savitri notices that''..

Vicky: Mom how come Bro is smiling today''.

Anvesha: Oh ya Vicky bhai'' Maan bahi is in his own world that to with a smile on his face'..

Savitri: Maan Beta Good morning''

Maan: Good morning Mom, Hi Anvesha, Vicky

Anvesha: Maan bhai kya baat hai itne khush kyu lag rahe ho''

Maan: Nothing Ani''

Vicky: By the Bro where were you yesterday night'' We have been trying your cell'. You did not picked up''..

Maan: Ohhh Vicky ya was little busy''

Savitri: Maan but I thought you had gone for a party''

Maan: Ya mom I had gone their'.

Anvesha: Who Bhai'.. kya party puri raat chali aur aap puri raat party mai'.. amazing

Maan: Ani no actually'..

Vicky: Ha yaar Ani'.. Bro in a party for whole night''.. By the way koi pasand ayi kya'..

Maan was having coffee while hearing this coffee spilled'..

Anvesha: Ohhh So ladki ka mamla hai'' Bhai tell no kaun hai meri bhabhi''.

Maan: Ani there is no girl at all''.. understood

Savitri was enjoying this finally she said''.

Savitri: Vicky, Ani, Stop teasing Maan''.. She further says by the way Maan you look good with that smile on your face'' Always keep on smiling'..

Vicky and Anvesha were trying to tease Maan again but Maan looked at them in anger

Maan: Ani you don't have college today'.. Come on go get ready fast I will drop you to you college''

Anvesha: ok Bhai'

Maan: And you Vicky you have lot of work in office better get ready I am waiting we will go together'..

Vicky: Bhai but you have just come'. You take rest I will go to office'

Maan: No I am fine'' And I have a meeting also'. You get ready

Vicky: Ok Bhai

Geet home

Geet reached home'' Geet was tensed as she knew that Papaji will scream on her'.. Everyone was waiting for her at home'..

Shakshi: Geet''.

Ranjana goes near Geet: Geet where were you last night????

Madan: Geet'' your mummy is asking you something where were you???

Geet gets scared'''. And tells I stayed at Pari's place''

Anand: Its ok Geet you should have given us a call''' We all were very worried about you'.. We tried calling you and Pari both of your phone was switched off''

Geet: Sorry Chachu''..

Anand: Go Geet get ready and come for breakfast''..

Geet, Sakshi and Ranjana leaves'..

Geet gets ready and comes for breakfast''..

While they were having breakfast the phone rings'.. Madan picks up the phone and is shocked to hear things''.. Madan face had that angry look''.. He keeps the phone and looks at Geet angrily'''.

All sense that something is wrong''..

Anand: Kya Baat hai Bhai sahab''. Why are you so upset and angry'.

Madan keeps on giving angry look to Geet'..

Geet gets scared and gets up from chair''

Ranjana: Kya baat hai ji'''

Madan: Ask your daughter''..

Anand: What has Geet done????

Madan: Geet lied to us that she was in Pari's house'''

Anand: Bhai sahab kiska phone tha'' and what are you saying'.

Madan goes near Geet was about to slap her but Anand and Ranjana comes in between and Sakshi holds Geet'..

Geet gets scared and starts crying'''

Ranjana: Why don't you tell what has happen''.. Whose phone it was'..

Madan: Geet was in a hotel room with someone''and she was totally drunk''

Ranjana: Yeh kya keh rahe ho aap'' And who told you all this'..

Madan: Mr. Malhotra ka phone aya tha saying that you have become very forward'' you allow your daughter to do everything'. Aaj is ladki ke wajah se mujhe itna kuch sunna pada'''.

Ranjana goes near Geet and holds her arm and ask her''' Geet was in pain'''

Ranjana: Geet tell us is this true''..

Anand: But bhai sahab how did Mr. Malhotra came to know''

Madan: He was there in the party and he saw Geet and he also saw some one was carrying Geet in his arms''

Geet: Papaji believe me nothing is happened''.. By mistake I had drink but'''

Madan stops her and screams: Geet enough I don't want to hear anything understood''..

He further continues and tells I have chosen a guy for Geet''.. Hum Geet ki sagai kal hi kar dege''..

Geet was shocked to hear this... Her tears were not stopping at all''

Geet: Papaji meri baat to suniye'..

Madan: I don't want to hear any thing'' Just because I have given you much freedom''.. this is what we are facing''' and yes one more thing from now you are not going anywhere''.. not even office''..

Anand looks at Sakshi as if telling her to take Geet to her room''.. Geet was continuously saying sorry''' But her Papaji was not ready to listen at all'''

In office

Maan and Vicky reaches office''.. Maan calls Adi in his cabin'..

Maan: Adi is the file ready of Shirpur Project''

Adi: Yes Sir, Financial part is ready'. But ''

Maan: But what'''

Adi: Sir the building sketch is not there'.. It is with Geet''

Maan: Ok then call Geet

Adi: Sir Geet has not come to office'..

Maan: Not come why?????

Adi: Don't know sir''' She has not even called and Pinky is trying her cell since morning but she is not answering

Maan gets worried: Ok Adi you leave''

Maan starts thinking what must have happened????

Precap: Maan is shocked to see Geet's resignation and to hear about Geet's engagement'''



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Edited by ana1411 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome


feeling bad for geet


precap damn interesting




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Posted: 13 years ago
AWDOME AND FEELING BAD FOR GEET. PLEASE GIVE NEXT UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE
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Posted: 13 years ago
hawww
ye kya hogaya
ab toh confess karna padega
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesooome...
fab...upd.
loved it...ana...👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update plz update the next part soon

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