HEARTBEAT: Part 14 updated [ EXAM FEVER ] - Page 57

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Originally posted by: ~~ MICK ~~

I GUESS NO ONE SEEMS TO BE EXCITED NOW COZ ITS BEEN LONG SINCE WE UPDATED.. BUT ANYWAYS I WILL UPDATE AS I HAD PROMISED.. ACHA LAGE TOH COMMENT KAR DENA.. 😕 NAHIN ACHA LAGE TOH BHI COMMENT KAR DENA.. 😆
tut tut...bechara mick🤣
Recap:

Rey and Kriya are in the pool..

They stare at each other lost into the moment. Suddenly Rey who was holding Kria's hands pulled her close to him'he didn't know why he did dat but at that moment he just wanted her to be close to him'she was shivering in the water..but when Rey pulled her to him she felt a current spread through her spine'and a warmth spread through her body'their faces were inches apart'but somehow as if they were being pushed they were pulled towards each other'

Rey moved so close his hands traveled from her hands to her back while Kria felt she was drowning with his touch.. Rey pulled her so close their faces were an inch apart'Kria's heart thumped inside her as if it will come out rite now' she slowly closed her eyes as Rey moved forward..

PART 11:

But then a security guard came from a distance and lit up his torch light towards their faces who were just abt to kiss..

Security guard: Party khatam ho chuki hai sir. sab ja chuke hain. Club ko lock karna hai. so please aap log bhi chale jayo..

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 security guard bhi kriyaansh ko dekh k blush ki dukan ban gya ho gya sorry blush ki dukan piyu 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Rey: ( Towards Kria who is blushing ) i will drop u home. R u okay now??

Kriya: yes i am good.. i think we shud leave now.

Both of them Moved out of the pool. Both were drying themselves. Rey was all the time looking at Kriya wid an awe..

Lying in the middle of the road late night was my all time favourite scene in d3 so far. So u can imagine the same thing here as well.. 😃

But i wanna end it in my own way

this I WANNA wala i very well know is mick kamina🤣🤣🤣🤣...meri farah ko bhuling tu😡😡...DIE!!!!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

waise even i love that scene hayyye...fulto TWILIGHT...isse yaad aaaya kisi ne breaking dawn dekhi hai to plsss mujhe bhi link do 🤣🤣🤣🤣

{Resuming from the time wen they were just abt to kiss and some car comes to interrupt}

The driver of the car had just managed to stop at some distance.. he was very furious..

Car Driver: Marna hai kya tum dono ko?? { he shouted }

Rey grabbed her hand and took her safely to the corner of the road.. both of them laughing.. { as in the actual scene }

[ Rey is thinking ki aaj dono time koi na koi disturb karne aa gaya.. pehle woh guard and fir yeh car wala ]

🤣🤣🤣i can imagine this very well...rey ka bada frustration wala chehra wahi wala when kria saya HUST GOOOD FRIENDS 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

K: Mera ghar yahin paas mein hi hai.. i think i can manage..

R: no ways.. i cant let u go alone. i will come along..

K: but aapka ghar toh yaha se bahut dur hoga na.. toh aap yaha se bina car ya bike ke kaise jaoge??

R: tum meri chinta mat karo. i will manage somehow.. tum abhi yeh dekho ki tum mom ko kya bologe.. time pata hai kya ho gya hai?? its 12:30...

K: WHATTT?? 12:30.. aaj toh mom pakka mujhe maar daalegi..

R: u want me to help??

K: help kaise??

R: mein aunty ko bol dunga ki meri gaadi kharab ho gayi thi.. so thats y it took us time..

K: nahin nahin.. rehne do.. agar mom ne tumhe pehchan liya, toh kuch galat na samajh jaye.. Dehradun ke Police station mein mom ne
tumhe dekha tha uss din..

R: ohhh ya right.. but tum bologi kya??

K: bol dungi ki party late khatam hui..

R: and agar aunty ko pata chal jaye ki tumne drink kiya tha.. toh??

K: toh aage se i wont be coming to ne party..

