Just seen this FF. read all arts in one go. I am sorry I could not see any link between title and the storyline. Geet married to Maan but she not aware of her husband. what is 'Pavitra' about this marriage? the title should be like "Geet & Anni ki Dard Bhari Kahani'. As this story is all about Geet and Anni rather than Maneet Marriage.
I also did not like what is happening to Anni. was that necessary? I mean you have could have chosen some other incident than gang rape. it's such a cliche. Just that I do not like physical abuse.
About the story (as you have already used that cliche so)- The mysterious woman is Sameera who is trying to take some revenge and Geet's family may not have to do anything with whatever happened to Anni. I will not be surprised if you take the story along with this lines...again cliche...
Also I did not like Maan's character. I mean how can he abuse an innocent girl after seeing his own sister's pain. I know his sister went through so much pain but if he does the same thing to an innocent girl than there is not difference between him and that animal who ruined Anni's life. I wish he should have some dignity left in him not to ruin someone's life. I thought being from some rich, well known and reputed family he should be raised with some values but it looks likes there is no difference between him and Brij ( if he is the culprit, which I am sure he is not as Anni was physically abused by gang not just one person, and also you have not mentioned that Anni went to HP or Brig came to Delhi).
And you will make Maan to marry Geet again. How can you? Don't you have a heart to feel someone's pain? if you have than please don't make Geet Marry to Maan again. Not even for sake of child. Geet (and even her child also) deserve someone better in her life rather than this jerk Maan. If I would be at Geet's place, I will never forgive Maan and will take child away from Maan's shadow as I would never want my child to be like Maan (of this FF). Please do not say that she is already married to Maan once. I am pretty sure that this marriage is illegal (not registered) and if Geet wants to marry some one than no one, not even Maan, can stop her.
If you are a woman and understand woman's pain than please make Geet stronger and self respecting and either bring someone nice (Not Maan) in her life or make her independent so she can live her life with her kid happily away from Maan. I do not want her kid to call Maan 'papa' as he does not deserve that. I want to see Maan repenting for his deed and in pain when his own kid saying 'papa' to someone else in front of him. Also want to Daadi to disown Maan from her property and inheritance after knowing his 'deed'.
I know it is Maneet story but it is not necessary that Maan and Geet should be together in the end. As it is not necessary that every story has happy ending.
Edited by adorableyosh - 13 years ago
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