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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely☺️...looking fwd...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for not updating as I'm not well from few many days
thanks for always giving me love and support on my FF
give me little time
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi all
within 2 days will post the next part as m start typing again all FF will start from after 2 days one by one

and try to see this link and there put a note
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1756910/illusion-to-reality-pt-7-8-9-and-epilogue-pg98-99
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Posted: 13 years ago
will try to post update late night or tomorrow morning
last min editing is happening
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks to all of u who likes previous part
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Posted: 13 years ago

Next :-

Next Part:-

Where another city :-

A man looking at out side and thinking and smirking how he make fool of them easily when her door bail rang , he wonder who is now , he went to check it and he open the door and see some casual dresses men r there, his brain give him some signal but they enter the home and said we r from CID and we have arrest warent against u and we have warrant to check ur house fully.

That man shocked and said but in what basis , what is my fault?

A man from CID said, attempt to murder, attempt to rape, attempt to kill ur own child, murder of ur wife and fraudergy in ur own company , faking, creating fake company to create problem and the list is going on so come with us Mr Rahul ,

When rahul said par one min I want to talk with my when another officer said ur lawyer na kk I'll help u here is the phone take it ,

But rahul got to know hat his lawyer can't help him as he can't go against MR MAAN SINGH KHURANA . He thorw the phone in anger said maan, maan

Other officers r smirking then their head said so mr rahul shall we go oh another thing want to say if ur lawyer wish then also he can't do anything as ur against we got unbaileble arrest warrant ,

Rahul roared u all r bought by Maan na,

An officer said don't think every one like u and now move to stay 4 nights in jail

Today Friday,tomorrow Saturday and then Sunday then Monday national holiday so , then will meet u court , now let's move .

Next Day morning:-

Geet wake up and see maan hugged her tightly and hide his face on her bosom , she rubbed his hair lovingly then think how her life hcanged in couple of year, how fast they met, become friends, then falls in love, then their nok jhok, mu, pyaar, shaadi phir dono har tarah se ek hone phir judai phir milna and phir now they r now going be parents and soham , she smiles then ruffle maan's hair and said maan chaliye na, mujhe saham ko dekhna hain .

Maan murmur something and pull her and now he is kissing her bare curves,Geet shied and feel tickle when maan licked the N**** and said bete pe jada pyaar aata hain na pati se ha,

Geet moaned maan when maan give her kisses on her lips and said jao .

Geet some how manage to get up and cover herself in spread and then change herself in a dress and went to make a food for soham and then take her in her lap and giving the bottle of milk and sohaon who is in his sleep feel hungry and smile to his mom who knows how much his son feeling hungry , start sucking the nips of the bottle slowly, geet patter his hair lovingly and said to maan, aaj isko doctor ke paas le jana hain as today we have appointment for it .Maan nodded then sit in the balance of his right elbow and kissed soham's cute, pinkish,tiny feet and soham just feel tickle and giggled in between his sleep and feeding session and curled the feet when geet said kya kar rehe ho aap,

Maan smiles and said pyaar kare raha tha isse natkhat ko.aur itna possessive mat ho, ma bete humesha team kar lete ho, ha.

Geet shook her head in disbelieve.

Later in the morning,

Geet make soham wear cute Blue shirt and , pants and went to carry him when maan stopped her and said tu jake ready holo ,I'll carry him,

Geet nodded positively and said thik hain.

After they got ready they came to the down stair when dadi ma said kaha ja rehe ho , ha where is going my little boy friend and take soham in her hand when geet greeted her and maan said the reason for their outing,

Papa came and smiles and greeted them .

After their breakfast, maaneet went from their with saham for his check up.

Dadi looking at them and bless them and pray to almighty for their happiness.

On the way soham again dose off too sleep in geet's lap and placed his tiny head on her chest and try to hold her pallu by his tiny fist. Maan is looking at him and smiles,

Geet placed her lips on his head and kissed it gently when maan slide his hand on her waist and pull her closely and said Thanks geet, when geet look at him with questionining eyes when maan slowly wisherper sorry and geet moaned maan, then nodded her negatively and geet placed her head on his chest and kissed his heart and said maan pls don't say sorry, and thanks also not then I have to tell u millions of time thanks and sorry, people sacrifice in love I heard but I seen and realized and feel it by u, ur love, u sacrficie ur love, dream, ur life for my dream to fulfill my dream, yes I hurt that time and now also not cause u went away that time but y I didn't understand u, y I didn't see ur eyes which is always told me how much u love me, how much u want to fulfill my dream which was once my dream by u take it as ur dream to fulfill it u sacrficie all and took all blame, but maan cut her and said par iye mein hi uss time rahul ko leke but again geet cut him and said aayd koi bhi karta , kitna din hum ek doosre ke jante the upar hum dono kabhi itna seriously tab baat nehi kya aur mere chup rehena mixture of signal gave u but when u know the truth , u came and support me against all and always stood besides me,then , humne suna tha pyaar dard hain nehi pyaar dawa bhi hain, asie dawa jissse sab kuch bhul jaye insaan, aapke pyaar hain na, aapse dur rehene ka dard sab chala gaya aapke pyaar se, iss dawa ka asar itna hain oh mein muh se nehi bol sakti,itna kehe sakti hoon , I'm blessed to have u in my life, Ican't even say how much u meant for me only can say u inside my soul without u I'm nothing maan,

Maan has tears in his eyes just bend and capture her lips as gentle peck,

Here, in , another side,

Rahul is arguing with every one, about his arrest and try to call his lawyer when Rahul's papa came there and said I never expect this from u at least and what u have done with ur self and with me, today I can't even face them.