They both reached Kriya's place and Kriya's mom was standing in the terrace.. Kriya sees her mom and asks Rey to leave.. Rey was just abt to leave n tabhi Kriya's mom shouts from the terrace..

K's Mom: WAITT... dont go.. let me come down.. i need to talk to u..

shayad uski shaadi ka khayal dil me aaya hai issi liye uski mummy rey ko ghar pe bulaya hai🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣


Rey nodded..

Kriya: Shitt.. ab kya karen?? y does mom wants to talk to u??

Rey: u relax.. i will manage..

Kriya: areee tum nahin jaante mom ko.. Rani laxmi bai hain.. Hitler ka female version..

Rey started laughing.. and then said

R: acha aisa kya.. fir toh mazaa aaega.. kyuki junior Rani laxmi bai ko handle karna toh meine seekh liya hai.. [ eyelock wid OHHOOO HOOO HOO ]
AWWW...muahzzz farah...tu hattt mick tere liye MU HAHAHA...so cute scene...i can imagine rey saying that and touching kria's nose for a sec the cute way hehe...😳😳

Kriya's mom comes down and asks both of them to come inside..

Kriya's Mom ( To Rey): Naam kya hai tumhara??

Rey: darr darr k.. Rey.. i mean Reyaansh Singhania..

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣...SASU MA ne dara diya humare rey the strong guy ko 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣...darring darring talking talkin g 🤣🤣🤣

Kriya's mom: Thank u soo much beta for dropping Kriya back home..

[ Both of them are like WHAATTT??? Kriya especially did not expect her Mom to be so cool with Rey ]
ye kya hoing new flash kria ki mom likes rey yayyy party...mickah 👏👏👏

Rey: u're welcome aunty.. waise bhi i could not let kriya go alone as it was very late..

😳😳😳 awww i love this...rey muahzzz

K: haan Mom.. Rey is my very good friend.. He is also the GS of our college.. Inhe se mein Elections haare thi..

K's Mom: ohh toh tumne meri beti ko itna rulaya tha elections ke time.. bechari bimar bhi ho gayi thi..

K: Mom... Stop it plz.. !!

R: Mujhe lagta hai mujhe chalna chahiye ab..

K's Mom: Ok beta.. Tum jaoge kaise??

R: Dekhta hun aunty.. agar koi auto ya kuch mil jaye..

K's Mom: Auto?? woh bhi iss time p.. No chance.. In case you want, u can stay here aaj raat.. early morning chale jana..

K: haan Rey.. waise bhi its not safe to go alone and without car toh bilkul nahin..

R: Okay.. i will stay.. Thanks a lot AUNTY [ ander hi ander laddooo footing ]

haila rey staying at kria's place mickah make it like AR mai bol rahi hu warna dono ghar se uthwa loungi🤣🤣🤣...AR ki tarah ghar me kro jangal wala mangal🤣🤣🤣🤣...

K's Mom: Kriya Reyaansh ko Guest room dikha do..

K: ya sure mom.. [ She goes and hugs her mom and says thank u to her ]
kria ki khushi to dekho🤣🤣🤣 mai keh rahi hu ye ladki ki niyat kharab ho rahi hai🤣🤣🤣🤣...rey ko bolo uski IZZAT pe khatra hai 🤣🤣🤣🤣

[Kriya takes Rey to d guest Room]

R: Thanks Kriya..

K: thanks?? kis kiye??

R: for letting me stay here

K: Thanks toh Mom ko bolo.. meine thodi na rukne k liye kaha.

Rey grabs her by her waist and tells her:

R: sooo tum nahin chahti thi ki mein yaha ruko..

K: mein.. mein vo...

[ Kriya's Mom from outside calls her ]

K: aayi Mom..

Rey closes the door and put his hands over her lips..

R: Mujhe tumse bas ek baat kehni hai.. aaj meri life ki best evening thi n i never want that to end.. Kya tum thodi der k liye terrace p aaoge??

K: Pagal ho kya?? Mom ko pata chal gaya toh??

R: toh matlab agar aunty ki permission ho toh tum mujhe itni raat ko terrace p milne aa sakti ho.. rite??

