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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
so much suspense!!
bt u r holding d whole story very well!!
i felt hell bad for abhay!!😭😭😭
bt then d way he managed d whole situation in college!!
n specially when pia got dat whole thing!!
n nw i m reli eager to knw who r two villians of ur story!!
do continue soon
thanx for d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: heena_mehta


so much suspense!!<>bt u r holding d whole story very well!!<>i felt hell bad for abhay!!bt then d way he managed d whole situation in college!!>n specially when pia got dat whole thing!!<>n nw i m reli eager to knw who r two villians of ur story!!>do continue soon<>thanx for d pm

.thanks a lot heena.ur comment really encourges me to write more.thanks 4 the lovely comment.wel wait 4 few more days chapt 8 wil reavel the villians n chapt 9 piya's secret.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: kuttu

Oh just caught up with the part sI missed. My God what is Pia she sounds scary. Does she have split personality or something. And who are these people waiting for to attack on Pia. Just waiting for the mystery to unfold.


nt a split personality dear.wel piya is nt wat c seems.c is dif n definitely powerful...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update! That's really weird that Piya can "smell" Abhay! Really eager to know the mystery behind Piya! Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Deepi20

<>Awesome update! That's really weird that Piya can "smell" Abhay! Really eager to know the mystery behind Piya! Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon


thanks 4 liking it.ya she is kind of weird.here c can smell abhay bt abhay cant smell her.there's a reason behind it in piya's past. Wait for it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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HI.. I just read all your chapters in one shot.. Nice story!! 👏Lot of suspense.. Who is Pia? Witch? Who are those mysterious persons.. why to kill Pia?

Loved Abhay's care of entering into room via her window! Pia could smell Abhay? What she really is??😕 You'll break it only on your 9th chap??😔

Please PM me the next time.. And continue soon, cant wait for the mystery to unfold..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

HI.. I just read all your chapters in one shot.. Nice story!! 👏Lot of suspense.. Who is Pia? Witch? Who are those mysterious persons.. why to kill Pia?

Loved Abhay's care of entering into room via her window! Pia could smell Abhay? What she really is??😕 You'll break it only on your 9th chap??😔

Please PM me the next time.. And continue soon, cant wait for the mystery to unfold..


go on wondering a lil bit dear.thanks a lot 4 the comment.i'l update the next chap 2day.n add me in ur buddy list for pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yes abhay will be there
awesome update
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 7:the first attack.

Piya was in the library thinking abt Abhay n smiling.she was attracted towards Abhay the moment she had set her eyes on him and she had been feeling special kind of betn him n herself since then.she knew everybody considered him strange and she herself was strange.so she thought of welcoming all the consequences and facing it bravely.she made up her mind to follow what her heart says.

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college was almost empty.abhay walked towards the parking lot.but something stopped him.he knew piya was still in the college.he could feel her presence.he didnt know why but he felt a strong urge to be with her today.he felt that she is going to be in danger and he must protecter her at any cost.he searched her.it was strange.though he could feel her presence he couldnt smell her.he could locate all humans with their smell but piya was different.he couldnt locate her coz he couldnt smell her.in piya's case it was just opposite she could smell him but he couldnt smell her at all.Finally he found her in the library.

she was staring into an empty space n smiling to herself.he looked at her angelic face.she was breathtakingly beautiful.he was devouring her beauty with his eyes.her smile was mesmerising.he wanted it permanently on her beautiful face.the spark in her eyes was making her face glow.he studied her long black curly hair,her baby brown eyes,her rosy lips,her fair complexion and silently admired her beauty.her beauty n her smile was captivating him.he couldnt take his eyes off her.she had awakened all the feelings that were buried deep inside him.she had made him feel human.now he knew why he had felt so happy,so comfortable and hopeful the day before.it was becoz of her,coz destiny had planned it for him to see her,meet her.she was a glow, a shining light in his dark life.he knew he was already folling for her.he knew she was the one destiny has decided.still he couldnt deny the fact that he was not a human,he was a monster a predator n also he couldnt throw maithli out of his heart.

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piya stepped out of her thought as the fragnance of Abhay activated her senses.she looked at the door n saw him staring at her.she looked at him the same way.no words were needed.their eyes were speaking and telling each other all the things that was there to say.it was just merely two days and they were spell bounded by each other.

Ruhi came out of nowhere and saw them staring at each other.she passed Abhay and stood near piya.

Ruhi:ahem...ahem...

piya broke her eyelock and blushed.

Ruhi:piya,misha ne phone kiya thha.ushne kaha ki madhu auntytumhe jaldi ghar bularahi hai.misha ne kaha ki tumhara phone nahi lagraha.

piya checked her phone.

Piya:oh! my phone...battery down oh s**t.mamma is gonna kill me.

piya hurried up n left.abhay had been feeling as if sth bad is gonna happen to piya so he decided to follow her.

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Piya was driving back home,when suddenly her car stopped.she got out of the car to have a look at it n found both of her front tyres punctured.little did she knew that it was a deliberate act,some1 wanted her to get alone in the lonely street.Piya was in great problem.on one hand her car was punctured n on the other the cell phone was out of battery.it was a lonely street and any vehicle barely passed it.she couldnt decide what to do.she still had a long way to reach her home..finally she decided to walk.