Rahul look at him and said oh really now all things done by me, u r so innocent na, it's u who planted the seed of jealousy, it's u who planted the seed of hate for maan,, it's u who taught me to lived in jealousy, hatred, it's who give me the word if they r not giving u then stanch it from them,it's u , it's u who now if u don't help me then leave from here I can help my self.

Rahul's dad just like u killed ur own wife .

Rahul look at his dad then evily smiles and said I can do whatever I want , if any one want to ruin my dream I will destroy or kill that person.

Rahul's dad closed his eyes then said u r playing with fire rahul , if u can't then think for ur son, rahul shouts that was not my child, do u get it, don't say again,

Rahul's dad shook his head negatively and said stop urself before it's too late.

Here in Doctor's chamber :-

Maaneet enter with saham and don't know why soham is crying b badly , geet rubbed his back lovingly and said kya hua mere bete ko , beta baas doctor aunty thora dekhenge mama hain na iha .

Doctor check up soham after lots of trying and then give him injection and soham is crying more , Maan this time take Soham in his arm and said Doctor give all neecassry instruction little first ,

Doctor obliged and said all is fine after 20 days she will check again .

At the car soham is hide himself in maan's large arm and maan patted him continuously , after some time, sohom got tired and placed her tiny head on maan's shoulder but keep sobbing , geet managed to make little hot milk for him and try to give him but soham again start crying when maan said shhh beta, see u r feeling hungry na, mama will give u milk ,and u r good boy na chalo jaldi se milk pee ke mere bete kasie strong ho jayega aur dard nehi hoga,

But soham again start crying and this time Geet also start crying,

Maan :- aab tum kyuon ro rehe ho ? tum dono ma , bete na ,

Geet with sobbing , y he is not taking this, y he is crying, and y the need of those injection , mere bete ko kitna laga hoga .

Maan :- geet, see this is neccassry na so doctor give this injection within 1 day he will be fine, now stop crying and see, he is more crying to see u crying like this,

Geet wiped her tears and taek soham in her arms and placed kissed on his head then start talking to him after diverting him and making him drink the milk.

After soham falls in sleep in her lap , geet placed his head on maan's head and said I reacted over na , maan smiles and peck her sweet lips and said no jaan, it's ok , as u r mother , u can, now don't get sad more, he will be fine and u have to take care of ur as soham's little sis will be sad .

Geet chuckled and said nehi little brother, ha,

Maan:- will see and smiles at geet.

At night,KM:-

Soham slightly having fever and slightly sobbing, geet patted him and put an ointment that place and try to sing a lori.

Geet said mujhe lori gana nehi aata.

When maan said toh mat gao na jaan, he is sleeping now, see,

Geet moved and said aap toh office work mein busy ho.

Maan:- jaan I might be busy but I have an eye to see my darling wifey and my son and their activity , now go change and come here fast.

Geet is feeling tired and said ok .

Precap:-

1.Maan is taking care of geet and massaing her feet .

2.Sohan's custody and another game will begin or not?

3.Twist

this is the part I know small part sorry dearies ,I'm trying will post next part long hopefully

pls read it and do comments

pls pressed liked button as it's motivated me lots

love u all

rakhi


Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi all
how r u all
Sorry for late update




Pls pls read the update and give me comment and pressed liked button also.


I need motivation, encouragement from u all so I can continue this FF along with all my FF.pls pls all my sweeties.

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updated next part of this ff
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Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago





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Posted here all my fan fiction list and links of those fan fiction for easy to find out .

Complete FF:-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1512474/ff-pyaar-dosti-aur-duriyan-update-notepage134-141

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FF Pyaar ,dosti aur Duriyan thread2:-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1567133/ff-pyaar-dosti-aur-duriyan-pt25-pg-144-dt-06-06

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1543601/memorable-moments-epilogue-in-page-91-dt-20-04

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On Going FF:-

Love at First Sight :-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1555324/love-at-first-sight-thread1

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1614552/love-at-first-sight-thread-2-note-in-pg-157


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Love at First Sight Thread 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1779176/love-at-first-sight-pt35pg139new-thread-link-pg150

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1608306/an-angel-and-her-savior-thread-1

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1654956/angel-and-her-savior-new-thread-link-added-pg155

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Angel and Her Savior 3rd Thread

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1927817/angel-and-her-savior-new-thread-link-added-pg-152

On Going FF:-

Start a new FF

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1756910/illusion-to-reality-pt-7-8-9-and-epilogue-pg98-99


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Complete FF:-


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1668640/knowing-the-new-side-final-part-pg-40-dt-11-08

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New SS by mine:-
On Going SS:-
Memory Loss MG SS

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1728144/memory-loss-pt11-pg137-link-of-new-thread-added

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Falling for an unknown Feeling

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1767353

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new two part os Hidden Truth & Unconditional Love & Trust MG OS

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1799051/hidden-truth-and-unconditional-love-and-trust-epi-pg27



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One Shot(OS):-
Prem and Shakti maaneet os :-

URL Not Available

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Maaneet's Happy Family (OS):-

URL Not Available

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Honey moon for maaneet (MG One Shot) :-

URL Not Available

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Valentine's Day (Maaneet OS) :-

URL Not Available

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new os:-
We and Our Home(MG OS) :-

URL Not Available

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New Os

Ek Salam Unn Veer Seenanio Ke Naam (MG OS)


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New Beginning MG OS

URL Not Available

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love
rakhi🤗


Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi rakhi...

me on cloud 9... hi meee first at your post... loving it... enjoying it...

loved the update... rahul😡 dekhna maan tera or kitna bura haal karega...

loved tiny miny maaneet moments...

looking for next part. try to update soon... as i m feeling we will get some good maaneet moments there...
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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A beautiful Update...

Waiting for next part

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