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Posted: 14 years ago
Meera he is here..! Geet panicked in yash embrace
yash.. its him.. Maan Singh Khurana.. she pointed out..
Yash left her instantly..
Oh God.. he cut rahul's finger for touching you.. and now he has seen me hugging you.. what should I do now ..? right guesss... hez gonna kill u... tada...some one save me..
Yash relax karo.. you are suppose to protect us. Where is you courage..? courage the cowardly dog...he heee Meera fumed..
Meera are you mad..? don't you love me..? you are talking about courage..? What will you do of that courage if I am dead.. I don't know in how many pieces he will be cutting me.. again a right guess dude... yaar tension mein bhi tere dimaag itna chalu hain wahhh
We even didn't got married.. I don't want to die so soon.. he said almost crying..
Oh please you two stop fighting..Just run from here.. Please yash run..! geet exclaimed.
But before yash and Meera could run.. He was standing in front of them..
Without asking a single word.. He punched directly into yash eyes..
picture perfect...And then held him by his neck tightly.. suffocating him..
Leave him..! geet pleaded..
Who is he..? he snapped .. His eyes were spitting fire.. Before Geet could answer he turned his face towards yash..
How dare you touch her..? he asked yash furiously..
Yash was so really frightened to see his demeanor that he was even finding it difficult to speak..
She is my adhi ghar wali.. yeha ye kehna jaroori hian kya??? wat if maan only listened gharwali n left adhi...he heee yash barely managed to say..
His grip got more tighter.. he started coughing..
I mean Sali.. hmmm aakhir dimag ki batti jali...He uttered in barely audible tone..

He threatened yash and held geet's arm is he possesive or obssesive??!!!!
Lets go..! he ordered..
But she she came here with us and she would leave with us.. Meera tried to argue..
Meera..! its fine he will drop me.. haayeee she said before he could say something..
Lets go..! she told him quietly and followed him..
This helplessness was suffocating suffocation wohh bhi wid maan!!!! main toh ... meri chaddo ji... her.. she wanted to be alone..
Stop the car..! she yelled..
It didn't affect him ' he kept on driving fast..
Maan.. stop the car.. she yelled..
His own name from her lips had certain affect on him..
He stopped the car immediately.. geet ke hukhoom saraankhon pe!!!!she opened the door and walked out.. they were on some deserted bridge.. she didn't knew why she asked him to stop.. may be it was her frustration over her helplessness..
He was stanging by his car crossing his legs..
Hmm.. so shall we do it? he asked..
What..? u dummy hez talking abt punishment...
Oh please.. it was you who was so desperate and asked me to stop the car here in this deserted area.. you and me alone.. I mean you must be dying to be kissed by me.. he smirked wickedly
What'? You think I want you to kiss me..? she asked in disbelief..
He was amused to see her reaction..
Oh yes darling.. don't you want to? He gaped towards her and held her waist lightly..
Don't tell me you don't enjoy it..
Prove it before I prove you wrong in my own way..he threatened her again..
I have never kissed you back.. isn't it enough of proof..
Yeah you are right.. you never responded but haven't you noticed that you always stop fighting after sometime..
dat was a clever one... how come i never noticed... may b am in my drooling sessionn....
where does your urge to fight goes after few minutes.. its because you do enjoy.. he winked shamelessly.. I am sure you would be responding soon..
Until she lost her balance and fell off the bridge.. but he was too quick.. he held her hand preventing her from falling..but now she was hanging and her only support was his hand..
She looked down.. water seemed to be very deep.. she was scared of water.. she didn't knew how to swim..
What are you waiting for.. pull me up..! she shouted.. how cud u expect ur devil to save u wid out a cluase baby... he heee
Uhum.. not so easily.. he shook his head
What do you want?
I will only pull you if you would consent to kiss me.. dekha ye raha tera clause...
She had strange trust over him.. trust!!!! sachme...shez falling 4 him... but is unaware stupid ladki...although she hated him but she knew he won't let anything happen to her.. she knew no matter how bad he might be he wont hurt her..
Help me...! no need to shout 4 help tere waala aa raha hain...
Next moment she felt she was being carried by same strong arms.. dekha bacha liya tumhe meri hero ne...
He laid her on the grass.. while she tried to steady her breath..
Hmm.. so did you changed you mind..? he bend over her..
Her temper blew she started hitting his chest madly..
You devil.. you mad.. he could you do that.. how could you just let me die..? You love me.. how can you just throw me like that for a kiss..is dis love or care or hatred orhelplessness wat is dis??? am hell confused...
She was hitting him madly.. he pinned her hands to either side of her head and came dangerously closer to her..
If you think I am devil and i am an evil. Then what made you think that I won't hurt you..? haan?
Because I thought you would never harm me.. geetz mind is an enigma... sachme... watz in her mind we can't tell... she told him innocently
How can you trust a devil..? haan?sahi poocha...way to go maan...
Even if it is for a moment.. Why did you trust me that I won't let you die..?
bolo geet jawab do y did u trust him...

Hmm.. its you fault ..why you didn't informed me..? why didn't you pick my call? He said while tracing her face with his finger..
She tried to free herself.. he gave her the space to move but the moment she tried to stand he again jerked her making her crash on his chest..
Answer me first..
I forgot my mobile at home.. and .. kyun kuch kuch horaha hai kya??
He brushed his lips lightly behind her ear..
And it was not working day.. and..
Now he brushed her lips barely touching..
Leave me.. chodo mujhe.. am rite na... kuch kuch hota hain...
Mai ne kahan pakra hua hai.. I am not holding u any more.. he laughed scarsctally
She then realized she was lying on him.. his hands for no more holding her..
She got up quickly..
Lets go.. I will drop you.. and be ready tomorrow you have to payback..yeah hez having his reasons re...
she stood there shocked..
again payback..? what I have done this time..?
well for making me so restless.. for not picking up your phone.. for not informing me hat you are going and for wasting my whole day..
see how many reasons and I think you would be paying more heavily this time.. dekha how many reasons...u got a lot to payhe smirked at her..
Precap:
Guys any guesses about precap? me bad at guess work koi mujhe help karo yaar... i guess geetz gonna respond to his kiss... i noe am hopeless... heheee




18mypride thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it!
i love this devil! waiting for payback!
TanuDDian thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Simply superbbb... 👏 enjoyed a lot...
Thanks 4 pm... 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome upd...
lov it
waitin 4 nxt one
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hiii...
How are u...???
Where are u these days...???
I guess you are too busy...


Oh oh ohhh...here comes my devil...he punched Yash...lol
Yash needed one...good acha hua...
N still he has the audacity to call her ''adhi gharwali''...crazy man...

Ayye hayye...mera devil kitna intelligent aur smart hai...
Wait wait...mai zara nazar toh utar lu...

God 1 kiss ke liye itna sabkuch...you should have asked me...ek ke badle 10 de deti...

Precap...hmmm...mmm...
What's cooking...???


Updt soon.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
poor yash...got beaten up for no reason...on top of this he said geet is her aadhi gharwaali...haha...i guess a kiss is coming...haha...continue soon n thnxxx...
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Posted: 14 years ago
maan is such a devil
loool
continue soon
xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update
😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
NICE update...maan is so evil...hm about the precap...u better know it yar...continue soon...tc😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome, brilliant part
loved it
continue soon

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