K: Plz Rey aisa kuch mat karna.. I thnk Mom pehle hi mujhse bahut gussa hai.. but dikha nahin rahi hai..

R: shhh.. tumne mere sawal ka jawab ni diya..

K: kaunsa sawal?

R: yahi ki kya tum mere saath time spend karna chahti ho terrace p?

K{ trying to escape from there and thinking but she could not }: HAAN.. mein aana chahti hun..

R: Toh theek hai.. mein tumhara intezar karunga..

K: But Rey mein nahin aa sakti.. plz samajhne ki koshish karo.. i can be in a big big trouble..

[She was abt to leave wen Rey caught her hand and swirled her pulling her closer to him and holding her wrist behind her back'.look look hawa hawa ]

KRIAAA (kria's mom screams out her name)

Rey's hand loosens on her wrist and she runs immediately

R: jo bhi ho aaj toh tumhe terrace pe aana hi hoga miss dehradun (said rey to himself smirking)

K's mom: Kria please ye dishes samet lo mujhe kal kaam par kal jaldi jana hai and its late.. so I'm off to sleep. aur tum bhi so jana jaldi..

Kria: yess mom..

[She moved into the kitchen putting all the washed dishes in their respective places'she took the glass bowl and turned hurriedly to keep it in the cabinet when she saw suddenly Rey standing behind her smiling his Casanova smile and in shock and fear Kria dropped the bowl.
*GLASS BREAKS* ]

mickah mai jab bhi HB padhing mujhe AR yaad aaying...yha dekho glass broke and ab mujhe dekhna pdega KASH ka mini skirt wala scene 🤣🤣🤣...dekha tum KR ki jagah AR promote karring...🤣🤣🤣🤣 JK.. <3

K: aaahhh (Kria screamed out) aap yahan kyun aaye..

K's mom: Kria kya toota (Smriti rushed out of her room but till den Rey quickly hid beside the fridge where she could not see him)

K: Mamma wo aapka fav glass bowl tut gaya (with a sad xpression on her face)

K's mom: tumse koi kaam dhang se toh hota hi nahi hai.. galti meri hai maine bigad ke rakha hai'chalo jaldi saaf karo ab'Rey soh toh gaya hai na.. pata nahi kya soch raha hoga..

haila meri mom bhi yahi kehti hai😲...🤣🤣🤣 moms all around the world are same 🤣🤣🤣...but so cute..i love this realistic touch...kitna sweet laging mumma daughter convo👏

She said and was abt to move towards the guest room wen Kria screamed out...

K: MOM'..wo disturb kyun karna hai.. so gaya hoga pakka.. warna ab tak toh yaha aa jata..

K's mom: yess u r rite acha theek hai.. clean dis mess beta jaldi..

[And Smriti left to her room'Kria turned towards Rey wid a murderous look]

R: wo mai mai help kardu..

K: aap yaha se plzz chale jaaye (Kria almost screamed)

K's mom(cald out from her room): Kriaa'kisse baat kar rhai ho

K: wo mom mai wo..

R: bolo bolo tell tell..
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣...mujhe hasne do 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣...BOLO BOLO TELL TELLL KYU LIKHA YE ...mai guess karu ye kisne likha ...mick !!!!!!!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

K's mom: kya hua..

K: mom wo mai apne aap se baat kar rahi thi..

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 the way i talk to my lappy 🤣🤣🤣🤣..blabbering rocks 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

K's mom: isme kaunsi nayi baat hai'.jaldi saaf karlo aur so jao..

K: yes mom..

[She turned to Rey wid a pleading look]

K: Rey plzz aap yaha se jaaoo

R: arey but pehle tum bolo toh ki tum terrace pe aaogi ya nahin..

K: Rey plzz agar mom ne dekh lia aapko yaha toh bahut badi prob ho jayegi..

R: mujhe mera ques ka ans chahiye bas..

kuch din me kria will start calling rey QUESTION BANK 🤣🤣🤣🤣 iske ques to khatam hi ni hote 🤣🤣🤣🤣

K: lekin mai nahi aa sakti.. aap samajh kyu nahin rahe..

R: terrace p aaoge ya nahin??

