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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
marvelous awesome superb
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
liked all updates ...but haven't read them yet so damn tired right now will read and comment later
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Posted: 13 years ago

Aww geet is so worried about the baby. Loool love how baby is smiling when geet is telling his father off.

Aww geet sent her own milk for the baby. Love how geet addressed herself as the baby's mother without realising.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Muski darling are u back from ur trip??? will u be updating today?? ... me wants an update... n yes a reply to my PM too... 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago



Maan ' baby ke liyen ruhk javo
tears rolled down her eyes.. as she walked out of the door.
He fell on the floor..
main ussen kya kahoon ga.
After hearing baby..she couldn't have gone further..she just dragged herself to the steps sat their holding the bars, resting her head. She wanted to run back to the baby.. wat will happen when he wakes up. She could feel her heart heavy. She could barely breath.



Geet softly caressed the babies cheek..& then touched his feet ' how old is he
nt ' 2 weeks now
Geet looked at him awe.. he looked really huge..isn't he big
nt '
nahi yaar he is just avg baby
Geet was bit confused now.. how old is her baby then..
her baby... part of her refused to disown him.. she already made a cute little imaginary world of hers with the baby. Just baby & her. Her baby. but he looked so tiny.




we r still deciding. I like karan & he wants it to be sameer
Geet was lost..she didn't even know he babies name.. she felt really bad..
wat kind of mama is she.
She cursed Maan in her mind.. mujhe baby ka naam bhi nahi bataya
nt shook her
..wat do u suggest karan is nice name na
Geet nodded weakly..still not happy. How could she not even know her babies name.


Nt was really excited having her frds. They all moved to have snacks with tea.
Nt took milk.
Kiran '
nt tho tea kyun nahi pi rahi?
Geet poured her tea & looked at her
Nt '
nahi yaar main baby ko feed karthi hoon na.. its better I don't have tea & coffee
Geet immediately kept her tea down


as the time passed baby was in no mood to go out.. he wanted his mama... he began to cry.. Maan closed his eyes '
he held him close..
mama kal aayegi paka
baby cried louder..
he was hungry too. Maan tried to put geets duppata around himself & carry the baby.
Her duppata always did the magic.. but now baby knew his mama better..
he pulled the duppata in his hand & cried even more. Maan rocked him in shoulder
baby aap aisen rovoge tho mama ko aacha nahi lage ga
every time he tried feeding with the bottle he pushed it away crying ...missing & longing for her.


part59


she heard mama calling her down for dinner.
She went down putting in the bottle in a small cold storing container she brought. She quickly put the food on her plate. The moment she took a spoon in her mouth, tears formed in her eyes thinking abt the baby. She immediately excused herself & ran to her room

She pulled out her phone & rolled down to maans number she had saved without his knowledge.

she called him.
Maan couldn't answer since the baby had been crying the whole evening.
She called again. Maan got irriatred & looked at the number.. it displayed as pvt number.

He ignored it & patted the baby.. he carried him to the balcony.. baby was really tired hungry..began to sob.. snuggling on his shoulder.. the phone rang again.
He got irriated & yelled '
who is it?
she got wild.. one he yelled ...second her baby was crying out so loud..& he is yelling near him
Geet ' why is he cry? She shouted back at him
he looked at the number.. it was not displayed..
Maan immediately became calm





she got really angry now.. thats because u don't know how to feed him
u make all stupid milk for him..
her voice was cracking. more of helplessness she felt. If she could.. she would have been there with the baby right now.



She was really angry with Maan now..
u don't take care of my baby properly...
baby looked around with his teary eyes for her..a smile formed in his lips..hearing her voice..
Maan smiled.. & cribbed..
bahut khush ho raha hain..aapni mama se daand khilaken




pata hain..aapke papa ne mujhe aapka naam bhi nahi bataya
Maan rolled his eyes.. how could I..
humne tho aapka naam raka hi nahi..

aur kamo so fursat mile gi to yeh bhi yaad aye ga na

wo tho mama rekhgi na

geet jaldi rakho baby ka nam yeh offer limited time k liye he nai to hum sub tyar bethe haan baby ka nam rakhne k liye



Geet smiled contentedly the moment she heard nothing
she silently waited for baby to finish drinking. Maan sighed '
Geet whispered..
so gaya kya?
Maan '
umm
geet - bahut roya tha kya?
maan - umm
geet - aapne mujhe phone kyun nahi kiya?







ussen burpy kardo
Maan smiled & slowly put him on the shoulder.. & patted his back..
the moment baby burped
Geet '
deren se ..
Maan shook his head & slowly placed the baby down..
baby turned holding her duppata..
Geet whispered sternly...don't keep the pillow & go away..just lie down next to him.
Maan '
umm
every 30 mints she kept asking him so raha hain..
Maan smiled in his sleep








muskan




Edited by cute-aly - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cute-aly




Maan ' baby ke liyen ruhk javo
tears rolled down her eyes.. as she walked out of the door.
He fell on the floor..
main ussen kya kahoon ga.
After hearing baby..she couldn't have gone further..she just dragged herself to the steps sat their holding the bars, resting her head. She wanted to run back to the baby.. wat will happen when he wakes up. She could feel her heart heavy. She could barely breath.



