Originally posted by: SurrealFantasy
Res!!
See I'm a terrific person and so I have reserved..already!I need to catch up from the second part so this is gonna take a while I guess!!*Edited*Well I have to comment from the beginning so I'll just write a synopsis of what I WOULD have written if I were to comment on each part!Firstly I <3 the title. It just makes me feel that even after the entire facade, Armaan and Riddhima will come together and so no sad endings like it seemed in the beginning.Then when Armaan was hit by the bus I almost choked. I mean my adorable Armaan on a stretcher drenched in blood is too bad to even think about! But Riddhima going to his place and then the entire jog and cleaning the house thing was heart-touching.Riddhima is a cool character, especially when she beat up that Varun or something guy, I <3ed it!! And then when Armaan's past came up and she just hugged him to comfort him(Poor Armaan! *Sigh*) I just felt she truly had the potential of being the perfect lover instead of the DMG Riddhima.I usually don't like some Riddhimas, so this one is a good surprise! She doesn't talk to her dad because of some reason which I guess is related to AR's separation- Shanky is always a mess! Every FF's nemesis I tell you! I wonder what he did this time though!!And Sid part was really touching. I knew it from the beginning that he loved someone else but when he took off the ring, I almost fell in love with him. Just for going out of AR's way..LOL😆Armaan's adorable as usual with his humor, shirtless camps and witty retorts! Especially his friendship is something everyone would die for!!I have to say a lot about him but I think you can do with the jist: I love him.But my favorite character is Nikki. She's wild, funny, strong-willed and loving at the same time. I am a lot like her and so I think I just adore her. The way she cares about Armaan and Riddhima and her petty fights with Abhi and Muski, I want a friend like her!!She makes the entire fic look happy-go-lucky and makes it even more relatable.The story of them being childhood friends is quite filmy and to tell you the fact, I don't like filmy stuff a lot! But trust me, the way you write makes it feel more like a Mills and Boons writer than a dramatic CV and that is the reason I AM commenting here right now!!I know my facts aren't in chronological order but I'm just going with my stream of consciousness so bear the entire 1 then 5 then 2 philosophy!!The whole A letters and roses reminded me of Pretty Little Liars where A is the mystery! Except she's the bad gal there and Armaan's the *swoons* <<So random!!And the kiss on the cheek make me go☺️. I <3 itAs much as I sympathize with Nishita, I don't like her. I mean Riddhima should, for once, just live for herself than being the ever-so-benevolent lady! *Sigh* I just hope this isn't the main point behind AR separation!!Update soon, your preview is killing me!! Mere Armaan ko kuch hua toh I'll hunt you doown.*Evil Laugh*That's my comment. If you think it's short toh I'm really sorry! I'm seriously short on time! Junior year sucks!!Bisous,Neha
Ok, Despite all your blah-de-blahs about the comment being short, I found it one of the sweetest ones ever on my FF :D I had this Really BIG smile on my face after reading it !! *sigh*, you made my day Nehhuu Gadheri <3
Oooh You liked the Title?? 😲 Thats shocking 'coz its a real common one! But yeah, you're right..AR will be together after all nomatter what, because otherwise I wouldn't be writing this story LOL . And How did you know that he loved someone else??? 🤣 Thats weird because the loving some one else thing was a afterthought of mine :P
Ok so you like Riddhima, huh? Thank God *heaves a sigh of relief* Atleast Someone noticed how I made her totally different here! Heehee, yes, she is the Real Lover and not rotlu confused types..I like her that way :D Well yes, My writing style is filmy and is inspired from books I read/movies I see and jumbled up thoughts...Woah you thought it was like Mills and Boons? WOAHHOOO! Thank You! Thats the biggest compliment anyone ever gave me!
Well, The Nishita factor..Err, No, she isn't the reason why AR were separated,that would be real odd to show :P The separation reason will come soon, and then you'll HATE Shanky even more than you ever have :D LOL!
About Armaan, Uske baare mein kya kaheee, he's the best guy ever...Perfecto <3 I Just Love him yaar !! And I'm glad you do too <3 MUAH <3 Oh LOL You like Nikki? I loved her even way back in DMG! She was just so adorable <3
And About the Preview, No comments :D
Will try to update soon! Love you <3
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