K: nahi

R: haan

K: nahi

R: haan

K's mom: Kriaa

K: NAHI (screamed out Kria galti se)

K's mom: kya nahi abhi bhi bad badaa rahi ho kya?? 😆

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 love this scene totally...oMG!!!!!! i caan imagine this happening as well...hahhahha NAHIII🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

[Rey shook Kria out of her shock mode]

K: mom mai saaf kar rahi thi aap so jao...

R: terrace p intezar karunga..

K: urrgh Rey plzz jao aap..

[And she pushed Rey out of the kitchen.. Kria finished her work and moved towards her room when Smriti called her out again]

K's mom: Kria saaf karlia??

K: haan mom

[she went over to her mom on the bed and hugged her and kissed her and said gudnite]

K's mom: beta ek aur last kaam meri wo book maine sofa par rakha hai wo mujhe laake do..

K: kya aap abhi padhne baithoge?? aapko toh subhe jaldi uthna hai na??

K's mom: u knw na mujhe neend nahi aati bina padhe..

K: theek hai laati hun..(kria said to herself)

[And she dragged herself to the hall room to the sofa at the end of the room'the lights were off but Kria was at ease with the light of her room peaking on the hall room]

[She reached out for the book in the sofa just den a strong masculine hand caught her wrist' There were mixed sea of emotions all at the same tym'she almost screamed out in horror with the hands suddenly catching her but jus den anoder hand moved to her mouth to kill her scream'sumhow the touch felt familiar which also soothed her'he moved her towards the window where his face was lit up with the moon lite'the fear which was half wiped off with his touch was now gone when she saw it was none other than him...

so now gotta admit this...i really adore this one...its so beautiful...how u guys have written all the emotions she is going through...it brings out that charismatic touch which differentiates from the whole montony...the way she is able to recognize his touch is utterly amazingly described and shows the amount of recognizance over their feelings for each other

the fear which was half wiped off with his touch was now gone when she saw it was none other than him...
i just love this line😳😳...it just says it so simply yet so beautifullly that he is hers now...which is itself a more than wonderful expression of words👏👏

Rey looked at her eyes which was filled with fear for one sec but now had the soft murderous look'Rey did not move his hand from her mouth as he knew his baatcutter would start with her non-stop questioning of what why and how dare he do this.. He moved closed to her ear as she shuddered slightly with him coming close to her'he whispered]

soft murderous look AWWW this is so farah...😳...and her shivering with his touch...awww i love these scenes. love it totallly...awesome...⭐️

R: i'm sorry..

[Kria's xpression changed to confusion]

R: I knw mujhe tumhe aise darrana nahi chahiye tha but I jus wanted to say something'.mei chahta hoon tum terrace pe aao jus for sometime please..

[ Kria's heart melted at the spot'his request somehow melted away her anger for him scaring her... What was dere in dis Casanova, she always hated him for his attitude but somehow there was this invisible pull that takes her to another world'he moved his hand from her mouth and moved away from her' Just den Smriti called out ]

thats what i hate in the show they hardly show kria thinking over her feelings...wat abt iNTROSPECTION for godsake..i loved this dialogue of hers thinking over why she is falling for the casanova...because indeed she is unable to understand...but LOVE DEFIES LOGIC 😳

K's mom: Kria book nahi mila kya??

[Kria woke up from her waking dreamland and realized she had to give her mom the book'she picked up the book and ran off to giv it to her mom]

K's mom: thnku beta'GN

K: GN mom (still lost)

[She closed her the door and turned to talk to Rey but he wasn't there'she looked around but Rey was not in the hall room'she went to her room and started pacing around in confusion. And den finally stopped by her window and looked towards Universeji]

K: ye kya karte ho Universeji?? hamesha question hi question and saath mei box full of confusion'.KYA KARUUNN...!!!!

[ Kria closed her eyes to relax herself.. a pool of scenes of everything that happened tonite flashed in front of her eyes'the party the dance game and den the her and Rey's dance'her fite with Rey over the juice'her getting drunk with Rey and then Rey handling her in her horrible state.. at the pool.. and then the walk back home with Rey..