She had barely walked a few distance when she felt some1 following her.her sharp senses easily recognised the scent of abhay.he cant even fool me thought piya n smiled.she was abt to turn n call abhay when a loud scream of woman caught her attention.she followed the sound and walked towards the forest.soon she was in the middle of the dense forest.it was already evening time and she had to reach home but her problems didnt seem to end at all today.soon she was lost in the jungle.as she was deciding which way to go, she heard a loud growling sound.she was terrified.the whole forest air was filled with howling sound.she saw two dark shadows coming towards her.she tried to run away but her heels didnt support her.she looked back and saw two large wolves,larger than a lion with red glittering eyes were coming towards her.they had long sharp pointed teeth.these wolves were getting close to her.she got stuck in twigs of trees n fell down.she was afraid.she felt death approaching her..she could nothing except one name.she knew he was somewhere close to her.she called out...

ABHAYYY!!!...

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Abhay decided to follow piya.he thought of following her through jungle so she wouldnt see him.he saw her getting out of her car.she seemed depressed looking at her car n her phone.then he saw her car was punctured.he wanted to help her but didnt want her to know that he was following her.

then a cry of woman was heard.he could sense some danger n was abt to stop piya from entering the forest but b4 he could have stopped her she was already entering the forest.he was following her when he was stopped by the greatest enemy of his kind-a werewolf...

he knew it was a werewolf coz it was larger than the ordinary one n its stare was kike human's.piya was in danger he could sense it.he had to go to her bt the wolf was not letting him go.with a low snarl he retracted his fangs,his ocean deep blue eyes turned bright purple n his whole body bent into a predatory crouch.he transformed into his vampire form.

The werewolf pounced upon abhay.at hte same time abhay attacked him.they both were fighting with their inhuman strength and inhuman speed.only crashing of the trees were visible to normal human sight.but snarling and growling sound was growing louder and louder.finally abhay managed to hurt the werewolf,he was abt to stake him when he heard piya cry out his name...

He left the hurt werewolf and rushed towards piya.he saw two other werewolves ready to pounce upon piya.piya closed her eyes in terror.abhay tried to stop them humanly but they simply ignored him,a vampire and just focused on piya.that was unusual for a werewolf to ignore a vampire and attack a human.but those werewolves they just wanted piya...

He saw one of the werewolf push piya.she hit the nearby tree n faint.abhay couldnt control his rage.with all his might he pushed those two beasts.he didnt want anyone to touch his piya.he fought with all his strength.he wanted to hurt those who tried to hurt piya.finally he managed to hurt one of them and they retreated n dissappeared into forest.

He looked at piya.she was unconscious.he slowly removed her stuck leg from the twig.he brought water from the nearby spring and sprinkled on her face and made her drink some.she gained consciousness.she slowly opened her eyes n saw the face she wanted to see.she spoke in a low voice:''Abhay...''

Abhay placed his finger on her lips to restrict her to speak.

Abhay:Shh!!! dont say anything..

piya got silenced on his touch.he slowly held her up and she stood up on her legs.for a moment she was quiet but when all the happening of the past few minutes ,thwe wolves n their eyes rushed into her mind she got terrified n she trembeled with fear.abhay touched her shoulder and made her look at him and asked her to relax but she couldnt.she buried herself in his chest and cried bitterly. she tried to speak but her voice was stammerring.

Piya:wh...what wa-as th-that ab-bhay.(crying)i ...i th-hought i would die. if---if u werent th-ere,i would ha-ave been d-de-ad.

abhay embraced her tightly.

Abhay:piya just relax.i am here with u.nothing will happen to u when i m there with u.i m always0there 4 u piya and dont evep talk aboud dying.jst relax ok.0 the thought piia being dead pinched him hardly.he knew he wouldnt be able to bear the pain of her loss.her tears were breaking him down,''Piya plz dont cry,its killing me%'

hearyng this piya stopped crying.abhaq took her face in his hands and wiped out her tears.she buried herself in his chest and muttered''thank u Abhay''

''for what?''

''for being with me''

Abahy held her even more closely n tightly.piya felt that she was the luckiest girl when she was in his arms.it was her home her heaven.she wanted this moment to last forever.the same was the case with him.he couldnt let her go.when he held her in his arms he felt hope n felt like a human.for a moment he forgot what he was.he saw all his lonely years come to an end.he didnt want to let her go,he wanted to protect her forever.

piya gradually relaxed in his arms.his scent was filling and tickling her nerves.his scent n his presence,she felt as if she had been longing for it for years.

but the same scent was also making her insane.the more she inhaled the scent/the fragrance,the more she was close to him,the more she got maddened.she had been quick tempered since childhood(though she was generally gentle and sweet) but only abhay was affecting her so much.she loved him but some part of her hated him too...

they r finally falling in love with each other.

but

will their respective dark secret betray their love?

Precap:piya attacks Abhay.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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the werewolves want to kill Pia. pia loves abhay but why she hates him. what is she? i m confused.😕

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