Geet softly caressed the babies cheek..& then touched his feet ' how old is he
nt ' 2 weeks now
Geet looked at him awe.. he looked really huge..isn't he big
nt '
nahi yaar he is just avg baby
Geet was bit confused now.. how old is her baby then..
her baby... part of her refused to disown him.. she already made a cute little imaginary world of hers with the baby. Just baby & her. Her baby. but he looked so tiny.




we r still deciding. I like karan & he wants it to be sameer
Geet was lost..she didn't even know he babies name.. she felt really bad..
wat kind of mama is she.
She cursed Maan in her mind.. mujhe baby ka naam bhi nahi bataya
nt shook her
..wat do u suggest karan is nice name na
Geet nodded weakly..still not happy. How could she not even know her babies name.


Nt was really excited having her frds. They all moved to have snacks with tea.
Nt took milk.
Kiran '
nt tho tea kyun nahi pi rahi?
Geet poured her tea & looked at her
Nt '
nahi yaar main baby ko feed karthi hoon na.. its better I don't have tea & coffee
Geet immediately kept her tea down


as the time passed baby was in no mood to go out.. he wanted his mama... he began to cry.. Maan closed his eyes '
he held him close..
mama kal aayegi paka
baby cried louder..
he was hungry too. Maan tried to put geets duppata around himself & carry the baby.
Her duppata always did the magic.. but now baby knew his mama better..
he pulled the duppata in his hand & cried even more. Maan rocked him in shoulder
baby aap aisen rovoge tho mama ko aacha nahi lage ga
every time he tried feeding with the bottle he pushed it away crying ...missing & longing for her.


part59


she heard mama calling her down for dinner.
She went down putting in the bottle in a small cold storing container she brought. She quickly put the food on her plate. The moment she took a spoon in her mouth, tears formed in her eyes thinking abt the baby. She immediately excused herself & ran to her room

She pulled out her phone & rolled down to maans number she had saved without his knowledge.

she called him.
Maan couldn't answer since the baby had been crying the whole evening.
She called again. Maan got irriatred & looked at the number.. it displayed as pvt number.

He ignored it & patted the baby.. he carried him to the balcony.. baby was really tired hungry..began to sob.. snuggling on his shoulder.. the phone rang again.
He got irriated & yelled '
who is it?
she got wild.. one he yelled ...second her baby was crying out so loud..& he is yelling near him
Geet ' why is he cry? She shouted back at him
he looked at the number.. it was not displayed..
Maan immediately became calm





she got really angry now.. thats because u don't know how to feed him
u make all stupid milk for him..
her voice was cracking. more of helplessness she felt. If she could.. she would have been there with the baby right now.



She was really angry with Maan now..
u don't take care of my baby properly...
baby looked around with his teary eyes for her..a smile formed in his lips..hearing her voice..
Maan smiled.. & cribbed..
bahut khush ho raha hain..aapni mama se daand khilaken




pata hain..aapke papa ne mujhe aapka naam bhi nahi bataya
Maan rolled his eyes.. how could I..
humne tho aapka naam raka hi nahi..

aur kamo so fursat mile gi to yeh bhi yaad aye ga na

wo tho mama rekhgi na

geet jaldi rakho baby ka nam yeh offer limited time k liye he nai to hum sub tyar bethe haan baby ka nam rakhne k liye



Geet smiled contentedly the moment she heard nothing
she silently waited for baby to finish drinking. Maan sighed '
Geet whispered..
so gaya kya?
Maan '
umm
geet - bahut roya tha kya?
maan - umm
geet - aapne mujhe phone kyun nahi kiya?







ussen burpy kardo
Maan smiled & slowly put him on the shoulder.. & patted his back..
the moment baby burped
Geet '
deren se ..
Maan shook his head & slowly placed the baby down..
baby turned holding her duppata..
Geet whispered sternly...don't keep the pillow & go away..just lie down next to him.
Maan '
umm
every 30 mints she kept asking him so raha hain..
Maan smiled in his sleep








muskan




awesome quotations dear ...very well selected 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

Cute -aly its so nice t o u back... Missed u,

now musky is missing:-]
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Posted: 13 years ago
Eagerly waiting for the update. Sorry for pestering like this but you have only spoiled us and made us addicted to your FF.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Dilsay

awesome quotations dear ...very well selected 👏








Edited by cute-aly - 13 years ago

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