Everything had one thing common Rey'.why did she always feel there was some connection btw the two'its not like dey were gr8 friends but sumhow whenever something happened in her life it was always connected to Rey'be it gud or bad he was always there'but today she had to thank him for helping her out in the party when she was drunk ]

[Kria finally decided to go to the terrace'

Rey was waiting on the terrace somehow he knew his baatcutter will surely come'.the chill of the nite was freezing ]

R: kahan ho miss dehradun'

[Just den the terrace door opened'Rey smiled without looking the air around filled with her scent as she walked towards him]

R:finally tum aa hi gayi...

[Kria stopped her tip toeing and looked at Rey in shock]😲😆

K: aapko kaise pata tha

[Rey moved close to Kria who was rooted to the floor]

R: bas pata chal gaya..

[Rey cud not take his eyes off Kria'she was wearing a pink sleevless top with white pyjama looking like a cotton candy] 😆 😉

K: tou mujhe bulaya kyun yaha??

R: lekin tum tou apne marzi se aayi ho na??

K: wo mai...mai wo [ Thinking ki thanks kaise bole for wt he did for her at the party ]

R: thank you..

K: kya?? [ isse kaise pata chala mai thnx bolne aayi Universeji.. aap mere pith piche isse sab bata dethe ho kya?? ]😆

R: maine kaha thnx..

K: lekin kyun

R: for making this night special for me'for dancing with me fir letting me walk u back home aur yaha terrace aane ke liye

K: thnx mujhe wo toh mujhe aapko kehna chahiye...

R: kyun??

K: aapne meri help ki mujhe party mei sambhala wen I was'aur fir mujhe ghar tak chod na soo thnku.. 😊

R: hmm friendship mein no thnku

K: acha aisa kya'tou fir aapne kyu thnk u bola 😛

R: wo mai..

K: haan haan bolo bolo😆

[Rey looked at her and den dey both strtd laughing ]

K: kitni thand hai mein toh barf ka gola ban jaungi😆 kyun na kuch aisa kare jisse thand na lage aur mazaa bhi aaye.. [ Dont laugh u Dirty Minds.. 😆 ]

R: matlab??

[Rey looked at her in shock]😆

K: dance'lets dance'aaj iss eventful day ko khatam karte hai with a dance..

[Kria gave out her hand to Rey]

K: chaloo

[Rey looked at her in shock again]

R: abhi bhi talli mode mai ho kya😆

K: haha nahi dance mode mai hoon chaloo

[And den suddenly she stopped]

K: lekin gana

Rey took out his cell

R: gana yaha..

[Kria gave her big smile]

[The song started playing Rey took Kria's hand twirled her and brought her close to him so hard with the beat of the music she thumped on to his chest'.dey danced along with the music with Rey lifting her and twirling her around'the cold wind hit their body hard but somehow the dancing and clashing of their bodies with each other sent a warmth through them'Kria felt so blissful it was as if she was dancing her heart out under the moon light ]

Thats how the Crazy day finally ends..

Hope u liked it.. !!!!

LOTS OF EXCITING STUFF COMING UP SOON.. HOPE TO GET THE SAME KIND OF RESPONSE THAT WE USE TO GET BEFORE..

KEEP LOVING HEARTBEAT.. !!!!!!

Thanks for Reading...!!!!!!!!

~~ Mick N Farah ~~

OKAYISH!!!
kudos!!!!! mickah!!!! awesome once again...u guys are on different tangent where love has that cute tennie phase...which i m loving coz simply watever happens i mysself m a tennie..yup the fairy tale romance does bore me.. but when it comes to kriyaansh..and the intense dialogues used with in the update...its difficult to stay away...but ya lolaaa dialogue kam kro na plzzz...bahut bolte hai dono ...i like reading thoughts but grrr ye saala majority bhi na...but damn i m still not over that party wala update...my fav... i love love love that...kha tha na maine usko OS ki tarah alag dalo...par meri to koi sunta hi ni😡😡...anyways MINDBLASTING update keep ROAKING as always!!!!

in black italics kyuki tum koi color chodhte hi ni 😡😡